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LunarisFuryAileron — How To Write RWBY H 4

Published: 2013-11-15 15:44:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 35894; Favourites: 392; Downloads: 77
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Unlike previous ones in the series, this is less of a satire but one viable way to write a RWBY H. In fact, this is done in Mass Effect. The cliche is you get together with your loved one before an important mission such as the final dungeon or mission. Well, so far we have yet to see them going on a mission or something, but having to fight Grimm all the time might put stress on them. We don't actually know how strong the Grimm are or if there's more dangerous Grimm out there.


On a side note, personally, I don't think myself as a pink shipper.


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GateMasterGreen In reply to ??? [2013-11-18 21:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Content Rating?

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-18 22:03:49 +0000 UTC]

T for Teen.

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-19 02:48:03 +0000 UTC]

I left you a review, a bit lengthy, but I always do that.

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-19 05:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Lengthy is good. Because with length, you can add more details. 


I found your review helpful, and I plan to implement some of what you suggested. Though I must ask, what is wrong with my intro?! 

 

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-19 20:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Ummm... Personal opinion.

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-19 21:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it's just personal opinion.


Still kinda hurtful!

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-20 01:37:19 +0000 UTC]

I apologize

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-20 01:39:27 +0000 UTC]

Meh, it's all good. Added chapter 5 last night. Might not do 6 today though. Bit tired.

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-20 01:41:54 +0000 UTC]

You dont have to update everyday. I update once or twice a week.

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-20 03:16:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm on a time constraint though.


I ship out for the U.S Navy in one month, and I'll be deprived of internet for a few months at that time. So I want to do as much as I can before that.

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-22 00:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah. Well, thanks for your service in advance. I look forward to reading your stories.

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-22 02:25:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.


And I'll hope to not disappoint. Coming up with the slice-of-life stuff is going to be hell on my ADHD though.

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-23 01:19:40 +0000 UTC]

I wish you the best of luck!

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-23 01:36:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I may need it.

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-23 03:15:35 +0000 UTC]

We all need luck, some more than others.

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-23 07:32:49 +0000 UTC]

I rely on luck quite a bit sometimes. Then again, it helps when you're Irish and look like a six foot tall leprechaun.

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-24 15:45:02 +0000 UTC]

The green part of my username isn't for show. It's actually a part of my name. I have luck in spades, though I'd prefer it be clovers. My friend and I play a game with one rare occurrence that is decided by a dice roll. 2,3,4,5 and something is destroyed. My friend tries destroying stuff and suddenly he rolls 1 and 6.

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-24 21:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That's bad luck for him.

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-24 22:08:49 +0000 UTC]

I know

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-24 22:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Are you sure you're not a luck stealing fairy then?

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-25 03:29:09 +0000 UTC]

I am no fairy last I checked

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-25 03:53:30 +0000 UTC]

When was the last time you checked?

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-25 22:36:59 +0000 UTC]

Just now, actually

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-25 23:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Ahh. But how do you know? You may be a fairy who's convinced themselves that they are human!

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-26 20:25:28 +0000 UTC]

I don't have a pocket watch so we can rule out that theory

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-26 21:37:51 +0000 UTC]

Good point. . . 


Maybe you're half-fairy? Or you're a blood sucking fairy like Edward Cullen?

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-27 03:28:20 +0000 UTC]

*shudders* No! I am Altherian!

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DravynLeCrux In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-27 04:25:22 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, sorry! Too far.

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GateMasterGreen In reply to DravynLeCrux [2013-11-27 14:52:45 +0000 UTC]

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DravynLeCrux In reply to ??? [2013-11-17 20:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Sounds like you've been there for a while.


I'll be sure to check out the FlameShipping fics. Might be nice to see something other than YangxBlake or JaunexPyrrha for once.

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Gear001Mrk2 In reply to ??? [2013-11-15 21:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Hah! What's a fic of yours, might've seen it in my crusades

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GateMasterGreen In reply to Gear001Mrk2 [2013-11-17 03:40:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm a FanFiction author. My pen name is the same there as it is here. I have four Chikane x Himeko fics, a Maka x Tsubaki fic, a Yang x Pyrrha fic, and a Blake x Ruby x Weiss fic.

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Gear001Mrk2 In reply to GateMasterGreen [2013-11-18 03:50:29 +0000 UTC]

I'll keep an eye out!


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GateMasterGreen In reply to Gear001Mrk2 [2013-11-18 05:15:05 +0000 UTC]

All righty then

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picklebeetle In reply to ??? [2013-11-15 20:27:20 +0000 UTC]

GOD SPEED, SOLDIER

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Gear001Mrk2 In reply to picklebeetle [2013-11-15 21:30:05 +0000 UTC]

 

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picklebeetle In reply to Gear001Mrk2 [2013-11-15 21:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Charge into the godless orient of war in the FANDOM!!

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Gear001Mrk2 In reply to picklebeetle [2013-11-15 21:51:18 +0000 UTC]

TO BATTLE!

                                                                                                           

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picklebeetle In reply to Gear001Mrk2 [2013-11-15 22:46:40 +0000 UTC]

That's a fine soldier!

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KillerKaiju1954 In reply to ??? [2013-11-15 16:08:38 +0000 UTC]

Lol I saw that coming! XD

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picklebeetle In reply to KillerKaiju1954 [2013-11-15 20:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Your all seeing eyes are nice

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KillerKaiju1954 In reply to picklebeetle [2013-11-15 21:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Heh thanks  

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picklebeetle In reply to KillerKaiju1954 [2013-11-15 22:46:27 +0000 UTC]

I shall take them

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