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Patchwork-Hearts — AUTUMN
Published: 2012-10-02 01:33:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1708; Favourites: 94; Downloads: 0
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Commission for ~asadd215
This title is so creative cx
I hope you like it c:
Stock coming soon -after i do homework-
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This is soooo gorgeous! <3 But I have a few things to point out here.
The lines on the horse look a bit too sketchy, unless that was part of the commission, it looks like you tried to sketch on lighting and forgot to blur/smudge it to blend with the horse.
The lighting is a little too strong, it needs to be a bit darker on the stomach, not much though.
Now on to stars.
Vision: 4 1/2 because while you did get most of the setting to blend with the horse, I think the lighting was a bit too strong and the blur is a bit too strong too.
Originality: 2 1/2 because a horse running through a field is definitely not original, but it's also not common to see the field in Autumn colours.
Technique: 4 1/2 because again, your lighting and blurring could use some work.
Impact: 4 because while it does need some fixes, it does give a really strong warm yet chilly Autumn feeling.
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Thank you so much for the critique!
Well, the sketchy lines were on purpose, the commissioner had stated like 50 bajillion times, throughout the join.me(while I was making it, so she knew what has happening) That she wanted it sketchy, and she did not want it blurred. So that was on purpose, entirely. The lighting is like that on the belly, because the horse is a roan, it has a lighter belly on its own anyways, its just the coat color.
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ooooh so pretty, patchy! I be lovin' those colors. 
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:"D Thanks! and lol x3
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Thank you so much! c:
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ermigerd i lvoe this sooo freaking much!!! how do you have so much time in your day?!
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Haha thanks, and lol I Don't, I skip homework to do this stuff and stay past midnight x3 Plus I worked on this one over a few days
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OH. i gotcha. I always thought it ment they did it in one sitting. PHEW xD
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<333 It's amazing. I don't know what else to say... I'm going to have to go cry or something. You're getting sooo good!
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Aww thank you!
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Of course you practice a ton! What tablet do you use? I'm looking into getting one.
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I use a Wacom Bamboo Fun tablet, but I don't think they make them anymore XD
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OHMYGOSH. PATCHY. I... I LOVE IT
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Thank you! Im so glad you like it! :'D
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DUDE THIS IS SO FUCKING GORGEOUS!!!!! 
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Oh my gosh, thank you! c': I was unsure about uploading it x3
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nononono its gooooddd!!!
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But they're scaring me o.o
I've never gotten faves that fast before o.e
(not that i don't love it c: )
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pfft. get used to it.
EMBRACE THEM.
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You're welcome. c:
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