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Published: 2012-08-09 11:34:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 4389; Favourites: 77; Downloads: 13
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intresting story so fare!! I wonder why he didnt die or the deer he bite
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The story is very intriguing. Can't wait to know why they are not being infected!
Also I love the drawings and the set up of the page is good and makes it easy to follow! But the characters don't entirely look like they are connected to the background. Specially in the 3rd panel, I think it needs a bit more defining... but apart from that and the grammatical errors but that is understandable it's great!
Also I hope I don't seem like I'm being rude. Take this as constructive critism....unless you didn't want any...in which case I fail X3
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nah well the background isnt done by me though I like it that way
Thanks :3
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Deine Comics sind echt super :3 von beginn an interessant und mitreiΓend 
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Wo mich reiΓt es jetzt schon mit *-* ich will mehr *den Monitor umklammer*
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nummer 3 is aufm weg
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I really like this ^-^ But I thought'd I'd just help with something just a bit ^-^"
In the second panel, it should say "He didn't KNOW" instead of he didn't KNEW.
And in the third, strenght is supposed to be spelled STRENGTH.
Also, some of the wording seems a bit off, but I'm not gonna make changes to that ^-^"
Anyway, I'm sorry if you thought I was rude for correcting you, but grammar is kind of my thing ^-^' Awesome page though!
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thanks
normally I have one who reads over ^^
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klingt recht interessant , bin gespannt wies weiter geht und worum genau es nun geht
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I like the silhouettes in the first panel. IΒ΄m excited what happens on the next page. Poor Pelkar, love his face (with the infection, yes^^)
(and yeeeah-still learn english-sorry XD)
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