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Published: 2017-01-23 17:26:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 7559; Favourites: 108; Downloads: 437
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Gintama is one of my favourite anime series, so I wanted to make this, the home of Gintoki and the base of the odd jobs.ΒWhat do you think?
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Another great addition to your repertoire of tiles!
The colors and style are pretty well done, it goes well with your other shrine tiles and such. I think the only main issue I'm seeing is the perspective. I feel like given the perspective, you wouldn't see as much of the back of the roof as you are currently seeing. I would maybe reduce it by 3 to 5 pixels?
The other thing skewing perspective is the stairs. The stairs lead to an area directly above the entrance, yet the stairs start behind where the actual entrance is. I would fix this by moving the start of the stairs about 16 to 20 pixels down. I'd also make the stairs themselves a little thicker (ie: having 3 steps per tile instead of 4) look a little thicker.
Other than that I think the overall tile I great, it can just be improved upon with those simple fixes! Nice work as always man!
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Thank you!Β
I completely agree on the perspective. I've been intentionally avoiding this roof type just because I think it never ends up looking that good, but with this piece I had to do it to keep it inline with the original. I have shaved a few pixels off the back and changed the pitch a bit so hopefully that's fixed it.Β
The stairs were also a hard part, as they're actually supposed to go up, turn and the go up the other way again. I've changed it so hopefully that's more clear now, but I can't really think of any other way to make it more obvious.
I've also actually spent a while changing a whole bunch of little things like the shading and size, so here's it before if you want to directly compare them:Β orig08.deviantart.net/d36d/f/2β¦
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I have about 200 episodes to catch up on xD
Thank you!
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