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Nayolfa — Clean up on Smile Five - PG 4
Published: 2013-11-21 21:31:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 7264; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 12
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First Page: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )
PG 3: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )
PG 5: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )
Time Spent: 12 hours
Layers: 72
*12/5/13* Thanks for the 1000 views!
PLEASE COMMENT! THIS TOOK A LONG TIME!
So on this page I had a lot of fun making Pinkie look worried and sad. I don't think I like the text I drew though. Anybody have feedback for it? Well anyways, I have no clue why I drew that background for the first panel so don't ask XD
So this ends the first four pages of my comic which set up the premise of the story. Now I can move on and introduce the Mane Six slowly and start the dialogue! And I get to draw Pinkie's past soon!!!
This comic is being drawn for my own experience, to raise awareness for a project is hosting to create a fan-made episode of MLP: FiM, and to also give a visual aspect of the story. You can find the update video, and his story that he, I, and many others think is MLP: FiM quality.
STORY: www.fimfiction.net/story/10823…
VIDEO: www.youtube.com/watch?v=RDiJer…
My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.
This comic is being produced for non-profiting goals.
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Comments: 40
It would have been good to see the mirror more clearly before she looks in it to clarify that what we are seeing in panel 5 is her reflection. Maybe sometime in the first three panels.
I like this page, but I think that would help build up tension before we see what has happened to her damage!
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But seeing the mirror up close requires effort :I
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what the backgroud mean on the first panel? it's look like Tryphobia
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It means nothing, it's just a random design XD
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but nonetheless the background where it scare me
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Wow, surprised at how unknown this piece is (According to number of comments) I mean, it's a great piece when I first saw it I figured it have a ton, do to the quality of the piece. But, anyways! (Kitty licked that first part from your memory!) The piece is great I had thought the first panel's background was just Pinkie's tooth, no need to ask. Haha 
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What are you talking about! I slacked off on this page, It just sucks
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Honestly I think this page and the next aren't as good as the first 3. No offense.
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Non taken, but I think the next is the best so far
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Don't worry, this story ends on a happy note
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Read the next page 
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Wanna read more of the comic
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Sad Pinkie makes me sad.
This is awesome though!! Can't wait for the next one
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Thanks! And I'm not sure If I can get the next one out by next week unfortunately
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I thought that the first panel background was pinkie's teeth with hole in them, the I read your description and not sure what it is now
Great comic so far
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Wow, Thanks! I didn't really get any comments about doing good on the whole thing so far except from the story writer! Thank you! You made my day :3
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Oh welcome c: I'm very glad it made your day
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Here's the fifth page of the comic if your interested, I improved heavily on it. farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea…
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ok, I am interested in the story, I must come back to your page at random day/week/month to see your comic and it great
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You know, you'd think her pinkie sense would have saw that coming.
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That thing happens randomly for vague and immediate actions. And it's not really appriciated by many fans so I don't think it was incorperated in here
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