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Description Gunfire criss-crossed the battlefield. A high pitched whistle signaled the arrival of a mortar barrage. The two echidnas, members of the Dark Egg Legion, ducked behind the ruins of a wall, moments before the first shell exploded. Debris was thrown into the air. The two troopers rose as the explosions died away. Using the smoke and settling dust as cover they moved forward. One of the legionnaires paused for a moment. There was movement up ahead. Advancing cautiously, they came to the burnt out remains of a vehicle, but they couldn't find the source of the movement. Suddenly a voice came from behind the troopers, followed by the sound of a gun being cocked.
"Drop your weapons, and turn around slowly."
The two echidnas dropped their weapons. Turning, they found themselves face to face with a battle scarred skunk. He had his gun trained on them.
A whistling sound filled the air again, and another barage of mortar fire sent up more plumes of smoke and dirt as they exploded nearby. Everyone staggered, and one of the legionnaires tried to make a move, but the skunk was too fast.
"Don't even try." He said as he backhanded the trooper.
A flash, followed closely by the sharp crack of a gun came from behind the skunk. His eyes went wide, and his arm dropped. The gun slipped from his fingers, and he fell forward. The legionnaires saw a smoking hole in his back. They looked up and saw an amazing sight. Striding through the clouds of smoke and dust was the Captain... Kiara-Ne! She had her gun in her hand, and her bionic eye glowed bright red. Her mouth was held in a vicious smile.
"Well... What are you waiting for?" She said as she approached. "Do you want to live forever? MOVE OUT!!"
The two Dark Egg Legion troopers jumped at her words. They grabbed their guns and ran off to continue their missions.

Kiara-Ne watched as the legionnaires ran off before glancing at the body of the skunk. She breathed in deeply, taking a moment to savour the sights, sounds, and smells of the battleground. Her smile widened. It was a glorious day to be a Legionnaire!


I know I've used this song in reference to another picture, but if there was ever a song that would become Kiara-Ne's theme song it is this one: Indestructibe by Disturbed. [link]


Base by Meganthehedgechidna

Kiara-Ne is my fan/original character.
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MetalNazo In reply to ??? [2011-04-29 19:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Max: well thank you for the warning man. thats good that you won't kill Eggman thats going to be my job when the time comes. I know there wasn't something right with her it didn't help her that I've never had any records of her group of the old Legion in my data base. so how are you going to help me get to Eggman?(he said not bing to sure of Wolfen's help)

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-29 22:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: I... I have a cybernetic brain. A legacy of when I was robotocized. Most of my memories were wiped out in an accident, but I still have some partial access codes locked away in here. (He taps his head) If the codes don't work, I can still delve into cyberspace and hack my way in.

(A crimson shot streaks out of nowhere. It strikes Wolfen in the shoulder and spins him around. A sultry female voice, dripping with menace comes from the treeline not far away)

Voice: TRAITOR! YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BRING THE WOLF TO ME! NOT MAKE AN ALLIANCE!!

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-30 04:05:09 +0000 UTC]

Max(fired at the the voice befor the voices owner could do anything to stop him then he started to talk to the voice)sorry but my loyalty is to only Lien-Da I never said I have any loyalty to you pluse you should know only a Grandmaster of the Dark Legion or the DEL has the right to say who stays and who go's last I cheached your not the Grandmaster. pluse I now know what you really want Wolfen for and if you thought you could just use me like thant well then....I'M GOING TO HAVE TO KILL YOU FOR USING ME!(he yelled with anger just as he tried to picked up Wolfen and make a run for it at Knuckles top speed)

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-04-30 14:01:58 +0000 UTC]

(Shots ring out. One strikes Max on one of his bionic hands)

Voice (calls out to Max): Lien-Da is a fool. She prostitutes herself and the Legion to Eggman. Give me Wolfen. I can use him to become Grandmaster. Then I will have the power to free us. GIVE HIM TO ME!

(More shots are fired. One grazes Max's temple. Another ricochets off the Infinity Gauntlet on Wolfen's hand)

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-04-30 17:14:10 +0000 UTC]

(Max dodges the shots with amazing speed)

Max: Lien-Da only joined Eggman because he was willing to give are people cybernetics if the Acorns would have given cybernetics to the Dark Legion are group of people wouldn't be Eggmans slaves.

pluse I told myself I wouldn't let anyone else take Lien-Da's rightful place in the Legion away from her again not after what her brother did to her.

pluse you know nothing of how close I was to former Grandmaster Luger and his daughters as well as his only son.

and if you think I'm just going to let some no good women ever if she is an Echidna become Grandmaster when Lien-Da is the Grandmaster and let her take people away from their freedom well then you have another thing coming Kiara-Ne.

