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Here is Scene 4!Heh, This one was easy. The only challenge was the background, which was fun
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Punch-Holer [2014-10-24 12:58:28 +0000 UTC]
A bit of critique here, maybe you should first show the traffic officer (the girl) first in front view, then when the conversation begins the girl kind of walks off while the focus is going to Linda and Robert crossing the road. It'll show more emphasis on the role reversal.
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Nayolfa In reply to Punch-Holer [2014-10-27 02:29:07 +0000 UTC]
Maybe have a short scene of the traffic officer blowing a whistle and showing the stop sign up close before focusing on the entire scene.
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charliedoes69 [2014-08-12 10:44:43 +0000 UTC]
You should have a car screech off the road. lol.
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Nayolfa In reply to charliedoes69 [2014-08-12 13:55:25 +0000 UTC]
We don't what to give the animators to much trouble for the pilot.
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charliedoes69 In reply to Nayolfa [2014-08-12 23:42:15 +0000 UTC]
Oh sorry thought it be funny.
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IkkoArts [2014-08-10 01:15:12 +0000 UTC]
Is... is that... DORA THE EXPLORER at the crosswalk?!
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LoreweaverKnight [2014-08-08 17:32:00 +0000 UTC]
Duuuuuuude. This is getting better and better. Aweeeesooome!
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TheRealSilentName [2014-08-08 04:28:45 +0000 UTC]
>They cross a crosswalk with a kid who is having a lot of fun with his stop sign.
>with a kid who is having a lot of fun with his stop sign.
>who is having a lot of fun with his stop sign.
>a lot of fun with his stop sign.
>fun with his stop sign.
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EverythingReviewer In reply to TheRealSilentName [2014-08-08 18:45:35 +0000 UTC]
Annnnnd "his" is also referred to the neuter gender. Sorry for being a grammar nazi.
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Nayolfa In reply to TheRealSilentName [2014-08-08 04:33:19 +0000 UTC]
Heh, they are just petty background characters, their gender doesn't need to be right Anyways, next scene there is two boys in there, so I'm kinda balancing out the first couple of background kids with an equal number of genders.
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Lyoko251616 In reply to Nayolfa [2014-08-08 05:03:08 +0000 UTC]
I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but the boy in the storyboard looks like a girl.
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Nayolfa In reply to Lyoko251616 [2014-08-08 05:08:41 +0000 UTC]
Screw the script I can draw!
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Lyoko251616 In reply to Nayolfa [2014-08-08 05:09:23 +0000 UTC]
You are great at it. I promise you.
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TheRealSilentName In reply to Nayolfa [2014-08-08 05:01:36 +0000 UTC]
Still...FUN with his STOP SIGN...if you know what I mean.
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Nayolfa In reply to TheRealSilentName [2014-08-08 05:05:56 +0000 UTC]
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TheRealSilentName In reply to Nayolfa [2014-08-08 05:20:34 +0000 UTC]
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Nayolfa In reply to TheRealSilentName [2014-08-08 05:25:59 +0000 UTC]
And I *pokes you* FELT you did.
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DigbyTheGoat [2014-08-08 02:17:15 +0000 UTC]
Neat. How are you gonna handle the lip-syncing.
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Nayolfa In reply to DigbyTheGoat [2014-08-08 02:25:43 +0000 UTC]
Thats the animators problem. I'm a storyboard artist.
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DigbyTheGoat In reply to Nayolfa [2014-08-08 02:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh I thought you were the animator.
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Nayolfa In reply to DigbyTheGoat [2014-08-08 02:59:23 +0000 UTC]
I can animate frame by frame, but I just started doing such things.
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Nayolfa In reply to DigbyTheGoat [2014-08-08 04:45:04 +0000 UTC]
I probably might do something for it after I finish the storyboard.
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DrawingLamandSam In reply to Nayolfa [2014-08-08 02:30:38 +0000 UTC]
Lip-syncing sucks, and I talk from experience. Not that bad once you get use to vowels and stuff though
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Lyoko251616 In reply to DigbyTheGoat [2014-08-08 02:18:52 +0000 UTC]
The guy will get there when he gets there.
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