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Published: 2005-09-14 22:30:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 831; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 78
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Picture of me by me ~phr3ak-stock"falling" by angel Morningstar 2005
I am tired.
cold
empty misplaced
in center of
repititious rambling
i fail
every time
it is quiet still
in my mind
scream
helplessly
with trace
of remembrance
i let go.
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A very strong piece, in both words and imagery. Well done!
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Great composition as always. I love the pic of you. sooooo emotional. perfect for this poem. great poem also. i loke how you changed the font color to emphisize certain words. very effective! great job!
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thanks hun 
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it is alot easier to write about bad stuff. the emotions are so strong then. when things are good. it is almost harder to describe. i should write a poem about my hives!
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I love how the ending is so concrete. I like this tons!
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I like the meeting between the picture and the poetry. On this selfportrait you seem to swim under water ...it's my feeling ! I love the contrast between the blue of the clothe and the tones of your skins
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It's a nice picture ! It's funny we spoke about a work together and yesterday I was thinking about the fact to rework one of your selfportrait instead of a stock photo from an unknown women...I've been working a lot like that with a young woman...I tell you more soon ...
This picture looks like an extract from a music video or a singer you know
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I've been on your other account ! nice selfportraits ...but I'd like to see a smile...just one
I'll come back on this gallery and I tell you...we stay in touch
Have a very nice day
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Yes We'll see ! not for me but for you I'd like to see a beautiful picture of you, why don't you try to take outside selfportraits !
I like so much your little emoticons doing this little smile ! Read you very soon Angel
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i am moving AGAIN 
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Yes that's good Angel, I'll have a look on your work ! it's a pleasure if I can help you. You are moving again ? you're going to live in France ? thast's great !
But I'll don't forget you, I'm here around you know my adresses on Internet...I wish you many good things for the near futur !
A smile and a
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I WISH!!!!
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anytime. i've tried certain things like that but i made the bricks fold around the face but i think it's a bit tricky/difficult.
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anytime. i've tried certain things like that but i made the bricks fold around the face but i think it's a bit tricky/difficult.
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hmmm i shall try to learn about that do you have to do it in sections?
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Really dig this piece, feels very emotive.
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