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Yup. Old men just LOVE their tea in fancy floral china. XD I've avoided drawing Samos, because I think I shall save him for an actual 'on page' intro later.
I did consider changing the font for Uncle, so that you could tell the difference between him and Samos, but it's pretty obvious (for fans who know the Jak serise anyway).
Besides, in true Kumakura-san style - I'm gonna save the different font for Daxter and his lines...like Kir in the Jing manga (it suits! It SUITS!).
Erm...yup. No more old men and their ramblings for a while. S'just gonna be cute lil' kid pages coming up!
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Characters property of: Naughty Dog
Story and Art Property of: *Keysha-chan
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Jak is so cute as a boy, growing he becomes really handsome.
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And to think he was so Smolππ
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Oh man. I love this already! Your style is so adorable!
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This is probably the best explaination of why he has an uncle in the first game but finds out he's from the future in the sequel. Kudos to you
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I LOVE THE OLD-MAN CHINA! X3
Your steam-effects are too adorable. The little wispies in uncleβs cup make me giggle X3 AND YAY! Crosshatching on Uncleβs border! Its so sexy! O_o (only YOU couldβve once described an artistic technique as sexyβ¦ and it stuck. Badly. Yes. Lines are sekz.) Uncle himself looks awesome- isnβt it taxing yet fun to draw all the side-cast? Its like WOW Iβve never drawn you before. And youβre difficult! *growl* BUT YAY X3
LOVE how you blanked out the colors on Jak! And the ickle flowers in the background!
But oh dear god. Iβm sorry kai Im sorry IM SO SORRY but Jakβs full-on pose looks soβ¦ extremely provocative XD With the scrunchy shoulders and the heavenly oohed expression? Heβs like YEEEEAAAHH you want the little boy, huh, huh?! YEAH THE LITTLE BOY EEZ SEKKASAY. YOU WANT HIM-*BRICKED* β¦ Ow. (Although we wouldnβt put it past Alex X3;; Sheβd want him, 3 or 33. *SLAPPED*)
Iβm so sorry Iβm spamming you @_@ I NEED TO STOP!! (Sβlike asking Dax to stop talking, though o_o)
Ooh. OOH! FEATHER! And jeebus! The spidery little Japanese sound effect! I noticed it, I noticed, I did! <3 Sβprobly likeβ¦ WOOSH. If I could read Japanese X3 nyanya! Jak is SO cute andβ¦ clueless. Clueless little boi! NYANYA!
AND THE PLOT THICKENS o_o Uncle agrees to a name (it amazes me how artfully youβre summing this up X3) and a feather falls! AND STEAM GETSβ¦ STEAMED FROM STEAMY TEA!
This is so ultimately fun to read X3 seeing your view of things is pure gold! FAVIE DURH!! <3
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Oh, Jak looks so cute in the second to last panel there! 
I love thw way you did this, you are so good!
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Dude. O__O I never thought Uncle could be drawn like that.. XDD Go Uncle Go Uncle Go!!
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Daw...it's so fluffin cute!! I love how you do flowers, though I'm not really sure what kinda of comic-style it is. 
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Well...it is a manga-style comic. There's no way I'd place this as a western-style one, that's for sure.
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Aww SO CUTE! And the Uncle looks really great- I recognized him right away. ^_^
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I like how this comic is coming, love the Kid in the next to last panel ::squeals:: He's so adorable
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I'm loving this. 
~Keaton the Black Jackal
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Beautiful!! *notices feather* ehhehe is there an angel around??
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X3 'jolly good!'
I love that line X3
But d'awww ; ; little!Jak just melts my heart
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Yay cute little jak. 
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Yup yup!! Old men and floral china! XD 
Awwwwa!!
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Cute lil kids anymore? Awwies^w^ *whates for next page*
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Mew o_O... You even put katakanas for sound effects in there!
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yasies!!! It's coot!! young Jak just looks soooo innocent
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Gah! I love this so damn much! Little Jak is so adorable *paws at screen* The lineart and shading is to die for!
And I'm looking forward to seeing Daxter later on
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XD Am loving the Uncle's accent! And clueless kiddie Jak in the last panel is just so derned squishable.
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Aww, Jak is suce a cutie! Can't wait for more! ^_^
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Neeeaat~! Uncle looks pretty good! Can't wait ta see how you'll do Samos, tho' ^_~
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gah! xP itd be kickass if you went through and rocked the different fonts like ole yuichi... i was thinkin of doin that too, but im way toooooo lazyyy.
crappers kai, i love the 'oop!' lookin panel with jak...
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I love little Jak's face in the last pannel ^_^ You can almost see the 'Who? I'm Jak?' on his face
I look forwards to this - and to seeing how long you can cunningly keep samos out of frame ^_^
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