(he said as he was holding onto a Chaos Emerald)

now call me crazy but if Eggman where to say learn that you just let a Chaos Emerald go wouldn't there be one less member of the DEL.

(he said holding the emerald while smiling at the fact Eggman could detonate the bomb inside Kiai-Ne if Eggman would learn that she cave up a Chaos Emerald)

so whats it going to be I give you the emerald and you can give it to your boss or we keep fighting until you can't stand anymore and later your boss gets very angry at you for letting Wolfen and me go with the emerald and sense he's very unforgiving you could soon know what it felt like when Lien-Da's bomb went off you have ten minutes to decide after that its game over for you.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-01 01:18:54 +0000 UTC]

Kiara-Ne (She comes out into the open, and walks up to Max. She glares at him and the looks to Wolfen. Almost tenderly, she strokes Wolfen's cheek) Make no mistake. I WILL have him one day. (She turns and takes a few steps away. Suddenly she draws her gun, turn and fires a plasma bolt past Max's head) Fine! Go! Leave the emerald. But know this. I won't give up on my ambitions. I will have my rightful place at the head of the Legion. I will have my 'weapon'. And you and I aren't finished with each other yet Max.

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-01 01:46:51 +0000 UTC]

Max: likewise Kiari-Ne when someone becomes my enemy I tend to make sure I take good care of them in the end(he said as he put the Chaos Emerald on he ground)come on Wolfen lets go(he said as he picked up Wolfen then took off at Knuckles speed)Wolfen I'm sorry I let my rage take control of me earlier are you willing to be my allie?(he said to Wolfen as they were setting at the B.B.B.G were Max usually went when things weren't looking good thankfully Grounder let Max come to the cafe as long as Max was willing to buy something from the cafe pluse Max did a few favers for Grounder and his boss in the pase)Wolfen we can stay here for awhile before we go after you know who.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-01 03:37:10 +0000 UTC]

(As Max leaves with Wolfen, Kiara-Ne looks to the sky and screams her frustration)

Wolfen (Weakly to Max): Thank you. Like I said, I'll help. Don't worry about before. Kiara-Ne is a master manipulator, and a dangerous foe. (Rubs his injured shoulder and winces) Hmmm. It should be OK. A bit of rest and I'll be ready to go. One thing though. I'll need a Power Ring or an emerald. (Looks at Max) I can use them to power the Gauntlet, otherwise it will drain my life and kill me if I use it too much. (Sighs) You know, I have absolutely no love for the Dark Egg Legion, but for one of their 'lackeys', you're not too bad.

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-01 04:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Max: well you can count on Grounder here to keep you safe mainly because the DEL and anyone working with them would never come to Mogul's casino not after Eggman trap Mogul in the Egg Grapes.I can easily get you a Power Ring from Mogul I'll need to get some work from him in order to pay him off later but I can get you the Power ring now if you need it.as for the Legion back in my day a few years ago the Legion that I worked in was nothing like it is today.to tell the truth Luger wanted to make peace with the rest of Echidnaopolis but after his son Kragok learned of his fathers plans he tricked Lien-Da into killing Luger I left the Legion after we returned from the Twilight Cage because Luger and his plans died and Lien-Da never learned the truth.Kragok could have killed both me and Lien-Da if I told her or anyone else about Kragok's plan to kill his father asa well as his plan to take over the Legion and to think he and I use to be frinds.but to him after he became Grandmaster he didn't think a Commander of my rank mattered at all.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-01 05:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: Hmmm. A sad story. However it's the Legions practice of using cybernetics that I have trouble with. (Looks at Max) I've been a Robian, and I have a cybernetic brain, but I struggle to understand why anyone would willingly remove perfectly good body parts and replace them with machinery...

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-01 06:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Max: thats sad to hear but as for the Legion it all started when Dimitri became Enerjak all those years ago. his son started a group of people loyal to Dimitri's old way back when he took over Angel Island hundreads of years ago after Dimitri was thought to be dead his son formed the Dark Legion the Legion was angrt at the rest of are people for kicking them out of Echidnaopolis later when Dimitri's son returned all of his fallowers had cybernetics where they use to have their body parts. the cybernetics are a symbal of are loyalty to Dimitri and his house. after the first group of Dark Legioners moved in to take over Echidnaopolis the son of Edmen the first guardien of the Chaos Emerald the son of Edmen fought the Legion and sent us into the nightmare relm known as the Twilight Zone though the people we met there called it the Twilight Cage we later called it the same thing as they did.after many long years of fighting the people of Echidnaopolis the Dark Legion was going to stop are old ways starting with the next generation of Dark Legioners but Kragok didn't want that alot of us didn't. after Enerjak showed up earlier this year all members of the Legion who were on the Island got turned into normal people again those who wanted to be normal were sent to whats left of Albion as for a few dozen others they stayed on the island and later went to Eggman for help because of him my people are his slaves.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-01 06:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: I still don't like it though. Listen. Despite my feelings, I'll still help you. Trust me on that.

