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meljoy68 — Haunted Visual Poem
Published: 2008-07-09 21:39:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 5726; Favourites: 80; Downloads: 7
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“Haunted”The way that he smelled
still lingers behind.
The feel of his hands
still shivers my skin.
The sound of his pleasure
still teases my mind.
The look from his eyes
still brings me to sin.
The taste of his kiss
still sweetens my lips.
The heat of his body
still keeps me warm.
The force of his passion
still bruises my hips.
The strength of his hold
still quiets my storm.
His memory lingers
no matter the time.
I’m haunted forever
of when he was mine.
Thank you to for allowing me to use his photo, [link]
Original poem by me, © melanie joy 2008
I give permission to ~Unique-Manip , =PoetryPlease , and *Visual-Poetry-Club to display this in their galleries.
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The HD just doesnt work anymore =/
Or another hardware... Dunno exactly why.
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Uh-oh...I'd die without mine. 
What can you do about it? Have you taken it in? Do you have to buy a new HD??? That's a big OUCH...
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Yes, I guess I need to buy a new one... I'm waiting mom to take the pc to the guy that fixes it...
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Your words bring so many images ... like if they had a life of their own. It's great Melanie.
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Thank you very much! That's a lovely thing to say!
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You're so very welcome.It really is my pleasure.
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I think it is perfect. The words, fonts, visual... everything.
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I am your audience. I dont speak...just listen and clap.
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So each poem is a performance...? Hmm...Works for me!! 
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Wow Mel That is incredible! and yes most definitely hot!
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This is good. I wonder if it should be "haunted by" instead of "haunted of"? Lovely photo as well, good work.
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Whew, that's quite haunting. By the way, is it hot in here?
Oh, and thanks for writing about me. You're going to make everyone else jealous. 
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I'm glad it rose the temperature. My job here is done. 
And BTW I love the new icon!!!
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Thanks. Blushing comes naturally to me. It always has.
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I like it. Shows emotion and true heart. 
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Damn, emotions? Time to go take some more testosterone gel.
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Gosh...and here I thought it was another depressing piece. 
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Well I didn't write it depressed, but I wondered how it would be recieved because it could be taken that way... I'm just glad it wasn't!
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Thank you! I didn't think everyone would think of it this way...I thought for sure I'd hear how sad it was. I'd much rather hear how hot it is!!
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Giggle I got request for some steamier poems too... so I am doing one on Lollipops 
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OMG I have one with that title, and I can bet it means the same thing!!!
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Sure sweetie
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I cant help it, I fave all your poems... you're very deep and insightful
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Thank you, Skye. I'm very glad we are friends.
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its amazing what mood the right image can achieve with a poem
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Exactly!!! I love this photo...But I was sure everyone would find it depressing! I'm glad to be wrong!
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it is slghtly dpressing but not altogether
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There is a sad tone to it.
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