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NaterRang — Core of the Apple Part 4

Published: 2013-11-20 04:11:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 135076; Favourites: 1217; Downloads: 821
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Part 3: naterrang.deviantart.com/art/C…

It's finally here! Part four! We've come a long way, but there's still 3 parts remaining! Once again a big thank you to and Mallac for providing input and advice on this leg of the journey! Most of all though, I have to thank whose superb dramatic readings of my comics is the primary motivating force to finish this project.

This is also the first part of this comic that was entirely rendered in Manga Studio 5 EX.

Anyway, on to the next part! We're nearing the homestretch now!

EDIT:

Obabscribbler just finished the next part of the comic dub! Check it out:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Ly8vk…
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Comments: 620

NaterRang In reply to ??? [2015-06-18 20:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, it's still on hiatus for the foreseeable future. 

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Bro998 In reply to NaterRang [2015-08-06 04:33:48 +0000 UTC]

in a hiatus temporal. but not canceled?. o well, wait only

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NebulaNyx1 In reply to NaterRang [2015-06-18 21:03:13 +0000 UTC]

oh well

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Jdueler11 In reply to ??? [2015-05-27 07:07:10 +0000 UTC]

"THREE PARTS"?! You haven't even done one!

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AgenteYumi [2015-05-25 23:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Whyyyyy? You made me cry with this.

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Warriorcats1616 In reply to ??? [2015-05-09 21:15:20 +0000 UTC]

And this is why applejack hates rarity XD

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Andrew23011991 In reply to Warriorcats1616 [2015-05-24 21:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Is that really fair? Applejack never came across as if she blamed Rarity at any point within the comic. It was more self-blame and in a situation where there is no obvious target for blame she blamed herself. Personally I'd blame whoever's job it was to ensure the bridge was safe and that bridge didn't look as if it was on the farm's property therefore I'd point to gross negatilegnce as the cause of a horrible accident.

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MattysGurl In reply to ??? [2015-05-06 20:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Moar? Please?

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GingerAle825 [2015-05-03 15:20:01 +0000 UTC]

PLEASE MAKE PT 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DA FEEELS!  DA FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                

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Pony-speedpaint-arts [2015-05-02 03:59:25 +0000 UTC]

You made me cry... I don't like crying...

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Msdrago [2015-04-27 02:56:46 +0000 UTC]

 This is gorgeous 

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MoontailDraws [2015-04-23 23:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh, you made me cry! i n i                         

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lizziepod150mlp In reply to ??? [2015-04-20 20:16:34 +0000 UTC]

555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555 WHERE IS PART 5?!

also FUCKING FEELS THIS IS AMAZING!                              

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Rainbow-Gale In reply to ??? [2015-04-10 12:47:17 +0000 UTC]

It's been well over year now. Are you going to continue this?

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PixelBlujay In reply to ??? [2015-04-08 06:00:06 +0000 UTC]

liquid pride, just liquid pride

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Monkeyrofl901 In reply to ??? [2015-04-05 05:29:43 +0000 UTC]

The tears are streaming down my face right now.

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Waresammy In reply to ??? [2015-04-04 13:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Sooo... next part?
Approx. how much 'till it can be seen?
Just asking

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andaverde In reply to ??? [2015-03-20 05:48:31 +0000 UTC]

i want to both hate you and love you for this comic. i mean that part of me feels like it wants to punch you and the other part just hug you.
no matter how many times i read this or watch the vid i am SOBBING at the end. i am curios about when this will continue but you have amazing art here. the colors and lines are simple but effective as hell. i am seriously waiting for the next part and please tell me it wont make me sob myself into a coma

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imsokewl27 In reply to ??? [2015-03-18 18:55:39 +0000 UTC]

...and the whole story died after this.

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Chrismilesprower In reply to ??? [2015-03-17 22:16:17 +0000 UTC]

"Come stop your crying it'll be alright. Just take my hand, hold it tight. I will protect you from all around you. I will be here don't you cry. Cause you'll be in my heart. Yes, you'll be in my heart. From this day on, now and forever more."

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Mayamermaid In reply to ??? [2015-03-07 10:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Where is part 5 ?? *looks under chair * I not here.... *runs upstairs looking around for the laptop .searches Web. * is not here !!!!!! Nooooooooooooooo! !!

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nightmaremaster000 In reply to ??? [2015-03-07 00:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Man, the amount of emotion in these images.....I honestly can't believe it. I'm not crying, but I can say for sure if this was the route they went with in the series, it would probably been one of the most reviewed episodes and be one of the most powerful, showing how friendship and family can help you even in the darkest of times.

Granted the whole thing with Rarity is the one part that bugs me a little given we've never seen that kind of connection between them in their interactions but that's nitpicking.

Anyway, I say kudos to your comic, it's emotionally powerful and sucks the reader in from start to finish. Aces in my book.  

