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Published: 2008-07-09 21:39:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 5726; Favourites: 80; Downloads: 7
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Description “Haunted”

The way that he smelled
still lingers behind.
The feel of his hands
still shivers my skin.
The sound of his pleasure
still teases my mind.
The look from his eyes
still brings me to sin.
The taste of his kiss
still sweetens my lips.
The heat of his body
still keeps me warm.
The force of his passion
still bruises my hips.
The strength of his hold
still quiets my storm.
His memory lingers
no matter the time.
I’m haunted forever
of when he was mine.



Thank you to for allowing me to use his photo, [link]


Original poem by me, © melanie joy 2008



I give permission to ~Unique-Manip , =PoetryPlease , and *Visual-Poetry-Club to display this in their galleries.


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Comments: 111

SilentPlea In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 23:19:11 +0000 UTC]

oh...I got it alright

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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-09 23:27:12 +0000 UTC]

Makes me a happy camper, then.

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deviouslili In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 21:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Holy hell. You are Right On the Money with these, Melanie!

Excellent job!

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meljoy68 In reply to deviouslili [2008-07-09 21:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much, Stephanie!!! Finding the right image for the visual makes the piece!!

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deviouslili In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 21:55:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, darlin'! I agree! Your ability to find the perfect image to compliment the words is amazing!

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meljoy68 In reply to deviouslili [2008-07-09 22:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh finding the image is aaaaallllllll luck!! (ok, and stubbornness), but thank you!

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deviouslili In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 22:16:12 +0000 UTC]

Welcome, hun.

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jacksl [2008-07-09 21:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Ooh!! Nice!! Love this!!

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meljoy68 In reply to jacksl [2008-07-09 21:48:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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jacksl In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 21:49:39 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!!

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