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-01 06:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Max: oh I trust you thats why I'm giving you this Power Ring. when you feel like it lets get to New Megaopolis from what I've been told Eggman is hiding somewere in the citys ruins.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-01 06:58:49 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen (Prepares a harness for the Ring. He straps it to his chest and connects it to the Infinity Gauntlet): I'm ready when you are.

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-01 07:02:49 +0000 UTC]

Max: good we leave in ten minutes no more no less(he said with an evil grin because he belived Eggman will not know whats coming for him)

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-01 07:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: I'll be ready.

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-01 07:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Max: (later at Megaopolis)OK are you ready Wolfen?.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-01 07:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: As ready as I'll ever be. (He starts to power up the Gauntlet) Lets go.

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-01 08:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Max: right lets head for the Eggdome Eggman was hiding there the last time he was in command of the Empire(he said as he set a corse to the Eggdome for him and Wolfen)

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-01 08:58:58 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: This place has a bad vibe. We need to keep on our toes. (His eyes glaze over briefly as he tries to hack into the cities network) Nothing. Either the networks down, or it's being shielded. I need a terminal to know for sure.

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-01 20:48:27 +0000 UTC]

Max: well maybe if we go deeper into the Eggdome we can find something(he said as he pointed to the hole Mighty and Bunnie made when the Freedom Fighters and the Chaotixs invaded the Eggdome a few months ago)I don't know why Eggman wouldn't seal this hole up if he really is hiding out here?.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-02 00:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: It screams trap. But it's probably our best option. Shall we?

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-02 00:45:56 +0000 UTC]

Max: well from the info I've got the Freedom Fighters have been coming in and out of the Eggdome after Eggman went into hiding so maybe he's not hiding on the upper levels and the ground levls of the Eggdome so maybe we just need to get to the sub levels to find the Eggman and when we do he's going to see how I plan to end this Egg Hunt(he said as he loaded he's blaster)lets do this pal.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-02 01:20:40 +0000 UTC]

(Wolfen nods. They make their way in. It has a dark creepy feel. Wolfen goes over to an old terminal and 'plugs' himself in)

Wolfen: From what I can see, there is a shaft of some sort over there that leads down. (Points)

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-02 01:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Max: odd on would think Eggman would have sealed the entire place off...wait there's a camera watching us right now(he saw what looked like an old camera that didn't work anymore)think t still works? if so I need to hack into it now.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-02 02:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen (Goes up to the camera and 'plugs' in) It's working. It's providing a feed of us to some place. i can't trace it though. The pathway is convoluted, and there are firewalls everywhere. (He unplugs) Care to have a go?

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-02 02:27:46 +0000 UTC]

Max: well it doesn't seem like there are really that many firewalls it seems like the video feed is just scattered all over the place its like its everywere so to speak. but it seems the feed is mostly coming from somewere in the lower levels of....wait I'm getting something. it seems like its Eggman's plan that he's been working of for nearly the past ten weeks.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-02 02:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: Try this code. It might clear things up. (Wolfen gives Max a security code from his Robian days) Hows that?

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-02 03:12:33 +0000 UTC]

Max: this is odd the Legion doen't seem to know what he's up to....pluse there's something wrong with whats in the jounal the words that are being put into the journal entry ten minutes apart from eachother here's what all the words are saying there all from Eggman he's saying in the log

I've figured it all out..........Sonic won't know what hit him!..........they'll know of us when I want them to know!..........I will orchestrate what is to come..........because its all part of the game!..........Sonic is the enbodiment of Chaos!..........there is the factor of chance. the unpredictable........ odd I wonder what Eggman means by all that wait there's one last piece of info on his plan.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-03 02:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: Hmmm. It almost sounds like he's rambling. Like he's lost his mind. Still, crazy or not, I'd say he's got some kind of 'master plan' in mind. What's the last piece say?

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-03 02:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Max: it says ten minutes to luanch........um I think we got here either at the right time or the wrong time because I haven't a clue what it means by........(just then the hole in the Eggdome sealed up then a coputer said)TEN MINUTES TO LUACH OF THE DEATH EGG!.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-03 03:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: Damn it! We need to move fast!

