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Mr-Culexus — Ragged Edges: Angela Neuehoffe
Published: 2011-01-27 13:59:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 23319; Favourites: 118; Downloads: 133
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Cheery one. Man, Boone is bad writer. Florid.Eventually, after numerous soldiers complained about Angelas silence spooking them, she was asked by the major to at least whistle as she walked through the corridors so people knew when she was coming.
It proved even scarier.
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oh them crazy clone troopers of krieg. so she has another sister besides eva huh?
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Ah nope. Well, besides some clones back on Krieg I guess.
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oh so eva is dead then? cus the bio mentioned "dead sister"
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The whole story is here :
[link]
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Wait, her sister dies?
So does she change personalities when changing into her full-face-mask outfit?
If so, that would be wonderfully creepy and fantastic and very 40k.
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No, she is always like this.
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But didn't you just recently post her sister's profile, in which she was very much alive? Are they written in different time-periods? *slightly confused*
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How else does one go "Yeees..I see."
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I can already imagine a scary whistle she could do.
Like, ring around a rosie, or One from Ypres.
And she has one spiffin pipe Oh Jolly Good.
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She usually whistles this tune [link]
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Ah now that certainly shines a new light on things. Morcombe and Wise? So she at least knows quality.
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Yes indeed. You ever watch life on mars? The english one?
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Ah yes, I do remember that series. The Ambiguous ending where it was unrevealed if he was insane, had gone back in time or was in a coma was certainly a memorable plot.
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Damn you Mr-Culexus. I just fuckin' love read stories about your Chars. This is one of your best man, keep doing that
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A scary thought would be, if she managed to make her tank move as silently as she did.....
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Internet: Devaintart what does the awesome scanner say about the awesome levels here
Devaintart: ITS OVER NINE THOUUUUSSSSAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHNNNNDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Internet: What Nine THOUSAND!
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I'm guessing she's one of those girls who can sneeze without making a sound.
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Ja. I would say so. Assuming she sneezes of course. I suspect dust and pollen is too afraid to come near her.
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Hmm no doubt, I bet when death comes for her he'll try to find some reason to postpone is as she creeps him out.
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Oh god yes. I've been waiting for these sisters.
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I think I have a new favorite, boss.. Very interesting, reminds me of someone from something, can't put my finger on it though..either way, Great work Boss.
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There's a few characters like that now. Glad you like her though.
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well, you went with her at this point in her life...probably for the best, the loss of her sister would certainly be her defining moment. I think having Boone, the military outsider provide the initial analysis was brilliant.
Truly a haunting character, I don't think disconcerting is strong enough, Cuddles is disconcerting, but I don't feel that she is actively terrifying, there's nothing specifically scary about her. She isn't raving, which might be scary, she isn't cold and calculating, which might be scary... She just strikes me as haunting. Hauntingly emotionless (or emotionally suffering) in that she seems to be a walking pile of pain, not even living for anything, just living because she isn't dead. She seems hauntingly dangerous, outwardly not aggressive when at rest, but clearly capable of killing you without so much as a twitch. Her mind-scape is (according to Boone) hauntingly desolate, reminding me of a cross between an elephant graveyard and a tank graveyard. Her personality (what personality there is) is hauntingly gentle. Even her appearance, her expression is haunted yes, but she is also hauntingly beautiful, if her eyes had any life in them, or had she even the slightest upturn of her lips she would be the kind of dangerous beauty that guardsmen, (and some fa/tg/uys) find irresistible.
Overall I think Angela is a fantastic character, well drawn and very well fleshed out. I think the pipe is a nice touch, and I like her lusterless hair, it fits her personality and with the stress she lives with between military life and her mental disorders it makes a lot of sense that her hair might fade, not to grey, but to just such a nutrition-less lusterless color. Also I take it she is a bit older then the next most recent drawing of her.
Angela is a good character that I feel would be an honor to serve with, yet would clearly not be a pleasure to serve with and yet....not be a displeasure to serve with either.
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Its relieving to hear you say that. I was worried it was kind of a mess. I'm not sure what I'd make of meeting Angela. To a passer by she really is truly harmless, but would have a very heavy presence all the same.
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Boone is a pretty bad writer. Good job imitating it; it can be hard to purposefully write badly.
Hmm, scary whistling. Cool.
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I just figured florid and too much puntuation, basically using what is bad in my own writing and multiplying it.
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(Unless, of course, you're just trying to deflect criticism of your own writing abilities. If that is the case then I compliment you on your weaseling out of it.)
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she quiet an interesting chariter nice work
is her sister that over death korp that you did last
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Grosse schwester? Ill guess that's in honour of her sister?
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Haha, finally beeing german is of more use then laughing at the Warhammer-Fantasy Imperial Cities and Provinces
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Scary... why are the coolest chars the scariest ones? Oh, btw, would you mind terribly if I asked for a link to the writer of the stories?
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Just hopes she doesn't get "EMO" in the midst of a siege.
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I figure she's still got enough soldier about her.
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Y'know, I've got a variant of dysthymia -chronic cyclical.
That drek IS No Fun Atoll all over the place.
Puns help though. =]
The pipe's an interesting touch. I wouldn't have pegged her for enjoying a taste of the Space Tobacco.
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As I was drawing her she had a very "Yes..I see" look to her so I decided to finish the look.
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