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Nayolfa — Clean up on Smile Five - PG 1
Published: 2013-10-24 21:14:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 8298; Favourites: 118; Downloads: 21
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COVER PAGE: (I don't know when I'll get to it)
PG 2: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )
Time Spent: 12 hours
Layers: 87
*UPDATE: NOV. 1* Fixed the creepy eyes a bit
*UPDATE: DEC. 26* Wow! Thanks for the 2000 views!
PLEASE COMMENT! THIS TOOK A LOT OF WORK!!!
I'm going to try and draw one of these pages each week, but I'm concerned about the next page, because it has 10 panels, so it might take more than a week. Just a heads up.
This comic is being drawn for my own experience, to raise awareness for a project is hosting to create a fan-made episode of MLP: FiM, and to also give a visual aspect of the story. You can find the update video, and his story that he, I, and many others think is MLP: FiM quality.
STORY: www.fimfiction.net/story/10823…
VIDEO: www.youtube.com/watch?v=RDiJer…
My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.
This comic is being produced for non-profiting goals.
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Comments: 72
This is what happens when you practice
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I'll try practicing more then.
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What are the dark brown rectangular shapes in the candy piles, with white interior? Chocolate?
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I wish MrEnter could still continue this project.
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But we must twork on Growing Around now!
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Interesting comic about Pinkie Pie, Clean up on Smile are pretty cute and fun to watch, Pinkie Pie surely treasures her sweets.
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Thanks! I don't know when I'll be able to get back to drawing this though >.<
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Tell Mr Enter that he does a hell of a better job emulating Friendship is Magic than Double Rainboom did.
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The reaction to every episode.
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I hope this becomes a fan made episode this is soooo Pinkie Pie
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I think deep inside, we all want another fan episode
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Yeah we all do I just hope that MrEnter's can one day become one of them
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Hey, I just read that story a couple of nights ago!
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Nice! I hope I give you the same satisfaction from the comic I'm making
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Thank you! But I think this page wins the prize for being the cutest ~ farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… (I just finished it an hour ago 
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Then there would be no hope for Equestria...
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Interesting new style. The colours are vivid and cartoon-like ^^
Admittedly i don´t know the tv show well but it seems to me you are a so-called Brony, right?
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Thank you! I worked hard to give it a nice popping color scheme!
And yes, I am a "Brony". I was skeptical of the show because of what it looked like, but it's actually quite a good show that teaches great morals (most of the time) though interesting stories. I recommend it to anyone who likes animations and Slice of Life comedy!
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I had the same situation with the brony thing. I think ultimately it was the music that persuaded me to try out the show, though. And I watched all 3 seasons in under a month. WHY DO I ALWAYS DO THAT??
Eyup. Heard season 4 is coming out soon, though!
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I watched all three seasons in under a week
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Yay! Wait. Season 3 finale. Twilight has wings and is a princess.
FFFFFFFUUUUUUUU
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It's not bad at all. She still is the adorkable Twilight we love at heart, but she just had a new physical trait, and a new responsibility, that I hope will conflict well in season 4 situations! I honestly don't understand why fan's are so upset about it.
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Well, it basically creates this huge imbalance among the 6 main characters of the show. Prior to Twilight becoming an alicorn, there were two pegasi (Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy), two unicorns (Twilight and Rarity) and two "regular" ponies (Applejack and Pinkie Pie).
Now, there's Two Ponies, Two pegasi, one unicorn, and one alicorn. If you count an alicorn as one-half each of pegasi and unicorn, that's Two ponies, two-and-a-half pegasi, and one-and-a-half unicorns. Confused yet?
Plus, Twilight being amazing at magic, and all that stuff, PLUS being a princess and having wings?? I mean, seriously, could you possibly make a character have more imbalanced power?
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It's not gonna detract from any of the experience... They don't use that element that much when story telling, and I don't think it'll be much of an issue in the future.
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Will you tell me if you like this? farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea…
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Season 4 Primere totally fixed all potential problems with the season 3 finale.
Anyway, I think it's okay, but the linework seems a bit clunky to me.
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Thank you! That part was the hardest!
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I thought so
Maybe you would like to do some drawing for me? Of course if you want and have free time
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Oh, that's great 
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How bout I draw a Discord Page and have Screwball on it 
I might have time if PG 3 of my comic is super easy to draw!!!
Also, PG 2! farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea…
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Yes, this is very good idea! I'm so glad, and can't wait to see your work
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If I get page three done early, I'll make sure to attempt this!
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Ya, I never got to this
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Finished PG 2 :3 www.deviantart.com/art/Clean-u…
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Great stuff you've managed to get goin' on here!
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Thanks! I hope I can continue it!
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