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Published: 2005-09-14 22:30:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 830; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 78
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Picture of me by me ~phr3ak-stock"falling" by angel Morningstar 2005
I am tired.
cold
empty misplaced
in center of
repititious rambling
i fail
every time
it is quiet still
in my mind
scream
helplessly
with trace
of remembrance
i let go.
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if your in a writers block....write about me!!
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There is no possible way to find flaw in written emotions, so I post here simply to say that You have a profound taste in both color and lyric and I look forward to seeing/reading more from you in the future.
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Although this is good, I hate to say it because I love ya, but it's trite. I feel like you weren't really tapped in, I don't know. I think it's time to take that step into the scary and unknown brilliance and move beyond... Beyond. Was that harsh? I just feel like you've got more than this in you. Get outside of it, beyond the pouting, beyond the quaint self pity and get real, show us something of yourself aside from general dissatisfaction. Am I making any sense?
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as i said i have writers block, a very huge transition for me has just occured, i am glad you think i can do better, because i can, but as i said, it just feels good to put something out. i warned that in the description. so ya, maybe i should just not write or whatever until i feel i can but thats not how i operate. i write and write shitty stuff until something good comes out. trite? lol, not sure how to take this critique but ya, better stuff will come its just a certain time in my life which explains me. its always a harsh thing to say to someone when they write their emotions on paper. but thats fine, i think i am a big girl, i can take it.
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I do understand. I don't know, I'm old school I guess, I don't pubish until I've edited and essentially re-written a few times. Thats just me. Hey, keep it up.
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In my opinion, editing is the flaw that ruins most poetry. We all write things that after further review we would like to change, tweek, and ultimately alter the original emotion that was intended. I personally can't go back and alter anything I write because I find that i'm never in the same frame of mind as when I wrote it. So any editing changes the underlying message. Then again, to each their own, obviously I haven't submitted my words, so perhaps I should keep them to myself right now too.
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Great piece. 
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i liek the feeling of the pic an di the texture is an added plus, as for the poem, i am apathetic towrds, it, down worry im not saying its bad, its that poems in the whole general just dont really move me cause half way through them i loose track a=of what it is i am redding, but i like th epic though its nice and has a goog feel the lihging is good to, as fo rht epic great job, as for th epoem, its um, poetic? lol
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there is a lot of emotion in this piece...
i got a sort of suicidal idea....i don't know if thats right....
nice picture too, it works with the poem
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no problem...i love stuff with emotion cause it makes the art so personal...yea...my philisophical self...
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I think this is a very relatable photograph/photomanipulation/poem (I'm not sure what you would call it), it's a feeling that all of us have felt at one time or another. I loved the way you were able to put together a picture and a poem together, you did a very good job at doing so. The picture is very good the only thing that I could suggest is that I would have liked to see more frustration in the model, I'm not exactly sure how you would go about this, but it's just something that I like the picture is lacking is a good sense of frustration and anger like the poem conveys. But other than that, very well done!
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And yet she ran from the camera when I had it!!!
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wow thats just....I don't know. It reminds me of someone running away from something outta a nightmare. Those are some words
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You are welcome Gorgeous
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Eeek, really big. I can't see the full view unless i scroll and that makes me
Really cool, though. The brick texture is a little distracting, though.
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right on well i did a large size for the print to be made 
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i love this...the image is perfect and matches great!! lovely...i so know what it's like to have writers block...it sucks! but this is an excellant piece!
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you are always welcome bunny!
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interesting-one thing I would recomment is a size change. I can't read the words in small view,but in full view the picutures is MUCH to large and fills ypu my entire screen times two o.o
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ya i hear ya, needed it big for print but iw ill downsize it
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Ahhh I see
well you can have a seperate small view for for the full view and then submit the high res for print so its easier for people who are looking at it
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no i submitted it for a print i will downsize it when it goes through
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what can I say that hasnt already been said? Image. Words. Combined to convey such a message. you say you feel blocked? Wouldnt know it from this.
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you feel like chatting?
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me goin to bed i watch moooovies with brothers
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ITS OKAY! i am moving again today may not have net for like a week now
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