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NaterRang — Core of the Apple Part 3

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Okay, it's finally here! The next part of the Core of the Apple comic, and the saddest chapter of this story. For those that might be feeling down, the mood will lighten with the next chapter. Also the next chapter will be MUCH shorter, so it shouldn't take as long to get out if life doesn't get in the way. First and foremost I would like to thank who's brilliant dramatic readings of the other two parts of this story rekindled my motivation to complete this story. And I would also like to thank for his composition advice for this chapter. Anyway, hope you guys enjoy and look forward to the next chapter! Let me know what you think in the comments!

EDIT: has once again graciously provided a comic dub for this chapter of the story! (In record time I might add!)

Check it out: www.youtube.com/watch?v=gz0H5Z…
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Comments: 749

ShaD-23 In reply to ??? [2014-03-06 05:13:42 +0000 UTC]

yes

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commanderchristian [2014-02-28 04:13:39 +0000 UTC]

it reminded me of a command and conquer 3 morning hour song it made me sad

www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fwc9ED…

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PrincessTwilightP0ny [2014-02-25 00:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Rarity should of died.

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to PrincessTwilightP0ny [2014-02-26 21:17:19 +0000 UTC]

You, my friend, have the sensitivity of a whiplash.

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Lavenderlicious [2014-02-21 18:14:34 +0000 UTC]

this is so good, and so touching!

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NaterRang In reply to Lavenderlicious [2014-02-21 23:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm still working on the next part, I'm just busy and really slow. XP

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Lavenderlicious In reply to NaterRang [2014-02-22 07:32:24 +0000 UTC]

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Derpywhooves109w In reply to ??? [2014-02-20 02:23:39 +0000 UTC]

applejake don't take it out on rarity she was following her cutie mark looking for some gems

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Tunder2510 In reply to ??? [2014-02-10 15:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Woah, poor Applejack... is sure hard to lose loved ones, even IRL... also, according to you, Applejack is wearing mom's hat? Just asking...
This is most emotional thing i've seen today! Nice job!

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unicorn-skydancer08 In reply to ??? [2014-02-05 15:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Who knows? It could have happened like this, or something similar.

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TobiIsABunny In reply to ??? [2014-02-03 18:45:32 +0000 UTC]

 I made an evil counterpart to Applejack her name is Bitter Rot she tired to kill Applejack out of bitterness and jealously she cut the rope of the bridge thinking Aj would be going to the bridge at that time except rarity was there but that got Applejack's parents killed after they saved rarity.Bitter was felt guilt and shame for killing them she was filled with fear that she would be hated and despised(and most likely be killed) by the apples if they find out she was the caused their demise she fled to the ever free. If you don't mind if i use the rope idea of how aj parents died and how bitter hated applejack and tried to kill her for having the life she wanted.

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NaterRang In reply to TobiIsABunny [2014-02-03 21:12:44 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind.

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Jordan179 [2014-01-27 19:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Do you know how much incredibly awesome this makes, by implication, Applejack's rescue of Twilight Sparkle on the ledge in The Elements of Harmony.  No wonder Applejack was smiling in triumph at the end when, this time, the situation had a happy ending for everyone!

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slenderproxy1234 [2014-01-12 02:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Omg I cryed reading this I lost my dad in a car wreack and reading this got me thinking of him and how me and my mom made it I miss him so much ;-;

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TheyCallMePherf In reply to ??? [2014-01-11 03:03:41 +0000 UTC]

Tears... This caused them...

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Shady-Daze [2014-01-10 20:03:19 +0000 UTC]

don'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcrydon'tcry

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HaloPrime In reply to ??? [2014-01-06 23:27:00 +0000 UTC]

GOD DAMN IT WHY AM I READING THIS T_T!?

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NaterRang In reply to HaloPrime [2014-01-06 23:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Because reasons?

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LikeABossIsABoss In reply to ??? [2014-01-06 18:05:55 +0000 UTC]

are her parents really dead

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The1King In reply to LikeABossIsABoss [2014-01-11 05:35:05 +0000 UTC]

It's been confirmed by the staff that yes they are.

