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Nayolfa — Clean up on Smile Five - PG 2
Published: 2013-11-01 19:04:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 6914; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 13
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PG 1: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )
PG 3: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )
Time Spent: 13 hours
Layers: 101 "That's an Academy Record!"
*EDIT 11/12/13* I edited the layout so that it's flopped.
*UPDATE 11/14/13* Thanks for the 1000 views!
*UPDATE 1/4/14* Thanks for the 2000 views!
PLEASE COMMENT! THIS TOOK A LONG TIME!
Wow! That took a lot of work! And I already improved so much from the first page! Now this page was kinda pointless, but I did it to have a bit of fun. Also, what do you think of the action words? I drew them instead of typing them, and I don't know if I did good on them or not.
Anyways, the next page should be easy because I don't need a background in most of it! So I'm just going to have fun with random designs or leave it blank.
This comic is being drawn for my own experience, to raise awareness for a project is hosting to create a fan-made episode of MLP: FiM, and to also give a visual aspect of the story. You can find the update video, and his story that he, I, and many others think is MLP: FiM quality.
STORY: www.fimfiction.net/story/10823…
VIDEO: www.youtube.com/watch?v=RDiJer…
My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.
This comic is being produced for non-profiting goals.
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Comments: 48
Such aww, much disappointment, don't know rest
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I think this is cooler farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea…
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Pinkie's face is a little odd on panel 3.
Still, though, good job!
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Thanks! As I watched the show again, I realized I kinda keep messing up on the face's I need to work on them! However, I think that was the best face I drew in this page
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Sounds like a good idea. I'm interested to find out where this will go! Not sure if it's going to be a continuous story or what, but I like it so far!
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It's going to continue for 64 pages (guesstimate) hopefully! I'm testing out making a story into a comic, and to tell the story with a good quality imagery to show for it. I'm doing a new page each Thursday or Friday if you really interested
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Cool! Thanks for letting me know
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I'll spam you twice with PG 5 so you view it >:3 farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea…
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If the candy apple's safe, everythings safe! Or is it bad it's safe!!! DUH DUH DUUUUUUUUUUUUH!
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I need to finish PG 4 this weekend, and finish PG 3 coloring...
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Am I the only one who doesn't understand any of the action in the lower half of this page?
I looked at the first page, but that didn't help me understand this part any...
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Your not the first, don't worry. I was mostly messing around on this page so it's hard to understand.
Basically I made Pinkie struggle to pull out the candy apple. And she pulled hard enough that she flung back against the door when she pulled it free. She then bounced off the door and flew over the candy pile, trying to bite off the top piece of candy. But failed to do so and slammed against the wall. She then flops over and falls onto her bed, still holding the candy apple in the air.
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Oh okay. Thanks for clarifying!
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I think I made the actions on the page easier to understand on PG 5 farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea…
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Thank you! Hopefully I can draw the next page in time because I'm just now starting, on the day I usually finish the inked page
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You're welcome
That's great, I can't wait
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It's not great! It mean's I'm going to be late with this page!!!!
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But important is that, it will be finish sooner or later
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That's what I said two days ago. And look where it's got me...
Nowhere...
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Don't say like that
If something has to be good, it must take longer time.
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No, I mean I just didn't start it because I kept saying I'll finish it sooner or later. I finally started today though, and I finished 4/6th of the panels. And I realized how easy it was.
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I'm not mad at you because of that 
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I can imagine this scene being animated. Speechless shenanigans.
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Thanks! That's what I was hoping for! But a lot of people I showed it too had a hard time understanding what was going on here :I
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Thanks for viewing! And laughing :3
But we don't have many people to help with the fan-made episode, so it's possibility of ever coming to light is very slim. I'm just doing my best to raise more awareness :3
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I hope it happens! That would be awesome.
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I better start the third page then :I
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Except I'm very busy right now, and I don't know if I can even start on it :I I hope I can start it soon... But first, time to watch THE POWERPUFF GIRLZ!!!
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Thanks! I hope to capture them as much in the next page, which I should be making instead of being lazy on youtube
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Hahaha, don't worry
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*Hasn't started yet*
Ya... I'm sure I can... (also has to make a video before tuesday, and draw 5 things for art class)
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Your welcome! And it's my pleasure! The first two pages I did were kind of pointless and were generally just for fun.
In the next two pages, your going to see Pinkie break her tooth just as described in your story, and from then on, I'm going to stick to your story as closely as I can, and maybe add on to some action's Pinkie does just for fun :3
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Awesome. I can't wait to see it.
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