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Published: 2016-11-18 10:08:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 6617; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 35
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As usual, if you find english mystake, please tell my, I will make the change as soon as I can.Thanks to: mustlovefrogs.deviantart.com/ and blazethepuppycat.deviantart.co… for the correction.
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discordcelestia [2016-11-19 00:27:02 +0000 UTC]
awww thats so sad but very well done you are very talented
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PhoenixFlambe [2016-11-18 16:46:17 +0000 UTC]
This is probably the first time I heard a young filly use that word.
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jeremy3 In reply to PhoenixFlambe [2016-11-18 16:52:27 +0000 UTC]
I understand, but I wanted Sweety to be really clear, even if it's out of character!
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blazethepuppycat [2016-11-18 16:19:08 +0000 UTC]
in the second panel it says cloody instead of cloudy
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jeremy3 In reply to blazethepuppycat [2016-11-18 16:26:17 +0000 UTC]
It's my favorite mystake, I really need to rename this character, thanks.
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blazethepuppycat In reply to jeremy3 [2016-11-18 18:40:03 +0000 UTC]
your welcome I love this comic sooooo much can't wait for the next part
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jeremy3 In reply to blazethepuppycat [2016-11-18 22:25:52 +0000 UTC]
Next part is planned for next week.
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ArcCahlon [2016-11-18 13:05:47 +0000 UTC]
be careful scoots. remember to rip it's eye out and feed it to the ground.
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jeremy3 In reply to ArcCahlon [2016-11-18 16:23:49 +0000 UTC]
The last pony who try to do this, need a good doctor now!
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ArcCahlon In reply to jeremy3 [2016-11-19 11:39:24 +0000 UTC]
oh we can call doctor whooves ^^
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jeremy3 In reply to ArcCahlon [2016-11-19 12:49:51 +0000 UTC]
Like he usually say, he's not this sort of doctor.😊
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ArcCahlon In reply to jeremy3 [2016-11-19 12:54:13 +0000 UTC]
well crap I know a Dr pepper....
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tigreanpony [2016-11-18 13:02:37 +0000 UTC]
This is getting interesting, keep up the great work I hope all three will be fine at the end of this. Looking forward to the next page.
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jeremy3 In reply to tigreanpony [2016-11-18 16:20:47 +0000 UTC]
Next part is planned for next week, I can't tell more without spoiling my comic, but thank for reading it.
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jeremy3 In reply to ROCuevas [2016-11-18 16:24:59 +0000 UTC]
And I hope the next parts will as intense than the past and present one.
See you next week for a new part.
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MustLoveFrogs [2016-11-18 12:22:29 +0000 UTC]
"You and Bloomy...your orders are starting to piss me off!"
Also, "Cloody". X3
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jeremy3 In reply to MustLoveFrogs [2016-11-18 16:18:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the correction.
And Cloudy have a master level for annoying people whit fire or electric argument.
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MustLoveFrogs In reply to jeremy3 [2016-11-18 22:19:26 +0000 UTC]
He's super effective against Flying types! :0
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SnoopyStallion [2016-11-18 11:25:04 +0000 UTC]
looking good. i wonder what will come next when do the others arrive XD aaaah XD
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jeremy3 In reply to SnoopyStallion [2016-11-18 11:56:59 +0000 UTC]
I can understand, so a little clue, the first rescue team come on page.... aaarrggghhhhhh ( sorry my spoiler alert sens stop me with a big punch )
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