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Kiss (139 words)As his dark green eyes stared into her purple ones, Soarin' felt as if he was staring into the eyes of Goddess Faustia herself. As they laid there in their bed, their faces slowly closing the gap ever so slowly, they had only one single nagging thought was running through their collective minds.
Soon, the small space between their muzzles disappeared as the two lovers engaged in the activity they had grown so accustomed to. Dash stroked his dark blue mane while he did the same to her multicolored one. They laid there kissing for what seemed like an eternity until they begrudgingly parted for much needed oxygen.
They stared into each other's eyes once more. They were silent, but, as if by a sort of mind reading spell, they knew what the other was thinking.
I love you
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Comments: 30
Blueshadow-the-pony [2014-09-11 03:51:37 +0000 UTC]
Nice story, but isn't rainbows eyes magenta or a rose color not purple? (Not trying to be rude)
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paxtofettel In reply to Blueshadow-the-pony [2014-09-11 04:28:24 +0000 UTC]
*shrug*
I forget.
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Blueshadow-the-pony [2014-09-11 03:51:29 +0000 UTC]
Nice story, but isn't rainbows eyes magenta or a rose color not purple? (Not trying to be rude)
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rainbowmane123 [2012-06-20 10:52:08 +0000 UTC]
i loved it! it was really short but awesome the ficlet i have seen
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paxtofettel In reply to William1238 [2012-03-18 22:51:21 +0000 UTC]
Well, if you liked that, then you'll enjoy my other ficlets.
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William1238 In reply to paxtofettel [2012-03-18 23:46:40 +0000 UTC]
Im going to check them out then
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Rysonn [2012-02-09 01:36:42 +0000 UTC]
That is win, i commend you! you have some real talent here! You have a knack for writing from what ive seen, especially details. This could go places! im surprised it hasnt yet! keep it up!
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paxtofettel In reply to Rysonn [2012-02-09 01:39:23 +0000 UTC]
Alas, I am merely a humble amateur writer who is cursed to live a life of unbearable obscurity.
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Rysonn In reply to paxtofettel [2012-02-09 01:42:51 +0000 UTC]
Well, i personally believe that you deserve so much more attention than you've gotten. Mind if i feature you in a journal? i don't have all to many followers, especially not active ones, but it has the potential to draw some attention.
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paxtofettel In reply to Rysonn [2012-02-09 01:54:06 +0000 UTC]
I have no qualms about that at all. Just send me a link to said journal.
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Rysonn In reply to paxtofettel [2012-02-09 02:01:37 +0000 UTC]
[link]
There you are, good sir.
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paxtofettel In reply to FirstToStrike [2012-02-08 22:08:10 +0000 UTC]
Nurse Redheart, get this man a new heart, STAT!
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paxtofettel In reply to booklover41 [2012-02-08 20:54:50 +0000 UTC]
The Goddess Faustia is the Immortal Creator of all of Ponykind. She who created the three species of ponies and gave them the magic of free will.
(Read Birth of Ponykind)
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Rusatus [2012-02-08 19:12:47 +0000 UTC]
This is adorable. Now I'm tempted to try writing one of these ficlets
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paxtofettel In reply to Rusatus [2012-02-08 19:36:07 +0000 UTC]
It's rather easy, at least much more easier than writing a fic that's more than a 1,000 words.
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tinuleaf [2012-02-08 18:37:32 +0000 UTC]
<3 this is so sweet.
And one of the reason I love ficlet so much is the emotions are always stronger since you're limited in the lengh and then you choose and think more over it
Well that's the feeling I have at least :3
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paxtofettel In reply to tinuleaf [2012-02-08 18:40:43 +0000 UTC]
Muchas Gracias (Thank you)
I feel so special for being the first person to take part in the challenge.
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