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Published: 2013-08-23 21:51:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 39862; Favourites: 1798; Downloads: 931
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If you really can't see how weird and flat-out stupid your previous comment was. then I can't even begin to try to explain it to you.
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Aggressive and insulting ... that's ok.Β Well since you seem to not want to say why.Β I will just have to take a guess.
Hmmm.. reading it again.Β I tried to read it with the idea that it was creepy.Β It actually made me laugh a bit, but hey.Β To each there own.Β Still, I guess you might find it creepy cause everywhere he turned.Β Girl pony were blocking his path with the soul intent to tie him down and have their way with him to fill some primal lust that seems to occur now every now and then.Β
Now do the the low number of visible males, animal instinct to find the best mate and well generalized shipping.Β I did pair Mac up with quite a few of them.Β He is a big boy.Β I am sure he can handle them.Β I could have been worse buy changing the ending to were Braburn comes to his help.Β Nothing against that ship type.Β Just not my style.
Still, I guess you did not the humor to it.Β That's fine.Β I am just replying like this cause you seemed very aggressive towards my request to why you thought it was creepy.Β More words were needed to know what I might need to change for the future then "you just made my creepy-meter explode".Β
So if I guess it, then yay me.Β If not, feel free to indulge my curiosity or not.Β It's up to you.Β Great art though.Β
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dude, look at what you have just typed, and try to read from the point of view of someone who has no idea what you're talking about.
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Done... just asked as simple question about why you thought what I originally posted was creepy to you.Β You got mad (sounded mad) and insulting about my original post being weird and flat-out stupid.Β So then I took a wild guess at to answer the question I asked you in the first place.Β Β That again, you did not want to answer.
Now you say you don't understand.Β Soooo, chocking this up as a either a failed attempt to get feedback about my little story.. or.... chock this up to another troll attack.Β Either way.Β Done!Β Thanks for reading my creepy, weird and stupid post.Β Sorry it made you go ewwww.Β
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your story was terribly written, horribly punctuated, represented the characters poorly, and was nothing short of one of the most inane things I've ever read.
There's your critique.
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Thank you!Β Was that to hard grumpy?Β
Now don't claim to be a writer and I am sure you would say that I definitely am not one but, I always like feedback.Β Good or Bad!Β
Ya, I see some of the punctuation errors you mentioned.Β I don't know if it was that poorly written, as it was a quick write not meant to be taken seriously.Β As for the chars, ya that's not how I think of them naturally.Β Though for the idea I was trying to go for, they needed to be a bit out of character.Β
As for most inane, well sorry it was not enjoyable for you.Β I do again thank you for the feedback.Β I read through a couple times before posting these things, but not always great at catching errors.
Well, thanks again and hope if you ever read another one of my stories (which are not all about pony sex or romance).Β That you enjoy it.Β
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the fact that even some of them are about that and you openly admit it concerns me
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Well actually none of them get to the point sex. The ones that involve any type of suggestive nature to them. Are like this. No actual description of the actual acts. I don't write porn. Though if you are curious. I do invite you to look at some of my stuff if you want. Just look at my favs trinson.deviantart.com/favouri⦠for the pictures I did post something to.  I did do a nice little back story to an artists mothers day strip, that was liked by the artist and one I did about tragic accident. Still, I tend to get shippy at times.
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It's Adventure Time!
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lovely framing of the characters, the expressions are great and I love the colr in the piece, but the pose of the smaller character I think is too different, I would normally reserve that pose for a humorist or stick some of gag...
But I still think it's a wonderful piece...
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Oh dear
I like the poses and their faces 
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So I'm not the only one who's getting an Atryl vibe here.
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Nope, but it's a great vibe 
Seeing them like this "vibe", makes it pretty interesting and cool
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Atryl is one of the big pony artists out there, right? Seems like it sometimes.
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I guess he is, but I also believe that KP-ShadowSquirrel is one of the best as well
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Thank you :3
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Love this one! Wonderful style and the expressions are perfect.
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Big Mac it's time to do what I do whenever I see something like this. Run, run very fast and very far.
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Cheerilee's rockin' the Anthro today, but only for her upper torso.
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He forgot her birthday. He was too busy thinking about nails.
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Corre big mac, corre por tu vida
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What time? The one, which mares get few times a year? Hm... something tells me that Cheerilee is going to be quite..ekhm, rough on Big Mac.
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Well it's...quite literal answer. Thanks
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lol sorry, I was just being random
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School. There is nowhere to hide. You cannot escape it. For it lives inside you.
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Oh he maybe need a skin transplantation in some lower areas after the Season
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RUUUUUN! JUST DON'T LOOK BACK AND RUN!
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somehow cherilee reminds me of the style of atryl, maybe you could try to improve the background, but oh well, once i get enough skill i will say, good work squirrel
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Hum...so you want critique?
Okay, I will try.
Simple yet efficent background. It is just to give a feeling the stuation is not happening in the void, so good enought.
Now, Big Mac. Great expression, great ankward pose. It speaks by itself.
However, Cherilee kinda bothers me. I would say that is not a standing pony, but an Antho. The proportions are completely different. Her body is flat, shoulders are much broader and neck is shorter. HOWEVER...if you DO draw her with the pony proportions...you will get a very odd creature. Not sure how to solve it, thought...
Somebody has pointed out that her pose and the chest hair make her look quite manly, but I think that may have been your intention. Perhaps.
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Thank you for your critique
Yes, this is a curious combination of element, but to me that's what makes this picture so funny
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Press the critique button right before the comments section.
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I thought about doing so. But I had no idea what Rating I should give. So I ended using a normal comment.
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Looks great. Their expressions say everything.
Darth Cygnus
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YouΒ΄re welcome.
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Cheerilee's gone anthro, RUN!!!!
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