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Published: 2011-01-27 14:27:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 7363; Favourites: 117; Downloads: 13
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wait the black wolf's eyes are blue...is her mom Sehelai?
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yay i'm smart! lol i get excited about knowing things
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I don't know if someone has already pointed this out to you, but in the last panel it should say "There are too many to be sure" rather than "to" in order to be grammatically correct.
Wonderful page, though!
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thanks
normally there is one who corrects my stuff
hmm well thanks^^
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You're welcome! Your English definitely is getting better!
It's a really common grammar mistake for native English speakers, so maybe that's why a lot of people overlooked it.
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this page is amazing 
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thanks <3
especially the backgrounds break me often xD
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ahaha I can understand you ;__;
Backgrounds will kill us xD
♥
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OOOO it got tense 
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Great page as always, but still grammar mistakes (no big deal, though XD)
Fourth Bubble:
-"We got visitors" should be "We have visitors" or "We've got Visitors" (you pick, they're both fine)
-The rest of that bubble should be more like "They've been surrounding us for a while"
Last Bubble:
-The first two sentences are kind of repetitive... insted of "To many to say how many are out there" it should be "There are too many to be sure"
The rest is great
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Thank you ;D and yay I get better xD
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Lukela....sounds so nice! Is black wolfy a boy or a girl?
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Girl power! I can't wait to see more!
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*Gasp* i hate yewww....you can draw better than meh D:
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i just get frustrated with myself -_-
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but i like your wolf comic
hope to see the next page xP
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Thats great
how many do you think your going to make for the whole story?
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puh dont know
but at 50 or so, I will make first book
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wow...well good luck with them
^ 3 ^
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I love Lukela's expression in 2nd panel
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omg its so good i love the teath close up one ^^
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thanks x3
I could never have done without the ref xD
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thanks :3
Im sketching on it^^
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haha no she isnt xD
and thanks^^
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