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Gunfire criss-crossed the battlefield. A high pitched whistle signaled the arrival of a mortar barrage. The two echidnas, members of the Dark Egg Legion, ducked behind the ruins of a wall, moments before the first shell exploded. Debris was thrown into the air. The two troopers rose as the explosions died away. Using the smoke and settling dust as cover they moved forward. One of the legionnaires paused for a moment. There was movement up ahead. Advancing cautiously, they came to the burnt out remains of a vehicle, but they couldn't find the source of the movement. Suddenly a voice came from behind the troopers, followed by the sound of a gun being cocked."Drop your weapons, and turn around slowly."
The two echidnas dropped their weapons. Turning, they found themselves face to face with a battle scarred skunk. He had his gun trained on them.
A whistling sound filled the air again, and another barage of mortar fire sent up more plumes of smoke and dirt as they exploded nearby. Everyone staggered, and one of the legionnaires tried to make a move, but the skunk was too fast.
"Don't even try." He said as he backhanded the trooper.
A flash, followed closely by the sharp crack of a gun came from behind the skunk. His eyes went wide, and his arm dropped. The gun slipped from his fingers, and he fell forward. The legionnaires saw a smoking hole in his back. They looked up and saw an amazing sight. Striding through the clouds of smoke and dust was the Captain... Kiara-Ne! She had her gun in her hand, and her bionic eye glowed bright red. Her mouth was held in a vicious smile.
"Well... What are you waiting for?" She said as she approached. "Do you want to live forever? MOVE OUT!!"
The two Dark Egg Legion troopers jumped at her words. They grabbed their guns and ran off to continue their missions.
Kiara-Ne watched as the legionnaires ran off before glancing at the body of the skunk. She breathed in deeply, taking a moment to savour the sights, sounds, and smells of the battleground. Her smile widened. It was a glorious day to be a Legionnaire!
I know I've used this song in reference to another picture, but if there was ever a song that would become Kiara-Ne's theme song it is this one: Indestructibe by Disturbed. [link]
Base by Meganthehedgechidna
Kiara-Ne is my fan/original character.
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Comments: 1446
MetalNazo In reply to ??? [2011-04-20 19:00:41 +0000 UTC]
Max: really? well I guess you want me to find the parts then right
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-21 07:38:54 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: That's right. The first part is a special golden looking gauntlet...
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-21 17:49:34 +0000 UTC]
Max: whats the secound part?
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-22 02:09:44 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: The Gauntlet's owner... A gery wolf. That's the best part. Find the wolf, and you'll find the Gauntlet. (Laughs) I need them both though. For some reason, only the wolf can use the Gauntlet. Together they make a potent weapon.
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-22 02:14:24 +0000 UTC]
Max: well if the mission can bring me closer to taking down Eggman then I'll do
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-22 03:05:46 +0000 UTC]
Max: so were is this Wolf?
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-22 03:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: he's travels around, but... (Hands Max a small device) You can lock in on his brainwaves with this.
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-22 03:20:53 +0000 UTC]
Max: thank you I bet he won't see a purple Echidna coming after him
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-22 05:57:49 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: Don't be too cocky. Wolfen is not an opponent to be taken lightly.
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-22 06:02:02 +0000 UTC]
Max: I never take my opponents lightly
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-22 07:02:51 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: Good. (She pulls her top down a fraction to reveal an old scar) Because he will make you pay if you do.
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-22 17:10:54 +0000 UTC]
Max: I understand I shall depart ASAP
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-23 02:34:48 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: If you need any assistance, contact me. (She give him a small piece of paper) This has a secure frequency straight to me. (She taps her head) I'll get your message.
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-23 02:37:21 +0000 UTC]
Max: OK then I'll see you when my mission is compleate I will not fail
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-23 03:21:11 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: I'm sure you wont...
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-23 04:54:48 +0000 UTC]
Max: see you in awhile boss(and with that Max took off to find his target)
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-23 05:39:44 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: Good luck Max... (Thinks to herself: This could turn out better than I've planned)
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-23 05:44:29 +0000 UTC]
Max: I wonder were this guy is and why she needs those things...all well if it brings me closer to taking out Eggman with my own two robotic hands then I'm willing to help her out(Max thought to himself as he was running to the area he was sent to)
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-23 06:10:11 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne (Thinking as she watches her troops train): I wonder if I should follow him. Wolfen can be a hand-full at times...
