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You feel your sins crawling on your back for real.
MAN OH MAN DID IT TAKE A LONG TIME TO GET HERE. One of the more important earlier pages that I've been trying to get to
And a very long page! Woo!I'm still not sure on the numbering system for chapters and pages as of yet, hopefully I'll figure out a solution soon.
Also leave it to sans to make a joke when being told he and his entire existence is some kind of fabrication created within a game
Some music
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That was why Iconsider this traveling , or more exactly a part of me goes explores gets information for outcomes and possibilities in branches in everything every discovery and skill
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OHH I KNOW WHAT SHE MEANS IS XD
the LAST PANEL
"I think i actually hurt people"
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rebhtgernfgdn sfbdsjr fnfhui ae wfjuke ewyae u euw
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That's why you don't do the genocide run.
But seriously, I've been waiting for a comic like that. Thanks. It's amazing. I'm loving it.
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This is exactly why I will probably never play the game.
Toby you made us get too attach to this world too much
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"I think I actually hurt people"
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that feeling when you type too fast and so the sentient character who is hearing your voice freaks out cause you just said something unintelligible
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Oh my gosh. Metaknowledge is so rare in fiction when it's done right, but oh boy it's just so awesome when I find a story like this!
I just read it all in one go and this honestly was among the best comics I ever read. Just the emotions, the setup, the ambience, the use of game cheatings and all that...
If I had any objections, I'd just go with Undyne. She and Papyrus act in character, but I just tend to think they arrived a little too fast considering the distance. Assuming that Undyne was in Waterfall at the time (she had no reason whatsoever to already be in Snowdin since her house is fine), it feels like Papyrus made it to Waterfall, then brought Undyne along, in just a few minutes. Even if Papyrus just called her over, I doubt Undyne could make it to Snowdin this fast... but welp. So far, this really is practically the only flaw I have to point out.
The anatomy in characters isn't always perfect, but I'll put those under the "that's because of the sprites" excuse. Besides, as stated before, the expressions are just too amazing so I easily forgive some slightly awkward postures here and there if the facial emotions keep the ambience.
So just wanted to say, I love your story because it just does everything that I wanted to write about in my own fanfic, but couldn't because of the different turn I took with the metaphysics. I'm gonna follow this, and Imma love it <3
[EDIT] (I just forgot btw, it's not important but it's practically 90% canon that Sans is actually left-handed. But who would ever care about this anyway I guess I must be among the only fans to ever care and draw such useless details x: )
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AWw;; thank you so much! yeah, this has definitely been a learning experience XD I've noticed a vast amount of improvement since I've began this project in my drawing and how efficiently I can put something together, which was a big part of why I did it in the first place! It's kept me drawing all the time. And your guys' support definitely motivates me to keep going!
There's a lot of things I could critique on it myself, (heck, I go even 3 pages back now and I wince slightly sometimes XD but that's good, it means I'm recognizing errors more quickly and know how to improve them!) but this definitely started as a fun learning experience and it was a neat idea I wanted to explore!
Which, I'd have to say, what's happened in the comic so far has mostly just been introductory concepts >w> Things go a lot more in depth
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Haha, you're welcome ^^ I worked myself on a lot of comics when I was younger, so yeah I can totally confirm that the only way to improve is to just, well, practice xD And reading, too! I remember when I was in middle school, a friend of mine introduced me to many mangas just so that I could analyze the pacing and the way the mangakas organize their pages depending on the action going on. I read that you don't actually draw the panels with some sort of "coherence" between them and only put them together at the last minute... While the reason is understandable, I just think that sometimes the pacing lacks dynamism somehow (some panels that display a quick sequence of events seem too far away one from the other, for example). It's not much, but welp.
I suggest (if it doesn't take you too much time or efforts of course) that you draw a first quick draft just in order to place the panels and make sure that the page will look the way you want it. This way you don't need to change your method at all, but you still know from the beginning how exactly you want to draw the real pages from the start ^^
In any ways, for a first comic, this is already amazing as I said, so keep going and good luck!
And yep, I do hope so. This story just got started, but it already holds so many promises! ;D
(It reminds me of my UT fanfic in a way hahaha
How you start with a Player who just messes with things they don't understand, end up in crazy situations, and how even though they are already freaking out over the "small issues", they have no idea as to what really is going on xD)
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OK the last panel means I think I actually hurt people
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This is a very cool comic so far. Keep up the good work! I wish I could interact with the characters like this.
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I think Sans needs to get a cooling bag for the player. So
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ohmygod LOL
I wonder what that last sentence SOUNDS LIKE to Sans. Gibberish?
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Very good point
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How dare you leave it on a cliffhanger here! D: *is totally hooked*
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DUM DUM DUMMMMMMMMM
*smack*
WRONG ONE
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oh.
DUN DUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
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I really love the colors on this one. you have a beautiful style!
Also WHAT IS HAPPENING HEREEEEEEEEEEEE I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
I'll be watching....
Thank you for your submission to
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*inserts www.dramabutton.com here* Monsters are real. I mean, if you believe in the multiverse theory anyway. I like to think that when we play a game that is obviously not in our universe, we are literally controlling some person's actions from across the void. That person might be thinking something along the lines of "WTF is going on? Why am I running into this wall over and over?"
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Yes, and those poor people controlled by those who are noobs at the game and have no clue what they are doing.
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There's always the disconnection. As good as Undertale is at evoking sympathy, we'll all eventually end up as disconnected as flowey once we exhaust all possible options, knowing it's all just RNG and pre-made scripts.
Then this happens, and a transdimensional conspiracy begins.
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don't worry, there's plenty more where this comes from with that
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Niiiiiiice idea with making the main character write so fast the text is not correctly spelled! Brilliant! I still wonder how does 'the game' make them look to Sans so lively and full of expressions.
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Everything will be explained
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i think the player just sleep on the keyboard x3
love this page~
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that moment when crap gets real, also thinking about their sentience than what about chara?
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I dunno, what about chara?
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GAH! Cliffhanger! Dang it! XD why do you do this to me?!
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i. love. this. page!!!!! OMG!!! SANS' FACE AT THE END AHHH!
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this is great and really interesting. I want more!!!
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whoops... well then player... it seems you have a lot to answer for huh?
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Good job, now we'll all have an A.I. Sans thrashing us around a real Judgment Hall.
What next, Terminator?
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... did you mean to write the last part like at or was at a mistake
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it works really well if it wasnt. also, its typing, so the mistakes blend in. it really feels like the player is hastily writing in a panic!
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