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LikeABossIsABoss In reply to The1King [2014-01-24 17:14:43 +0000 UTC]

I think the only crusader with alive parents is sweetie belle

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Eli-J-Brony [2014-01-03 05:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Applejack wouldn't act like that today!

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useraccount [2013-12-30 20:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Welp!  This is my new headcanon.  Applejack's parents sacrificed themselves to save Rarity.

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StarWolf7474 In reply to ??? [2013-12-28 04:28:00 +0000 UTC]

ho so that's how they died 

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alexwarlorn [2013-12-21 06:46:32 +0000 UTC]

Does AJ hate Rarity for that?

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NaterRang In reply to alexwarlorn [2013-12-21 16:09:51 +0000 UTC]

If you haven't already, I recommend reading part 4.

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alexwarlorn In reply to NaterRang [2013-12-21 17:53:29 +0000 UTC]

I have. 

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NaterRang In reply to alexwarlorn [2013-12-21 19:12:41 +0000 UTC]

Thoughts?

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alexwarlorn In reply to NaterRang [2013-12-21 19:17:32 +0000 UTC]

I put comments there I thought in one of the replies I think.

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ya5la In reply to ??? [2013-12-20 21:07:27 +0000 UTC]

That brought tears to my eyes. And I rarely cry. SO FREAKING BEAUTIFUL

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kayanne21 In reply to ??? [2013-12-19 14:04:03 +0000 UTC]

They comic itself is pretty sad but I gotta admit, that reading freaking killed me. Not even kidding. Rarity at the end. My god.

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ponyfan3345 In reply to ??? [2013-12-17 20:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Well... not bad,not bad but the AJ parents dont look like that but rest can be true (Maybe...) 

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NaterRang In reply to ponyfan3345 [2013-12-17 22:56:46 +0000 UTC]

My designs are just as legitimate as anyone elses. At the end of the day it's all just head-canon.

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AdventureTimeSpanish [2013-12-15 16:15:52 +0000 UTC]

buaaaa! la historia mas triste que he oido en mi vidaaaa !!! Pero muy bueno el comic

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ponyfan3345 In reply to AdventureTimeSpanish [2013-12-17 20:46:55 +0000 UTC]

Yo hasta casi lloro  

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RekaTheAmazingTaco In reply to ??? [2013-12-10 22:59:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying so damn much right now that my keyboard's wet ;w;

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Lunalover11 In reply to ??? [2013-12-08 23:59:55 +0000 UTC]

ah, you saw the headcanon

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NaterRang In reply to Lunalover11 [2013-12-09 00:02:29 +0000 UTC]

Headcanon?

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Lunalover11 In reply to NaterRang [2013-12-09 00:05:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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NaterRang In reply to Lunalover11 [2013-12-09 00:20:02 +0000 UTC]

Ok...

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Lunalover11 In reply to NaterRang [2013-12-15 20:24:56 +0000 UTC]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6DRlL… i don't think this is the right one.....

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kacript [2013-12-04 18:02:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh my my god, so sad and tragic.

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YamiKariShadow6 [2013-11-30 05:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Kool

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MLPegasis4898 [2013-11-30 00:17:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh god!!! This can't get any sadder!!!

This is just amazing... love it...

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Chillysirloin In reply to ??? [2013-11-29 18:20:13 +0000 UTC]

DAMN IT WHY DID I HAVE TO READ THIS D:

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KurusuOrb In reply to ??? [2013-11-25 19:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Crying again

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KoboldCleaver In reply to ??? [2013-11-23 13:23:20 +0000 UTC]

And it was all Rarity's fault.
Butsrsly icrying

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MuddyFudger In reply to ??? [2013-11-23 05:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Her reaction is priceless. Though her means of coping and Granny Smith's unlicenced psychology session are a bit far out.

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kcsalyer23 In reply to ??? [2013-11-21 11:27:20 +0000 UTC]

oh my gosh...that is so sad,hope applejack will be okay

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SimonOrJ In reply to ??? [2013-11-21 01:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Gosh. The sight of her parents made shocked me out of the norm.

I... I can't... ... It's just touching...

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