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-23 17:16:36 +0000 UTC]
Max: I wonder were this Wolfen guy is hiding?
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-23 23:28:01 +0000 UTC]
(Not far away, a wolf is walking along. On his right hand he wears a golden gauntlet)
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-24 02:04:26 +0000 UTC]
(Max was scaning the area for the Wolf and the Gauntlet)Max: I wonder were this guy is hiding(he thou to himself while scaning)
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-24 06:22:25 +0000 UTC]
The wolf (Wolfen): Now lets see. Where am I... (He checks a map)
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-24 22:56:12 +0000 UTC]
Max: wait I'm picking up a life form close bye(he said as his scanner picked up Wolfen)
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-25 00:45:20 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Puts the map away and continues to walk. As he nears Max, he pauses. Wolfen looks around suspiciously): Who's there?
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-25 00:48:17 +0000 UTC]
(Max stay hidden when he thought Wolfen spooted him)
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-25 02:03:33 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Sniffs the air): Come out. Who are you? (Looks around carefully)
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-25 02:08:31 +0000 UTC]
Max with his Stun blaster ready took aim and locked onto Wolfen: I'M HERE!(he said as he tied to hit Wolfen in the right side of his body)
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-25 03:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Reacts. The blast hits the gauntlet sending energy crackling along it.): WHAT!! (Wolfen takes up a fighting stance. He looks at Max and sees his bionics. Wolfen growls angrily) Who are you? You're a Dark Egg Legion crony aren't you?!
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-25 06:02:55 +0000 UTC]
(Max silently attacked Wolfen with his Stun blaster).
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-25 07:47:01 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Scrambles, trying to give himself some room): Kiara-Ne is behind this isn't she. ANSWER!
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-25 07:51:04 +0000 UTC]
Max: all I can say is if I get you I can kill Eggman for what he's done to my people
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-25 08:00:06 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen: You don't have to do this. If Kiara-Ne is behind this, you're just selling your soul. You think she cares for you? What you want?
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-25 08:10:30 +0000 UTC]
Max: all I want is to see Eggman's head being smashed by my hands(he said looking crazy)
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-25 08:30:25 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Bows his head) Then why align with the Dark Egg Legion. There are other options. Go to the Kingdom of Acorn. Ask for their help. (Looks up at Max) The path you're on now will only destroy you. I should know. I've suffered so much at Eggman's hands
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-25 08:32:24 +0000 UTC]
Max: I'm old school Legion boy(he said as he dilived a powerful blow to he chest with his hands)
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-25 09:40:53 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Rides Max's blow): Then my condolences to you. (Wolfen slips in close and punches Max across the jaw)
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-25 20:29:59 +0000 UTC]
Max(went flying 6FT in the air): not bad Wolfie(then Max punched the ground which sent a shake towards Wolfen)how did you like that(Max then fired his blaster to try and hit Wolfen).
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-26 00:22:13 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Struggles to keep his feet as the ground shakes. A blaster shot strikes his shoulder spinning him around): Ugh! (He tries to recover and shoulder charges Max)
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-26 05:27:16 +0000 UTC]
Max(dodges Wolfen and hits him with all his might): take that.
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-26 05:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Grunts in pain and staggers): You have some skill. Why waste them with the Dark Egg Legion? (He charges. At the last moment he spins around Max and hits him twice. Once in the kidneys and once in the back of the head)
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-26 14:20:25 +0000 UTC]
Max(was in pain but he refused to show it): thanks but I'm not done yet. as for the Legion I'm just using my old group to get close to Eggman so I can kill him. and an anwser to your old quesion on the Acorns I've tried them before they wouldn't let me kill Eggman if I sided with them so thats why I'm with my old allies(Max them through a flash grenade at Wolfen and while Wolfen was blined Max hit Wolfen in his gut and head a few times to try and KO Wolfen).
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-27 08:20:45 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Hits the ground. He rolls to the side, trying to avoid Max): The old Legion is just as bad as the current one. 'Allies' like that are nothing to boast about. (Wolfen gets to his feet) Kiara-Ne is just using you.
