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Gunfire criss-crossed the battlefield. A high pitched whistle signaled the arrival of a mortar barrage. The two echidnas, members of the Dark Egg Legion, ducked behind the ruins of a wall, moments before the first shell exploded. Debris was thrown into the air. The two troopers rose as the explosions died away. Using the smoke and settling dust as cover they moved forward. One of the legionnaires paused for a moment. There was movement up ahead. Advancing cautiously, they came to the burnt out remains of a vehicle, but they couldn't find the source of the movement. Suddenly a voice came from behind the troopers, followed by the sound of a gun being cocked."Drop your weapons, and turn around slowly."
The two echidnas dropped their weapons. Turning, they found themselves face to face with a battle scarred skunk. He had his gun trained on them.
A whistling sound filled the air again, and another barage of mortar fire sent up more plumes of smoke and dirt as they exploded nearby. Everyone staggered, and one of the legionnaires tried to make a move, but the skunk was too fast.
"Don't even try." He said as he backhanded the trooper.
A flash, followed closely by the sharp crack of a gun came from behind the skunk. His eyes went wide, and his arm dropped. The gun slipped from his fingers, and he fell forward. The legionnaires saw a smoking hole in his back. They looked up and saw an amazing sight. Striding through the clouds of smoke and dust was the Captain... Kiara-Ne! She had her gun in her hand, and her bionic eye glowed bright red. Her mouth was held in a vicious smile.
"Well... What are you waiting for?" She said as she approached. "Do you want to live forever? MOVE OUT!!"
The two Dark Egg Legion troopers jumped at her words. They grabbed their guns and ran off to continue their missions.
Kiara-Ne watched as the legionnaires ran off before glancing at the body of the skunk. She breathed in deeply, taking a moment to savour the sights, sounds, and smells of the battleground. Her smile widened. It was a glorious day to be a Legionnaire!
I know I've used this song in reference to another picture, but if there was ever a song that would become Kiara-Ne's theme song it is this one: Indestructibe by Disturbed. [link]
Base by Meganthehedgechidna
Kiara-Ne is my fan/original character.
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Poor skunk probably had a family. I truly hate evil characters, especially the ones who kill.
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Kiara-Ne may be evil, but I have two other characters who are even worse: Scar [link] [link] and his lover Vex [link] [link]
they sees themselves as agents of chaos and anarchy [link]
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(ScarTheCat is my other account)
Well they would certain be met with a challenge if they fought Magnum [link] . He's completely no-nonsense and gets the job done with lightning-fast efficiency. But he has a soft spot for another very well known A.I.
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Nice.
I like the EMP weakness. My main character Wolfen [link] once robotocized [link] Eventually he regained his free will and helped by performing sabotage missions. On one mission, he and four other free will Robians were going to plant an EMP bomb in a factory when it detonated prematurely. Wolfen was the only survivor. The EMP had badly damaged his body and wiped all of his memories. He was rescued by the freedom fighters and what remained o his personality was downloaded into a computer while his body was repaired, and a new brain built for him. When the Bem derobotocized the planet, Wolfen was returned to normal except for his brain. because it was no longer the original organ it could not be turned into a flesh and blood organ. Even today with his bionic brain, Wolfen has a weakness when it comes to EMPs. (***Note*** Scar is the anti version of Wolfen)
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Thanks.
It would have to be a powerful, concentrated electromagnetic wave that was completely centered on him for it to work. His armor is made out of Neutronium, a completely non-reactive, non-conductive material. His eyes are also made of a very low-conductive material, but that's where you would have to center the EM Wave on. The trick is actually hitting him with it. He's a lot more agile than he looks.
I have one human character named Rooks, and he suffers from a 60% robotization. It was two Mobians that saved him from the last 40%. He hates Eggman. He's a monster on a battlefield. But he won't hurt a Mobian or Anti-Mobian, whether they're good or evil.
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You're welcome.
So he has a form of insulation. Nice.
Nice. It sounds very well though out.
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Max "I wonder what this DEL group is up to I don't recall seeing these members before I left the Dark Legion"
said Max as he was on one of his adventures,
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Kiara-Ne (Walking along muttering to herself): Just you wait. I find a way to make you mine. And then... (She pauses, hearing movement nearby)
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Max(was using his cybernetic dreadlock to get a better look at the DEL group he's never seen before): man I don't know who these people are but if their working with Eggman so they can't be good even if they are fellow Echdnas(he said as he was trying to get a good look at who he thought wasthe leader of the group)
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Kiara-Ne (Sneaks around. Sees a male Echidna spying on her troops. She draws her gun and moves forward) Freeze! (She jams her gun against the stranger's temple) Who are you?
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Max(was wondering where the person he thought was the leader went to and then)aw please don't shot me I'm just an Adventurer(he said as he was turning to face the stranger)but I do wonder who are you I don't recall seeing you or any of your troops in the Dark Legion before I Max the Ecidna left the group because of Grandmaster Kragok(he said to the female Echidna)
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Kiara-Ne: You were in the Legion? (Grabs at Max's cybernetic dreadlock and looks at it) Hmmm. This does look like Legion manufacture. (Gives Max a curious look) I'm from the Legion old, yet I don;t recall seeing you. What platoon were you with?
