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Edit: This is a redone version. All pages will go through this process
Correction read by *XxDragonWolfxX Thanks :3
Clout Heart is completely Β©
Dont use in any way!
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^^ brother against brother....classic! : D
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Same I Was Like Gob Smacked Wellll Paw Slapped XD
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can't wait for other redone page
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Woah, big revelation here, but anyway...
3rd Bubble:
-"I go to sleep now" should be "I'm going to sleep now"
4th bubble:
-"where" should be "were"
7th Bubble:
-"I will never forgive you that betrayal on us Arthas!" should be "I will never forgive you for your betrayal of us, Arthas!"
And quick question, do you want me to correct punctuation too, or are you fine with it the way it is? It doesn't really affect the reading of it, but if you want to publish it or something, it will need to be fixed.
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Thanks dragi
And yeah sure correct whatever you like to correct
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ich war dabei
Wuss? er ist sein bruder.. kam das in den alten seiten auch vor oder verwechsel ich da gerade was?
ach aber ich mag dein schading. das sieht tol aus *3*
Nur mit den hintergrΓΌnden kann ich mich als Hintergrund narr noch nicht ganz anfreunden^^Β°
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ich bin nen hintergrund flopp gewΓΆhn dich dran xDD
und nein vorher kams nicht vor
die geschichte ist jetzt vom tempo etwas angezogen daher klΓ€re ich frΓΌhzeitig auf damits spΓ€ter icht zu verwechslungen kommt
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Ahh okay, na da bin ich gespannt was wir noch alles erfahren^^
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the english is kinda hard to read.... its good though
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thanks
yeah will be corrected
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NOOO! I Won the bet! -.- I am not happy about it though.... T_T
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The second panel, is hilarious, sorry, but It is, Horus's left eye is squinted in disgust xD
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xD
haha thanks x3 yeah he looks kinda weird xD
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Lol, I love the comic tohugh, it's splendid. ^^
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thank you 
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Only of course ^^
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When are you going to come out with the next page?
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the next page is making me so ... I dont know xD
but I finished the backgrounds
I would just have to add the color, shadows and extras like eyes...
but everytime I start, I get interupted by something
and I do other drawings then, cause I want to make a good page and not a "I have no time!" page...
and then the stress with my internship
naah but I think the next will come out BEFORE christmas! thats sure^^
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its such a sad story.. Dx but its soo good =} i like the art too. Good job
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yeah its hard to find such good story, cause of the many comics that are out there^^
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Yeah, i write. So i get alot of stories, i have 3 i want to make into comics. The Last Silver Fang, The silver Cherry blossum, and the Phantom's Order. They are all about wolves, and my characters and freinds characters. Kamikaze Yuri Okami is the main she is the last Silver fang Okami. ( I love Okami btw)
Gin Sakura is the main chara, in the silver cherry blossum. Its really said, its like a series. i should let you take a sneek peak. ^_^ I'm sure you would want to. All the charas are people i wolf roleplay with. So most of those events and fights are what really happen in our rp.
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so rp comics^^
thats nice too :3
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yep pretty much. we should make a story, that would be cool. ^_^
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uaa noes a new time stealer xD
I am happy if I get some pages finnished of cloutheart xD
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if you ever need help with some events just ask me, i'll be happy to help. ^^
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This is really good, but you're grammar needs some work
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naah xD
not mine :3
or... na half^^
I have a translater but she havent watched over it till now^^
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Yes, it is awesome! XD
Ah, I see
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yeah that was my first wtf face xD
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