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“Holding Hands”The flowers may have withered,
their smell no longer sweet,
the presents may have shattered
into pieces at our feet.
The suit that you were wearing
may have shrunken in its girth,
the dress that once did sparkle
may no longer be of worth.
The pictures might be faded,
we might lose our wedding bands,
but none of it would matter
as long as we are holding hands.
How it should be...
This was written in 1994.
Thank you so much to !clear-moments for allowing me to use his image, [link]
He has a beautiful gallery...I hope to use more of his pieces in future visual poems!
Original poem by me, © melanie joy 2008
I give permission to ~Unique-Manip , =PoetryPlease , and *Visual-Poetry-Club to display this in their galleries.
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Comments: 59
VisualPoetress In reply to ??? [2008-06-28 06:17:30 +0000 UTC]
Alot of people steal it so they can upload it to photobucket so they can hotlink it to myspace
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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-06-28 06:34:08 +0000 UTC]
I know...in essence it's a compliment, I guess...but still, bites big time.
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VisualPoetress In reply to meljoy68 [2008-06-28 06:37:53 +0000 UTC]
Especially since on photobucket they can buy it as a print, and that is not good, I had to go to great lengths to get permission to use the photo in my poem. And no one will see a profit, except whoever illegally has it on photobucket.
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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-06-28 07:42:59 +0000 UTC]
They can buy it as a print at PB?!?!? NO. Way. I didn't know you could do that there...
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CSnyder In reply to ??? [2008-06-28 02:34:39 +0000 UTC]
this is very nice, love the poem and it goes perfect with the image
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meljoy68 In reply to CSnyder [2008-06-28 05:59:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Chris, I thought so, too, when I first saw it. He's got a fantastic gallery...I'm hoping he'll let me borrow a few more.
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CSnyder In reply to meljoy68 [2008-06-28 12:40:14 +0000 UTC]
cool....im sure he will
welcome!
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