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-28 02:40:09 +0000 UTC]
Max: all I know is if I get you I can kill Eggman for what he did pluse you weren't there when my people where having there life force drained from there bodys by the Egg Grapes(he said with great anger)now its time for you to come with me pal
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-28 07:09:10 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen: I don't think so. (A look of great loss fills Wolfen's eyes) And you weren't there when he took over the kingdom. You never saw the look on peoples faces as they were robotocized. I was. I saw it all. (Angry) Do you know the fear and horror of being locked in a robotocizer? How it feels to have your body turned into a robot? (Wolfen grabs Max by the throat) Sure you've suffered, but you're not the only one. (He throws Max to the ground)
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-28 07:27:18 +0000 UTC]
Max: ROBOTOCIZED! the DR Robotnik who did all that isn't the guy I'm going to kill the guy I'm going to kill is from another Zone you ideot and he enjoys killing people THE PEOPLE OF ANGEL ISLAND SUFFERED MORE THEN THE PEOPLE OF ACORN EVER DID!!!
while the Acorns were being robotocized and later derobotocized my people and the people of Angel Island suffered and died because Eggman wanted the island for himself.
because of that MONSTER! 90% of all my people are dead all those children and women dead there are only a few houndread Echidnas left in all of Mobius.
while every other Mobian race has over thousands of there kind all around Mobius my people live in fear every day in the ruins of Albion because of EGGMAN!.
my people had a city unlike any other race in Mobius until Eggman made the Dingos into his pawns because of him my people can never live in Echidnaopolis ever again.
you think the DR you know is evil you've never seen evil until you spend a day with that MONSTER!(Max yelled as he was fighting Wolfen with all his might).
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-29 06:49:19 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen (Dodges Max's attacks. He maneuvers to give himself room. He speaks in a quiet, calm voice): I know all about other Zones and dimensions. Eggman... Robotnik... Call them what you like, they're still the same person. I've experienced this first hand. Did Kiara-Ne tell you about Scar? Did she tell you why she would prefer to have me as a slave? Scar and I represent the same thing as Eggman and Robotnik. He is me from another dimension. You say I don't know evil? (Wolfen vanishes. Suddenly his voice comes from behind Max, echoing in Max's ear) You're wrong. Scar is evil of the worst kind. Eggman may have killed 90% of your people, but if Scar ever decided it would be fun, 90% of LIFE on Mobius would cease to exist! (Wolfen vanishes from behind Max and reappeared in front of him) I could have destroyed you from the start. My Gauntlet has almost god like powers. But I'm not interested in killing. Scar however wouldn't have hesitated. Kiara-Ne is just as dangerous. If she controlled me, then things would be no better. (He raises his hand. A green glow builds up around the Gauntlet, and a ball of energy forms) Is this how you want things to go down? (Wolfen lets the energy dissipate. He holds out his arms, opening himself up to be attacked) The choice is yours.
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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-29 07:33:11 +0000 UTC]
Max: you still don't get it the reason why Eggman is here is because everyone from his Zone is gone.
his worlds Sonic.....his worlds Sally....the old King of Acorn from his world gone....everyone on his version of Mobius is gone he killed them using a strike canon from space just for the fun of it.
when everyone from that version of Mobius came to their version of Mobotropolis everyone died the King his son his wife his daughter their all gone everyone but NICOLE and Eggman are all gone.
knowone else from that version of Mobius is alive to tell the tail of what happened.
I only know these things because I haked into the Eggnet when the DR was losing his marbels.
I know my people and many others on Mobius have died because of Eggman..I hate that man for everything he's done.
I hate him for killing everyone in his Zone just for kicks.....I hate him for using the Dingo's to kill my people......I hate him for what he did to my kind and many other people on Mobius.....I hate him for turning the Legion into a laughing stoke...............................................I hate him most of all for taking away everything that mattered to me.
I understand that what I'm doing is just to get revenage for what he did.
but I can never forgive him as easily as those stupid Acorns and Freedom Fighters have for what he's done its one thing to forgive a person for a small crime but what he's done can never be forgiven.
if you ask me the Acorns should have killed him when they had the chanse now he's just making fun of what little of my people are left and using their name to take over Mobius.
when I get my hands on him he won't be able to weasel his way out as he has in the past when I can get to him however I can I'm going to end what he started two years ago.
but if your saying you are willing to help me get the Eggman then I'll be happy to help you out wather then that Echidna I don't trust
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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-29 08:03:39 +0000 UTC]
Wolfen: I'll help you to a point. I wont kill him, but I will get you to him. You giving me to Kiara-Ne would not have worked. Once you handed me over, she would have had no more use for you.
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