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Published: 2005-10-23 12:16:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 18
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Description wip it good. tell me what you think. the bottom right corner is not actually that dark, but i don't mind it like that.

spent all day on three paintings, and they turned out nothing like i intended, which i think is a good thing.

acrylic on canvas
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Comments: 5

oingoboingoman [2005-12-17 21:14:48 +0000 UTC]

no right leg...but no reflection on the light so thats cool. Don't turn it into a spot the difference! hehe. nice work. The reflection could be Eric Fischel's woman in 'bad boy'..hehehe

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crematu [2005-10-24 16:58:57 +0000 UTC]

I like how the orb like object on the right gently balances out the image to the left, and the dark space on the bottom right does seem to have a nice use as far as space goes

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dyfc [2005-10-23 12:28:28 +0000 UTC]

i think the darkness is really powerful... keep the monochromatic palette... i think it works well with the composition, both suggesting a sense of desolation and solitude...actually, bring in some of the brown you have in the top left corner to the top right hand corner... just to suggest that there is something happening in the background... if you know what i mean.... also, i would suggest that her leg is coming out of the darkness instead of obscuring it completely... perhaps just have her toe visible... that's my thought

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melzart In reply to dyfc [2005-10-23 12:53:19 +0000 UTC]

my thoughts with the other leg too. thanks heaps for your input. -much appreciated -and i'll take your tip on the brown. ty.

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sasQuat-ch [2005-10-23 12:23:21 +0000 UTC]

was this paint on canvas?? its real good!!
i love the subtle reflection of the girl, and the opressive atmosphere created by the blue hue.
and how half her body is hidden in shadows, and the anonymous face.
very mysterious!

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