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Nightrizer — A Lesson in Sword Fighting | Page 3
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Characters © KhaoticVex
Art © Nightrizer
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Out of all the pages you did I think this one might just be my favorite...along with the last one, simply because of all the action and expression?? I loved this page so much it's what made me decide to make these emotes in my discord server, lol!! Especially that third panel there with Coal's smushed face, it's so utterly adorable and bratty I love him??
The movement in this page is also super nice, with Coal falling forward (looking absolutely graceless while he's at it), Spirit side-stepping, and then the movement of the sword being swung and clashing. Also real weak for the way you draw lightning, so pretty ;_; Spirit is so confident with his expressions, then real dorky in this page, too! Lil angry gives him a shock ;0
and AGAIN with the super clever choice in perspectives and paneling here, really helps to direct the reader! Plus all the clever use of sound effects -- "yeow!" are a nice touch ;u;
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why do I get Merlin and Arthur vibes from this comic and this comment, and more importantly, why am I crying?
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I've noticed something very peculiar (the good kind), and that is you choose a 'main' panel, and you make that panel the background for the entire page, wreathing the other panels in the setting for greater immersion. An absolutely brilliant and stunningly beautiful effect. More comics, friend!
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Thank you! My main inspiration for trying out this page format is from KayFedewa's comic:
This way of paneling looks super nice and I wanted to try it out. c:
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Good! Use your aggressive feelings, boy! Let the hate flow through you!
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That final swing left Blizzard in a state of shock I see!
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And that, friends is what happens when you over-commit to a stride/swing/move. 
Also... blade grabs are considered "cheating" by this dude... and using electric powers isn't...?
(I'm genuinely curious if he meant to use that power, or if he even knew about it... hmmm...)
This is a fun comic so far, btw. I love the perspective changes and the flow of the action. Good stuff!
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Shocking swordplay. Expressions are really awesome yet again!
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Yeah! The expressions are electrifying!
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I just love this comic in any single bit...
The expressions are so damn good!
And the dynamic is adorable! Just loving
Vex's Characters~
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Being able to electrify your sword is a good advantage in battle.
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