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Published: 2003-05-25 16:38:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 17131; Favourites: 484; Downloads: 2680
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Been trying for sometime to put this poem to visual art, think I finally managed to. Manipualtion and poem are both by me. Enjoy!stock by:
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I sit, feeling my insides churning
Wanting to scream
To make you see me
Understand me
Who I am, what I am, what I need
Need from you, someone....anyone
Needing release, fullfilment, touch
So much wanting...needing
I watch, feeling these things
At times feeling nothing
Wondering if this is all there is
Is there nothing more?
Is this all that I deserve?
Am I wicked?
Because of all I want and need?
Still there is no answer
And so I sit in silence.............and scream.
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awesome, really well done my friend, the cool subject, the lovely poem, pure light.
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Very good picture indeed - though I must say that the poem impressed me even more, for various reasons I shall not name here...
One thing which is a bit disturbing still is the size of the eyes (too big!). But that's a personal opinion, I suppose.
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sweet manip. the stock could have been better quality, but other than that good job.
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Hehe, I don't know if another comment really matters here but I'll do it anyway. Incredible job on visual effects, perfect blending and nice atmosphere. Overall this deserves an A+++
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wow... i find this quite creepy o_o; especially the eyes which are captivating. same with the blood-like texture. very nice work.
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This is awesome again... fantastic skill and yet intense and gripping, and touching... amazing work! It's also so... how to put it... I like the way the hand is pushed into the skin and mouth not only bec it's done with great skill, but also because it seems as if he/she was biting on her fingers a bit... almost as if trying to keep him-/herself from letting it out at the same time when craving to let it out... being afraid of uttering the 'wicked' wishes? Just letting my thoughts wander here...
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wow! very cool!!! great colours and everything! i like the eyes the best, beautiful work
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i love the mouth through the hand. excellent job!!!!
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amazing amazing and amazing!
you had a really good idea
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this is like... so filled with details... tones = great,
realisim is so close to perfection too... good job.
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WOW WOW . Great Idea. I Like It
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oooh, quite freaky. Cool *likes the eyes*
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You are so good that it hurts my head.
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wow! very expressive! i love the colors!
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gorgeous work gf!!
kiks ass
^,,^
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Very well done Nebu.
As always I am a bit late here.
Awesome texture work. It looks so real.
The poem is well done too. Very emotional.
"Very well done Nebu.
As always I am a bit late here.
Awesome texture work. It looks so real"
Awesome combo. Congrats on the DTF!
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WOW!..amazing work youΒ΄ve done here...*am speachless*...much better up close than in the thumbnail
Way to go!
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Nasty pic!! Looks very good Γ€ndΓ₯ (damn I cant find that word in english)
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holy cow pie thats realy cool
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the texture over the eye that ends in the hand looks very flat, and makes it look a bit of depth and proportion. the surroundings on the mouth are... well, they need more blending. and theres soemthing about the edges of the eyes that kinda bothers me
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a great pic, fantastic work, I love it
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yo.. OMG!!! i love the eyes... there so... intense and moving...
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Super duper!!!!!! Give us more...
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aj..aj ... this real kickk asshhh ammman
and all your galleryzz
+ fav = [downlo.]
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--- A Dream Within A Dream ----
Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow:
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if Hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.
I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand --
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep -- while I weep!
O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?
Edgar Allen Poe (1809-1849)
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what an amazing, amazing job...perfection
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Waah good use of texture ..... amazing ... and i like the poem too
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poem is very good, image is fine and pretty, btw i saw a very similar one used for the logo of a video-board of a famous computer manufacturer.
no matter of it, your one is still awesome. textures are very nice, in a good association with your poem
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This picture is excellent.. you're so talented >_
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as i have already told you this does indeed rock i do like the hand and mouth merge. sadly im not very good at critiqueing poems (not my thing , sorry) but what i do know is that you are up against 5 other anime pictures in dtf and you are kicking their asses
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Nice image, nice poem. It is so deep. Images were painted in my head
congratulations. It is just
GREAT
:CLAP:
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I really suggest myself infront of this pic... great emotion, great spirit movements. Also the elaboration is great too... love those finger in the mouth!
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Both image and poem is one of a kind, +fav for sure
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im lovin the photo manip. im also lovin the poem.
good stuff man
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I absolutely love everything about this. The image is amazing...it's brilliant and the poem is perfect and completely touches me...thank you so much for submitting this. Just...perfect...Favorite...
>Sin
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i love the transparent hand placed over the mouth ,impressive facial expression
awesome piece*
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its disturbingly beautiful.. things like that really attract me. i love the way the blood covers half the face.. its a very interesting concept and the whole hand over mouth with a mouth? haha well its works really well with your poem, which in itself is a whole other piece of beautiful work.. FAV!
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