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Nayolfa — Clean Up on Smile Five - PG 12
Published: 2014-05-09 19:45:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 6999; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 17
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First Page: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )
PG 11: ( nayolfa.deviantart.com/art/Cle… )
PG 13: ( Unfinished )
Time Spent: 20:40 hours
7:20 (Inking)
13:20 (coloring)
Layers: 209
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PLEASE COMMENT! IT GIVES ME MORE MOTIVATION..
No lie, I live off the comments whether bad or good.
And yet again more improving!!! This time I made sure the thickness of the lines on the ponies were in tune to the show's ideal style. Also the page was really fun to draw!!! Especially Applejack!!! She was the highlight when I did the page. Enjoy!!!!
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This comic is being drawn for my own experience, to raise awareness for a project is hosting to create a fan-made episode of MLP: FiM, and to also give a visual aspect of the story. You can find the update video, and his story that he, I, and many others think is MLP: FiM quality.
STORY: www.fimfiction.net/story/10823…
VIDEO: www.youtube.com/watch?v=RDiJer…
My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.
This comic is being produced for non-profiting goals.
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sorry dude, much better things to do. Gotta keep improving,
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I guess Growing Around kinda eclipsed this...
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I stopped it a long time before starting growing Around, but yes.
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have to ask - pen, paper, programs used?
trying to teach my self to draw (and the new wacom tablet not helping atm lol)
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I sketched it out digitally, then Drew it traditionally, From there I would bring the traditional finished page into photoshop to color it. I don't recommend that, it was needlessly complicated.
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Lol, Pinkie is funny sitting under that apple cart.
Was the comma intentional when Pinkie says "hide me," ?
I like the sounds effects in the last panel, and the use of colour for character names.
I'm not sure why Applejack is angry is the last panel though.
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I think it was.
And Applejack is angry because she was hiding. I don't know. Read the script :3
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Probably not, I've been busy storyboarding a cartoon as of now and it's taking up nearly all my time.
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Sorry, but working on Growing around is more likely to pay off better than a MLP comic in the long run.
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That would be nice, but this would have to be fit into the modern show then. With all the changes, there would have to be some tweaking to fit the world.
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That's a very good point, and well made too.
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Another good point is an arrow, they are very sharp.
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I do have problems 
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oh, no. I simply ment it as a joke. Me and my friends are really weird, so when one of us does something, like tells a lame joke, i always say "You have problems, my friend" its just meant as a joke
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Well it's not really a joke unless the intended audience gets it XD
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You know, we clearly saw in one episode that Zecora has a potion recipe that can repair a pony's broken tooth. Are they unaware of this? Also, is there no magic spell that could fix the damage? I'm probably over thinking this, but there do appear to be a couple of ways around this other than the dentist.
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There is no evidence to support that the main six knows of Zecora's potion. And if there was a magic spell, there would be no conflict! Also I don't think magic works on the physical body anyways!
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Fair enough. I suppose the only way they would know is if Apple Bloom were to tell them, though she really had no reason to. Yes, I know we don't want to have magic just be the answer to everything. We have seen on the show that it does work on the body when being used to attack, but I understand what you're saying.
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Yay! An emotion somebody had got out of the comic!!! whoot!
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That last panel is my favorite; love this whole comic!
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*Fun Fact*
The last panel was the most fun for me to draw!"
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Makes sense
Also, that fire in the background...
...like dang, bro...
I'm jealous
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I actually just referenced off the show's fire 
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