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Published: 2015-05-04 15:38:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 14590; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 70
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With the great help ofΒ scootabyte.deviantart.com/ Β for correcting and rephrasing.Sorry my bad, i forger to correct stell, planed for wenesday.
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What does the letter have to do with finding a cutiemark? xD
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They think that she can get a cutiemark by being a thief (Which is NOT good for first impressions, if I might add XD )
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>Petty theft
Last I checked, stealing mail is a felony.
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"Found"? You stole it, you orange chicken! :-P
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I think a Cutie Mark in petty theft would be self defeating, everypony would be really suspicious of you making it hard to bet away with stealing anything.
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Come on, Bloom. Worst? Give yourself and your friends a little more credit. Don't understate the terribleness of some of your other ideas.
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That remind me the story With the cutiepox, bloomy had No problem to steal something in this time.
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Well, she grew up on that point. Unlike Sweetie Belle.
Really, she's cute and endearing and all, but her reaction in panel 4 makes me want to slap her in the face.
They've used Applebloom to steal something, and yet SB is basically "but we need iiiit ..." like a spoilt brat.
Just because they need it doesn't make it ok for them to steal. Even less fooling/forcing somepony into their plan.
Do they even know what could be in that letter? Would they like their correspondance to be snatched like that?
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Petty theft? Oh no, Apple Bloom. Tampering with the mail is quite, quite serious.
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Well beside the the mistype of "Steal" with "Stell" the whole comic is getting quite interesting. Will they give back the letter or will they try to deliver it themselves, I think it will be the latter
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Hey put it this way, at least you leveled up in pick pocketing and level it up enough you can carry more stuff...
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Funny enough some of the early names of King Sombra was Donut Steel.
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oh no scoots will not get a petty theft mark oh no unless this helps the world her cutie ark will be...... a blank flank *dun dun duuuuunnnnn*
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Egads!Β It's federal prison for you delinquents...
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Because they wanted a maillage cutie mark.
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Looks more like they wanted a pickpocket cutie mark!
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Correction planed for tomorow.
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Planned for tomorow, thank you.
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I was just about to say if she would get her Mark for this last page, but didn't...
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It's "Steal" not "Stell".
Also, totally loving this!
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Yes my proofreader tell me about this error, but i was so in a hury, i forget this one
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It's fine, don't worry about it too much! I'm not mad or anything, I just wanted to help out.
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I Know but thank you.
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this was low you three. bring back the letter to derpy for celestias sake.Β
as always. I adore your style
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Thank you so much.
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