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-03 03:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Max: well we need to know whats going to luanch first so we can get to the right area to stop the countdown.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-03 04:12:54 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: Can you find a map? (He searches through the files looking)

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-03 04:21:55 +0000 UTC]

Max: well if I can hock up to a computer I could get a map of the place(then the computer said)NINE MINUTES TO LUANCH.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-04 00:24:38 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: Try here. (He indicates another terminal) If worst comes to worst, I might be able to blast our way through and out of this thing. (He adjusts his Gauntlet)

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-04 00:42:41 +0000 UTC]

Max: I'm getting a read out on the Eggdome and....(he poused in fear before he turned around to tell Wolfen what he learn)Wolfen we can't get out the metal that these walls are made of is to powerful for your Gauntlet(then the computer said)EIGHT MINUTES TO LUANCH(then Max said)it looks like only the main chapter of the DEL is in the Eggdome everyone else is across Mobius including Kiara-Ne and her intire group is it bad if Eggman didn't inclode her with the other Legioners in the Eggdome?(then the computer said)SEVEN MINUTES TO LUANCH.

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-04 01:14:52 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: I'm not sure. She could have other orders. Or someone knows of her own plans... It's not good either way. (he looks around) Maybe... (Glances at Max) Tell me, what kind of energy readouts are you getting? I had a thought. If we could redirect the power feeding the thrusters, and directed it into the Infinity Gauntlet, we might be able to delay, if not stop, take off. (Frowns) The only worry is all that power might fry me. But it could give you enough time do do what you need to do.

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-04 01:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Max: I'm looking into the data on the thrusters and........(he had a look of shock when he got the readouts but before he said anything the computer said)SIX MINUTES TO LUANCH(then Max said)there is no override...and theres no way to redirect the power Eggman made it so the power only went to certent areas on the Eggdome and to top it all off he made it so no one could stop the.....(then the computer said)FIVE MINUTES TO LUANCH(then Max said)yes the luanch of his.....

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-04 02:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: Damn it. (Slams his fist against the wall) That's a sure sign of his paranoia. What do we do? What's he up to exactly...

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-04 02:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Max: (just then the computer said)FOUR MINUTES TO LUANCH(then Max said)well it looks like he's luanching....oh my gosh he's luanching the......but that would mean that the Eggdome is really(his heart sank into his chest as he learned the truth behind what they were really inside)this base....this..base is really....(then the computer said)THREE MINUTES TO LUANCH(then Max said)....this places....is..really...THE DEATH EGG!(he said in a yell of fear)we are really inside the Death Egg but I thought Sonic Tails and Knuckles destroyed the Death Egg years ago......

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-04 02:42:23 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: not good. not good at all. How did he keep this such a secret? We need to do something!

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-04 02:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Max: well Sonic was gone for a year before the DEL was created and I was busy adventuring when that happened so maybe he made the Eggdome able to transform into a Death Egg when he first made New Megaopolis pluse the Freedom fighters were busy fighting the Xorda and other things across Mobius while Eggman was building the city as for what we can do...(then the computer said)TWO MINUTES TO LUANCH(then Max said)we can try to get to the lower levels and end Eggman before he uses the Death Egg to kill anyone because the readouts I have are saying he's going to hit New Mobotropolis first(then the computer said)ONE MINUTE TO LUANCH.......

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-04 03:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: No time to waste then.
(They rush over to one of the shafts leading to the lower levels. Wolfen jumps in and repels down the cables)

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-04 04:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Max: RIGHT!(said Max as he fallowed Wolfen down the air shaft)we better get down there fast because I can here the thrusters firing up what about you?(then the computer said)30 SECOUNDS TO LUANCH

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-05 00:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: Right. (He lets go of the cables and plummets to the ground. he rolls out of the road and checks to make sure the coast is clear) All clear. let's go!

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-05 02:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Max: right lets hurry to the comman center and hide before we luanch(then the computer said)20 SECOUNDS TO LUANCH

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-06 00:21:58 +0000 UTC]

(They hurry to the command center)

Wolfen: Looks like this is the place...

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MetalNazo In reply to lizardman22 [2011-05-06 05:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Max: get down we need to hide there's Legioners everywere and look there he is Eggman himself is overseeing this whole thing all we need to do is hide before they spot us(they were able to hide and were safely out of sight then the computer said)FINAL COUNTDOWN WILL COMMIT IN 10.........9........8.......7......6.....5....4...3..2.1 0 LUANCH!(then with a mighty blast from the Death Egg's thrusters Wolfen, Max, Eggman, Lien-Da Snively, and the main chapter of the DEL were in the skys of New Mobotropolis within a matter of secounds while inside the Death Egg)I think were not in New Megaopolis anymore Welfen

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lizardman22 In reply to MetalNazo [2011-05-06 15:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Wolfen: Not a good predicament to be in. But still, we might be able to do something. Give me a power source to augment my Gauntlet, and I'll cause chaos out there. Give you time to get to Eggman. I owe the DEL a little payback...

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