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Max(looked at her new cybernetics wondering if Eggman would detonate the bomb in them at any momoent)well I was once Commander of the fist platoon under Kommisser Lien-Da sister of Grandmaster Kragok(he said trying not to show any fear)I don't recall seeing your platoon before which platoon are you from?
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Kiara-Ne: First Platoon? Well I'm Kiara-Ne. Captain of the 14th Assault Platoon. Both old Legion, and the new Dark Egg Legion under Grandmaster Lien-Da. (Aims her gun at Max again) So... You're a deserter are you...
(Note: The 14th Assault Platoon belongs to bawls34 . You should check out the stories he writes. Especially the story Legionnaire. He has used Kiara-Ne in some of them)
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Max: well you can call me a deserter if you want but I'll let you know the reason I left was because of Kragok's actions agenst Echidnaopolis. oh and Docter your working for isn't the real deal if your wondering at all(he said looking her in the eye). as for this 14th Assault Platoon I don't recall such a unit in the Legion before I left an....wait did you say Lien-Da is the Grandmaster?,
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Kiara-Ne: Yes she is. But if I have my way... As for Eggman, well, sacrifices have been made. But the Legion will endure. We will regain our rightful place. I'll see to that! (Gives Max a sly smile) I'm not surprised you haven't heard of my platoon. In the Legion of old, we were more an elite, 'deep strike' unit. Hush, hush stuff.
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Max: really thats good to hear. you don't understand the Eggman we've been fighting or helping depending on which side your on anyway he isn't from are Zone. well I hope are rightful place will be what I hope it is. well I may have been Lien-Da's right hand man back in the day but there were things not even I was told. really maybe thats why I never hear of your platoon before(he said giving her a smile).
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Kiara-Ne: Every organization has it's secrets. (She eyes off Max) Would you be interested in rejoining us?
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Max: yes yes they do. that deapends(he whispered in her ear) only if we can kill Eggman some day in the future and only if Lien-Da and Gae-Na don't know I'm coming back(he said looking serrieous)
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Kiara-NE: Heh heh heh. I like your thinking. (Puts an arm around Max's shoulder) I can keep secrets too. So... Interested?
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Max: yes I'm interested but only if you agrea to my terms(he said keeping an eye on her arm).
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Kiara-Ne (She twirls Max's cybernetic dreadlock in her fingers and whispers in his era): I think I can agree to that. (She gives a short laugh)
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Max: alright then so we have a deal?(he said looking a little unsure about her). so were do we begain?,
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Kiara-Ne (Chuckles): First I need to integrate you into the 14th. I'll arrange a uniform for you. I also need to know what your capabilities are. (She strokes Max's cheek) I want to know what you can do for me... (She turns and walks away slightly before looking back at him) Coming?
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Max
I'm also a great pilet.
my dreadlock implant enables me to hack into computers I can also make it into my comlink it also has a scanner built into it.
as for these babies(he said as he took his gloves off showing his cybernetic hands)they make me nearly as strong as Knuckles so I'm a pretty good fighter in hand to hand combat.
I'm also a good shot(he said as he took out his stun blaster).
pluse I know more about Angel Island and the Mystic Ruins then anyone else who's been in the Legion.
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Kiara-Ne (Sinister chuckle): Very nice. Very nice indeed. I can see you will be very useful. (She stops suddenly and turns around. Max bumps into her and for a moment they are nose to nose. Kiara-Ne looks like she is about to kiss him, but she smiles instead and takes his gun from him. She backs up and twirls it in her hands) Nice weapon. Has good balance and feels comfortable. (She tosses it back to Max)
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Max: thank you its an original stun madle I clean it every day and I modify myself(he said as he put his blaster back intohis gun holder).
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Kiara-Ne: I can see you will fit right back into the Legion. (Laughs) You're going to be very special for me. A secret weapon so to speak. (She gently runs a hand across Max's cheek)
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Max: oh I think I should let you know there aren't any bombs in my implants sense there old implants.
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Kiara-Ne (Her bionic eye focuses on Max's bionics): So I can see. I've made sure mine were removed as well. In secret of course.
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Max: really(he whispered into her ear)then the Doc doesn't stand a chace if you let me at him at the right time(he said with an evil smile). between you and me I can never forgive him for what he's done to are people.
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Kiara-Ne (Her bionic eye glows a deep red): Do what I need of you, and I will get you access to Eggman. (She give a short sinister laugh) Then we can get the Legion back to how it should be.
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Max: thats good to hear.as Legion I'm not to sure about trying to take over Mobius but then again its not my part to say what Grandmaster Lien-Da wants.
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Kiara-Ne: Grandmaster Lien-Da... (A dark looks comes over her face)
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Max: well Lien-Da has all rights to the Legion as long as she's alive right?
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Kiara-Ne: Technically, yes. (Dismisses the subject with a wave of her hand)
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Max: I guess I will need a new outfit in order to be a member of the Legion right?
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Kiara-Ne: I can arrange one for you.
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Kiara-Ne: I have a mission for you. It will be the first step to the re-emergence of the Legion as a proper force.
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Max: alright what is the mission?
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Kiara-Ne: I have my eyes on a weapon of immense power. I will have it. But, it comes in two parts...
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