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"try" by angel morningstar 3/06

questioning
  stationary objects
never does much good.
should i stop caring?
my soul tearing
  a p a r t
i can barely push this
shopping cart.
    bReathing,

 heaving,

SCREAMING.

painfully
  being -
my veins still
surge, thriving
because i feel
your heart
  beating.

seething, feeding
on what i know

NO.

you can't go
too early i
  inflate to the
helium you blow
exploding
incriments of
emotion, i am destined
to face

    alone.
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Comments: 51

phr3ak000000000 In reply to ??? [2006-06-11 20:32:25 +0000 UTC]

i LOVE YOU. i am yours thank you.

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BloodKitsune [2006-04-01 11:40:56 +0000 UTC]

wooh, I'm late on this comment
had som emajor problems with my internet and I wanted to call your aid, but never got to talk you...

anyways, life sucks, yeah
but this sucky life inspires us (artists, deviants) to make the greatest art mankind have ever seen! therefor a fav
take the good with the bad... pro 'n contra... karma... that stuff

hope to see (talk) you soon
much love
Kitsune

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to BloodKitsune [2006-04-30 20:22:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you so so much for the comment, lol... my reply is just as late hehe

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BloodKitsune In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-05-01 08:31:59 +0000 UTC]

that's no problem... I'm patient

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softcell72 [2006-03-27 06:25:51 +0000 UTC]

I don't think it sucks, it's very powerful, pulls you right in and yanks your insides around.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to softcell72 [2006-03-30 01:56:54 +0000 UTC]

awww, hun thank you very much that is a wonderful comment. glad you felt it

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Robino [2006-03-18 14:28:53 +0000 UTC]

It's good like always! Your writing is always full of creativity and you always have nice pics to go with it! So again I have nothing much to say except great job.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to Robino [2006-03-19 04:17:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much mister. really i am honoured with your approval

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alphie0216 [2006-03-18 03:22:03 +0000 UTC]

not even close to sucking. this is awesome as always. you are my DA idol! love ya!

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to alphie0216 [2006-03-19 04:17:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much alphie i love your encouragement

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mongolShawn [2006-03-16 03:04:37 +0000 UTC]

wonderful

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to mongolShawn [2006-03-19 04:16:56 +0000 UTC]

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illusione [2006-03-15 19:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, very emotive. The blurriness of the image is effective.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to illusione [2006-03-17 05:40:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Screamingscars [2006-03-14 22:56:55 +0000 UTC]

Youare fucking amazing...and gorgeous.

Jaw-dropping...amazing write dearest.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to Screamingscars [2006-03-15 05:32:25 +0000 UTC]

i love you emma, thank you.

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Screamingscars In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-03-16 02:29:02 +0000 UTC]

love you too...and no problem

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yearningtofly [2006-03-14 21:43:28 +0000 UTC]

being sad is no fun...

feel better love soon!

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to yearningtofly [2006-03-15 05:31:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks sweetie

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tiddles1 [2006-03-14 16:59:45 +0000 UTC]

Like the concept and idea. Im working with text and images at the mo on a project. Like the figure too, would perhaps look better if it was in colour or a bit brighter. Also the way the text is in negative is cool

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to tiddles1 [2006-03-15 05:34:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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realcoolrain [2006-03-14 01:20:07 +0000 UTC]

great work ! (although the image looks as though you're fading away... )
hope you're feeling better...

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to realcoolrain [2006-03-15 05:33:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much i feel like i am fading away right now, maybe its semi- intentional, but i do understand what you are saying.

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InfiniteOne [2006-03-13 23:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Very nice use of font effects!!

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to InfiniteOne [2006-03-15 05:34:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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stabbedbycupid [2006-03-13 23:07:52 +0000 UTC]

I like this a lot. There's plenty of emotion there. I really like the writing, maybe just bring out the photo a little (make it more defined.)

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to stabbedbycupid [2006-03-15 05:36:27 +0000 UTC]

i appreciate that you feel the emotion here, cuz i surely feel it. i maybe feel all faded, loss of definition in life so to say so it may have been a subconcious thing, lol to make it so blended with the background. dunno, i really am gonna redo it though when i have a bit more time certainly your thoughts will be a big help

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rider-on-the-storm [2006-03-13 23:06:30 +0000 UTC]

damn thats expressive...are you ok darling?

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2006-03-14 01:50:03 +0000 UTC]




i love you though!!! thank you that comment made my day, really

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d33pimpact [2006-03-13 21:48:20 +0000 UTC]

This is actually very well done despite your thoughts .

Just bring your photo out a little bit more. It's so dim and distant, but I want to see more of you. It's like your blending in the background there . I like the way you put the text as well .

It's well done my love .

I hope things are better now

- Katie

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to d33pimpact [2006-03-15 05:37:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you when i do redo it i cetainly will take your advice.

thanks so much for the comment truly appreciated

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WastedTears13 [2006-03-13 20:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow really nice!

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to WastedTears13 [2006-03-15 05:37:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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judylee [2006-03-13 16:19:30 +0000 UTC]

it breaks my heart, the pain i feel in this piece is unbearable.I wish i could away the sadness.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to judylee [2006-03-15 05:31:33 +0000 UTC]

i love you mamma

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judylee In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-03-15 06:38:36 +0000 UTC]

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Tuishimi [2006-03-13 14:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Sucks?? But I thought??

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to Tuishimi [2006-03-13 21:14:42 +0000 UTC]

ya, i dunno. talk to you in email about it... you get the $$$$ yet

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ProsePetals [2006-03-13 13:28:44 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to ProsePetals [2006-03-15 05:30:32 +0000 UTC]

lol thank you

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mirrin [2006-03-13 10:33:36 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done. It doesn't suck in the least.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to mirrin [2006-03-15 05:30:54 +0000 UTC]

shoot, i would never get hurt if you'd just marry me

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mirrin In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-03-15 18:36:50 +0000 UTC]

That's assuming quite a bit, don't you think?

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to mirrin [2006-03-17 05:23:58 +0000 UTC]



i know

but your a good guy darnit and i know it

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mirrin In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-03-17 23:26:54 +0000 UTC]

You'll never get me to admit it! Never!

Oops... did I just initiate a challange...

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mirrin In reply to mirrin [2006-03-20 05:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Then there wouldn't be any fun left though.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to mirrin [2006-03-20 03:12:09 +0000 UTC]

w00t!! fine. challenge away.... so make out with me and i will not bug you about it forever

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mirrin In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-03-20 05:55:27 +0000 UTC]

Then there wouldn't be any fun left though.

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phr3ak000000000 In reply to mirrin [2006-03-20 13:21:23 +0000 UTC]

oh yes there would like constant making out forever!

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mirrin In reply to phr3ak000000000 [2006-03-20 13:31:30 +0000 UTC]

Um... uh...

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