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Nayolfa — Clean Up on Smile Five - PG 9
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First Page: ( farcri.deviantart.com/art/Clea… )
PG 8: ( nayolfa.deviantart.com/art/Cle… )
PG 10: ( nayolfa.deviantart.com/art/Cle… )
Time Spent: 25 bucking hours...
8:00 (Inking)
17:00 (coloring)
Layers: 227 "THATS A NEW ACADEMY RECORD!!!"
PLEASE COMMENT! IT GIVES ME MORE MOTIVATION..
No lie, I live off the comments whether bad or good.
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I did it! I finally did it! I have managed to replicate the show's art style! It only took 9 pages. So what do you guys think of it? I mean worked extra hard on it and I want your true opinion on it.
:Anyways, I think I broke the 4th wall of the comic with Pinkie, is that even possible?:
So , after I did this page I thought to myself that in a few more pages I might be able to have the style down.
Anyways, If you get a storyboarder for the project, I'm pretty sure I can work on the backgrounds and vectors for things like houses. Just a note for you.
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This comic is being drawn for my own experience, to raise awareness for a project is hosting to create a fan-made episode of MLP: FiM, and to also give a visual aspect of the story. You can find the update video, and his story that he, I, and many others think is MLP: FiM quality.
STORY: www.fimfiction.net/story/10823…
VIDEO: www.youtube.com/watch?v=RDiJer…
My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.
This comic is being produced for non-profiting goals.
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Comments: 64
I'm really sorry, but the banana stood out for me too. Maybe because it is yellow and everything else is black or brown?
Or because everything else looks like it could be painful?
I like the random objects though 
Nice reveal on the last panel. How did she even?
Edit: I'm not sure if it is thicker borders or more contrast or higher quality image, but the characters seem more clearly defined from this comic onward.
They are much more pleasant to look at, particularly zoomed in.
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I improved over every page, so many of your critiques might die down.
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You did ask for feedback on every comic. (shrugs).
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Yep. But these were from last year XD
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I've been here two weeks. Everything is new to me
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It's always the banana, always the banana, why can't it be the bowie knife?
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Now my father is evil? oh my.
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This back flash story of pinkie pie reminds me of a story that Dr.Doofensmertz terrible backflash story of phineas and ferb.
"It all started when I was a little filly on a rock farm. I was moving some rocks around to the west field when my darling mother called me for dinner.
I was running home until i tripped on a rock and hit my face on a boulder. after that happened I saw some wierd rocks i dunno but I started tasting foul in my mouth, I realized I broke my teeth. so my dad took me into the dentist to have my teeth fixed only to realize that the dentist has all these scary tools and contraptions that will do terrible things to me."
Pinkamena: so now I will eliminate all the dentist in the entire ponyville area!!( Evil laugh)
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Heh, I haven't watched that show in 2 years, but I can see that happening
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I bet the secret agent will be called "Agent A" because Angel barely has his own show.
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Bon Bon: Agent A, we apologize for not giving you a day off, but it appears that Dr. pinkimina is at it again! our Intel says that she was mysteriously buying a lot of toothpaste and a lot a gum, If you ask me I say it's a recipe for disaster. go get her agent A.
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here, maybe this story might clear it up.
tritebristle.deviantart.com/ar…
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Celestia shall destory him for holding such a holy relic
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She will banish him, but no to the moon that is too merciful, he is going straight to the SUN!!!!
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"Are you a mmmmm beeiichh who uses mmmm bananas on patients? Yes? Then good! BECAUSE YOU GOING TO GO BANANA'S ON THE SUN!!!!!"
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Everyone questions the banana!!! But NO, don't ask about the bowie knife, the dinosaur tooth, nor the bucking Sharpe marker XD
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Wait...why does that Dentist have a banana?
What does bananas have to do with fixing teeth.
WHAT IS HE GOING TO DO WITH THAT BANANA!!!!!
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In case he gets hungry he has to eat something! So why not banana?
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HA! Really! A Drill and a scared tooth! yeah that will make the fillies feel safe and comfortable and why was their a banana and a bunch of non dental related things that the dentist had to use on her.
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I was thinking of something absurd for a Dentist, did I do a good job?
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More than a job you made a psychopathic dentist.
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Dr. Dennis the Dinosaur Unicorn is best psychopathic pony
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The OC I made up in 5 minutes for the dentist
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Ok. Make him replace pinkies real teeth with some gag teeth next time she comes back.
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Thank you! I already improved from this though XD
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It looks very nice. You almost got the show's style down pat. If Pinkie is upside down, shouldn't her sweat run up her face, or is that a misdirection kind of thing? Also, sad pinkie is Sad.
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Thank you! And yes, I realized the same thing, but I already spend so much time doing it, so I said "Buck it! It'll be that way!"
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Thank you! And thanks for the motivation! I'm going to work on it now!!!
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I make Pinkie visibly break the 4th wall, improve on the art style drastically, spend 25 hours on this, and this is the main comment?
CAN'T A MAN DRAW A BANANA IN PEACE NOWADAYS?
Basically, I was done creating creative tools that resemble things a dentist would use and decided to throw a few random things in, and a banana was sitting in front of me at the time so I said "BANANA! YES!"
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