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Published: 2011-06-30 16:46:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 4754; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 12
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Tried a new way of outlines on this page
And I like it^^
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Comments: 27
mslght [2023-11-07 04:58:24 +0000 UTC]
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GummyBirbs In reply to NathalieNova [2012-03-18 15:04:16 +0000 UTC]
Its dooom and make the next page >:c I'm bored without it from you
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rexyplexy [2011-07-02 16:53:17 +0000 UTC]
Ah, cool. I like how you did the shading on the last two panels.
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nessygirl [2011-06-30 20:03:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh snap! I think I can tell where this is going to lead to...
Great job, I like their expressions in panels 1 and 3
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NathalieNova In reply to nessygirl [2011-06-30 20:09:00 +0000 UTC]
thank you ;D
I do too hehehe
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UmaraeValarieus [2011-06-30 17:37:57 +0000 UTC]
i love the story and i cant wait to read more. though if i may point out, it is a little hard to understand what is being said in the third pannel.
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NathalieNova In reply to UmaraeValarieus [2011-06-30 17:40:26 +0000 UTC]
uhm I meant that the paretns may overreact if they find their pup with them
because the pup already was hurt once and they want to protect it even more than a normal pup
you know? :3
and thanks
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UmaraeValarieus In reply to NathalieNova [2011-06-30 18:42:09 +0000 UTC]
ok, thank you for making that more clear
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NathalieNova In reply to razorthewolflover [2011-06-30 16:51:27 +0000 UTC]
Im not a machine xD
I do besst xD
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razorthewolflover In reply to NathalieNova [2011-06-30 16:52:22 +0000 UTC]
I know, I'm just saying its getting really good now and I wanna kno wat happens!!!
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NathalieNova In reply to razorthewolflover [2011-06-30 16:56:15 +0000 UTC]
that was the official end of the "zero" chapter
that means next chapter will turn up
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