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StormSpackman [2015-03-06 19:18:32 +0000 UTC]

='(

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PotatoeSalsaExplodsi [2015-02-14 21:31:01 +0000 UTC]

 Y  NO MAKE PART 5?!?!?!?!?!

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TheNeoStrike In reply to ??? [2015-01-24 23:25:16 +0000 UTC]

May I share this with you ?
Not so much for the video...but for the song itself I did.......tis perfect for this moment... if no one minds checking it out "Fix You"
www.youtube.com/watch?v=bf4HyD…
^^

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Sparkliee In reply to ??? [2015-01-18 03:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh... The other ones, ermm... Not too sad or anything, but around 2-4 it was pretty sad.

1-2 Not too sad...

2-3 A lil' sad...

3-4 I'M SAD!!!         

4-5 Oh wait, there's no such thing as the 5th one.  

5-6 ... NO SUCH THING NOW STOP IT.



      The story was sad!       AND perfect!       And faboulous ~!     

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Zero-The-Heroine In reply to ??? [2015-01-14 03:09:57 +0000 UTC]

Even though I'm reading this a few years late, I can't lie. I cried while reading this.

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starchild334 In reply to ??? [2015-01-12 02:27:58 +0000 UTC]

is this the ending??

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jawsjawslove In reply to ??? [2014-12-31 03:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Where is the next part?

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FluttershyPie02 In reply to ??? [2014-12-27 17:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Is there a part 5?

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Legend-Seeker-MLP In reply to ??? [2014-12-15 22:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Nnnn, I can't, stop, the tears. It's so beautiful.

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Mayamermaid In reply to Legend-Seeker-MLP [2015-01-06 20:36:27 +0000 UTC]

ether ...  

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SassyClara123 In reply to ??? [2014-12-09 23:31:59 +0000 UTC]

please please PLEASE finish this comic!

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ANiceCupOfCocoa In reply to ??? [2014-12-09 22:14:20 +0000 UTC]

i seriously cried   

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yellowpikmin88 In reply to ??? [2014-12-07 16:10:42 +0000 UTC]

please give us part 5 we need it

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omnimonx [2014-12-06 19:18:29 +0000 UTC]

It is unbearable waiting for the next part.

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caballero-nocturno [2014-11-21 19:56:47 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

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cuellar1297 [2014-11-19 19:09:22 +0000 UTC]

i love this, but.... where are the next parts?.... a long long time have passed already....

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RebornAnimalz [2014-11-03 21:46:52 +0000 UTC]

more

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LeonArtlover2001 [2014-10-19 08:41:56 +0000 UTC]

*sniff* When part 5!!!

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bubblvicous [2014-10-15 04:38:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm (Sniff) crying right now because of this.   
When are you (Sniff) when are you gonna make the next (Hic) next one?   
I...(Sniff)....I wanna see (Hic) what happens.   

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mrhjelen [2014-10-10 16:30:46 +0000 UTC]

I'd like to say two things to you:
Firstly, damn you, damn you so very much! How can you make something so sad? I cry every time I read this story.

But secondly, also thank you, thank you very much. I envy your talent at making such a dramatic and catching story. The art is great and I especially love the way you tell the entire story about the parents' death without any text (except Rarity apologizing). These are some of the reasons why I come back for this story over and over. I've also checked out all your other comics and art, and there is no doubt that we can expect a lot more from you. You've earned many favourites and waiting patiently for your next upload.

PS: You almost made me forget that I'm watching a show made mostly for little girls.

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Libero-vivere [2014-10-08 19:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Your goal was to shock us? If that's right, you succeeded your blow !! I not stop crying behind my screen !! The story is really well built, emotions come out right away, it's so sad !!! Should I rest 2 seconds.

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NebulaNyx1 [2014-10-05 09:14:53 +0000 UTC]

I really wish this would update. Its so awesome. Why is waiting for awesome things so hard?

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Fansyboots [2014-09-30 05:29:14 +0000 UTC]

This should help the viewers recover. 

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PyramidHead90 In reply to Fansyboots [2014-09-30 16:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Here, maybe this will help:

www.youtube.com/watch?v=eCB_IN…

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JNinelives [2014-09-25 12:12:28 +0000 UTC]

Superkeen for the next installment!

I was going to say also superkeen for the dub... until I saw your update.
Perfect timing - heading there now!

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PyramidHead90 [2014-09-24 10:55:25 +0000 UTC]

You know, this needs some appropriate tunes.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=WlBiLN…

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Icantevenart [2014-09-16 21:51:04 +0000 UTC]

"So do Ah..."

"Ah...Aaah."

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"

uncyclopedia.wikia.com/wiki/AA… !

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Eevee-Adopt-Mart [2014-09-14 19:05:15 +0000 UTC]

40TH PANEL.... FEEEEEELS!!!!!!

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