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Published: 2007-12-29 09:41:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 32164; Favourites: 1416; Downloads: 2410
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Description Every day
drips down my cheek
then splashes onto the floor.
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Comments: 158

kepopera [2011-05-15 00:47:03 +0000 UTC]

You handle lights like the sky the stars by night.

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mjranum In reply to kepopera [2011-05-15 04:53:06 +0000 UTC]

That's quite a nice thing to say! I'm not sure I'm worthy of a compliment like that, but thank you!

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kepopera In reply to mjranum [2011-05-15 16:59:31 +0000 UTC]

I think it is; I browsed your gallery.

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RichardTheRough [2011-05-02 21:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Spectacular lights and shadows, very evocative scene.
Very good job, featured again on my blog [link]
Well done!

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mjranum In reply to RichardTheRough [2011-05-14 14:50:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And thanks for featuring me.

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RichardTheRough In reply to mjranum [2011-05-14 18:25:17 +0000 UTC]

All deserved.

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g3n3rall33 [2011-02-03 09:23:02 +0000 UTC]

you should do more shots like this! love this pose

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mjranum In reply to g3n3rall33 [2011-02-03 16:49:04 +0000 UTC]

These were really really hard; I don't think I want to make a series of them.

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Puckpup [2010-12-22 05:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Lovely artist's comment [haiku{senryu}]. An excellent capture of a moment and a feeling in that moment.

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mjranum In reply to Puckpup [2010-12-27 02:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you; I've worked on that poem for years.

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Puckpup In reply to mjranum [2011-01-13 17:53:59 +0000 UTC]

It shows. <3

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raethestampede [2010-06-17 20:11:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure if I can say anything that hasn't already been said, but this is absolutely gorgeous and utterly poetic. Thank you for uploading it.

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mjranum In reply to raethestampede [2010-06-17 23:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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OsaPhoto [2010-04-08 02:57:38 +0000 UTC]

I featured you in my monthly Journal.
Hope you don't mind

LINK

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mjranum In reply to OsaPhoto [2010-04-08 05:00:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm honored!

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Catwalksymphony [2010-02-05 01:14:41 +0000 UTC]

PLEASE can I paint this? Please please please? It's too captivating to ignore.

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mjranum In reply to Catwalksymphony [2010-02-05 01:19:54 +0000 UTC]

My rules regarding using my images as stock or reference: [link]

Short form: please be my guest.

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Catwalksymphony In reply to mjranum [2010-02-05 21:55:33 +0000 UTC]

I've read them. You've faved some of my work I've based on your photos. I just always ask either way. Especially since this is a peice that obviously means alot to you in particular. Just a matter of respect for you. Thank you so much.

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mjranum In reply to Catwalksymphony [2010-02-05 22:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Oops. I get a lot of people sending me stuff to look at based on my stock, so I get lost, sometimes.

I'm always honored and happy to inspire someone with my work, as long as they're not re-working my own efforts.

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mchenry [2009-11-14 21:08:32 +0000 UTC]

Nice shoot

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mjranum In reply to mchenry [2009-11-14 21:27:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Sortvind [2009-09-25 23:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Featured this piece here: [link]

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mjranum In reply to Sortvind [2009-09-26 15:58:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm honored.

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itanhant [2009-09-12 18:25:52 +0000 UTC]

great shot

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inspire-par-la-mer [2009-06-09 03:47:40 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, but I'd like it a lot better if this person wasn't sticking there butt out so much. It is kinda pornish.
But the lighting is great and I like it otherwise.

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mjranum In reply to inspire-par-la-mer [2009-06-09 18:31:00 +0000 UTC]

"pornish"? heh.

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SarajevoSamurai [2009-04-20 00:18:03 +0000 UTC]

One of the BEST art pieces in the Deviant community!

true congratulations to the artist!

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mjranum In reply to SarajevoSamurai [2009-04-23 01:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Dartnoth [2009-04-10 00:30:18 +0000 UTC]

i love this image for two reasons! the first being the use of light and shadow, the second being that the model ISN'T actually touching the blade!! i don't know if that was intentional or not, but it raised me respect of the image immensely! totally going to this one!

once again, beautiful work!

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orsonswell [2009-03-15 11:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful play with light and shade, I like the subject to, death in a soft wrapping

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Lowbss [2008-09-25 13:00:05 +0000 UTC]

Featured in my journal
[link]

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mjranum In reply to Lowbss [2008-09-30 02:12:39 +0000 UTC]

I am honored.

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lolanubislol [2008-09-18 02:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Exquisitely done!

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mjranum In reply to lolanubislol [2008-09-19 18:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Kynks [2008-09-17 16:51:08 +0000 UTC]

perfect!!

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niponwar [2008-09-17 01:03:18 +0000 UTC]

This should be a DD!!! Nice work dude!

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mjranum In reply to niponwar [2008-09-17 15:49:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm honored you think so; that's good enough.

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xxbluecrystalxx [2008-09-15 13:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Great work

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TheBoo [2008-09-14 17:53:41 +0000 UTC]

it's so darn hard to find nice erotic pictures of girls with blades lol awesome, youve made me want to go and draw some again

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mjranum In reply to TheBoo [2008-09-15 00:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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xjuggernautx [2008-09-11 17:33:54 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool...

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Chavez-Chavez [2008-09-09 19:40:36 +0000 UTC]

This strikes me as kind of Maplethorp-ish. I'm not sure how to spell his name but I love this shot. Excellent work.

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Corvidae65 [2008-09-02 19:43:30 +0000 UTC]

This is an absolute glorious capture!

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Rubiacaea [2008-09-02 04:43:20 +0000 UTC]

The lighting here is amazing

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mjranum In reply to Rubiacaea [2008-09-02 05:55:03 +0000 UTC]

That one was a toughie. I wanted to add the text to the shot but could not think of how to do it without having a high cheese factor. I've been writing that poem for years, now, and finally finished it last summer.

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Rubiacaea In reply to mjranum [2008-09-02 09:33:04 +0000 UTC]

Haiku definitely lends itself to drawn out construction. And I think you made the right decision.

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robertoroberto [2008-08-23 12:16:41 +0000 UTC]

I love Katana swords..............models too.....

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lilith187 [2008-08-10 17:23:49 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! beautifull!!!!!!!!!!!

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williamfdevault [2008-08-09 20:12:02 +0000 UTC]

I offer up a poem, based on my reaction to this piece, which I shall also post on one of my websites, and hope you will assent to allow me, with linkback and attribution, use this photo on the site. But regardless...
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barriers fall and all we are is the light,
burning through the veils, the sails that carry us
to where they bury us, far from home.
death is like a beautiful lady, waiting
in the next room, her skin satin and bright
as we reach for that we hope to receive,
sustained by hope and belief that she
will give us her heaven at least for a time,
for our patience and passions and faith.

William F. DeVault. all rights reserved.

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mjranum In reply to williamfdevault [2008-08-14 00:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you; and thank you for the poem. You're welcome to post my photo - please include my poem with it; the two go together. I'm honored by your reaction.

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