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KeyshaKitty — Jak and Dax dou. chpt4-pg18
Published: 2006-11-08 08:50:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 15372; Favourites: 181; Downloads: 44
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I feel almost bad that the first page in about a month has next to no spoken words...but with Daxter being the only one of the two that talks, and him just acting rather clueless, well...
ah well, story's still moving along. Damn, I hate snakes. X3
Tones: Pro and Copic Sketch Markers
Characters: Naughty Dog
Story and Art: *Keysha-chan
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Comments: 47
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the children look so adorable
That's gotta be one hungry snake! Thank goodness Jak saves Dax!
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Love that last panel! ^^ And the minimal use of color.
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Bad snake! Bad snake! You're getting all suspenseful on me! Don't let anything happen to my babies, Key-chan!
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wow their first monster XD They look so frightened!
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I like how you draw the snake's open mouth charge jump attack! =O That was a close call, but...it seems that they are surrounded by snakes... O__o ...but it looks like just one...meh! There may be snakes everywhere...
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Aw, poor little Jak, trying to yell out and save Daxter! ;.; Lucky he got to him in time, he's still a hero at a young age!
I like how you've made the snake red, that way it's easier to see, and it brings it out ^^
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Heh heh, where would Dax be without Jak?
I love the single red against the rest of this. Makes the snake look even more demonic.
xDD
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Jak once again saves the day as usual! man, i'd be peeing my pants if i was facing a lurker snake, too
i can't wait for the next page!!!
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X3 hahahahahahaha!!!
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YEAH! ALRITE! Ive been waiting foreeeeevvver for this page! YAYS! Well done! PARTY TIME!!!!!!!!
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TT__TT Snakes...
I really like how you worked the paneling and drew this, very nice job
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oh i freaked out. -_- *sighs with relief* Oh...man I hope they don't die...oh wait...the games. never mind. ^_^
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EVIL SNAKES! Anyway...Jak's so brave... *drools* You must work faster! J/k work as fast as you need.... But these take so long to make!
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i can't help but say they're cute, it'd be morally wrong not too, but i especially love the last pannel ^_^ *glompeth doujinshi*
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gaha how cute! i love it! the drawing is awesome and they're so adorable!!!!!!
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Very very cute!!!! 
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oh nooooo!!!
Jak awwww the poor thing *feeels no sympathy for Daxter*
awesome stuff
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No likey snakes? But they is so awesome...well, except those ones on planes. Damn snakes on a plane.
That said, excellent job as always. Still enjoy how there's only one set of color aside from the many grays. It really brings the snake to life and in full center.
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awsome pic i love the panneling, its really nice
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Yay! AN update! Great job again, i love the style! I hope you update soon!
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YAY! I've been waiting a whole month for the next installment of this comic! Great job, some times you just have to push a comic to keep going.
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do you really hate snakes? i didn't know that, i LOVE em! nice motion, it's hard to do action sequences like this and you've pulled it off wonderfully! that beautiful red and grey aswell, it just makes the strip pop!
that last panel is just to die for tho! the snake all coiling around the branch as an ever present threat and the two boys shivering and scared to death in the foreground, highlighted by a few strokes to elevate the fear factor.
and here i fall into my normal pattern of screaming at daxter and smooshing his cheeks cause he's just SO CUTE when he's all clueless about his impending doom!!
this is great Kai! oh and i've undated the jak-X comic thingie bte, stayed up late doing it and all. bring on the meeting darling!
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I saw your comic, but accidentally deleted its notification...so sorry I'm too lazy to go back through and find it, but good job, I liked the water effect, I can't tell if there were any individual problems with the white pen spilling, so great job on the fix! Keep up the good work, its neat to see you and the other jak comic artists giving each other comments. (I need to find one to give me comments on space pirate comics! [link] )
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they looks scared. mebbe it has something to do with the big scaly snakebeastie.
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waow!amazing!!yaaay Jak,Daxter warniiiiing!!!arg!lol
i love it 
I hate snake to >.<
ps: heey i'm first in coment your deviation!ihihi!!yay!lol
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your panneling is really good. :3 shows the flow of action nicely and just makes sense. i know some comics i read have really naff pannelling where you re not entirely sure where you re supposed to read next... but this is pretty good :3 i love your jak and daxter doujin ^^ your art's really cute and i love all the details you put in
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Oh, that's one of my pet griefs with some comics. The art and layout idea is amazing, but the panneling just becomes too hard to follow for some of them, and it just winds up annoying. Glad you find mine easy to follow! ^^
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yeah it is very hard for people to get it right really. but a few people just get it. i spose it s cos they practice and that i guess :3 i know i need to practice more... just i m lazy 
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