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ravenf6 — BR- Raven vs Scythe- Round 4, part 8-color

Published: 2012-09-21 01:37:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 1855; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 9
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Description Scythe:........

Raven: ...... uh... *Raven's vision goes blank for a second. His knees give away as he starts to drop*..... ! *but he manages to catch himself on his hands, instead of falling on his face to the canvas.

Scythe: ..... ....*stumbles back into the ropes, barely able to stand on his own legs, he puts his right glove to his bruise, which is throbbing in pain from the cross..*

Raven: *panting heavily... then thinking* .....No..... not now... *pant*.... just when I thought I had him... *pant* .... I blew it....

* sounds like a dull thud breaks the silence. Raven glances up and sees Scythe clapping with his gloves, a big grin on his face*.

Raven: ??

Scythe: Well done, Raven. I didn't think you'd do so well.

Raven: "So well?" but.... I lost...

Scythe: This might be a surprise, but you know what happened, just now?

Raven: I'm pretty sure you put me to my knees.

Scythe: Offhand, yes. But did you hear something during impact?

Raven: No...

Scythe: It was the bell- the second our crosses connected, the bell rang. You know what that means?

Raven: ....Not really...

Scythe: It means you held out to the very end. You were still on your feet.

Raven: But... even so, I went down...

Scythe: True, but you made it through 4 rounds, despite a hard fight: You took everything I threw at you and paid it back in kind. You also stood your ground against a cross-counter. You know how many fighters are scared to stare down something like that?

Raven:....?

Scythe: A lot. In fact, most amateurs don't last that long in their first sparring sessions. I'd say you accomplished quite a bit in this one.

*Raven slowly gets back on his feet, and takes off his headgear, Scythe's words slowly start to sink in*

Raven: You mean that?

Scythe: More than that. In fact, I'm proud of you- you poured everything into this spar- heart and soul. That's really worth something. You showed me the fruits of your training in those four rounds.

*Raven starts to smile*

Scythe: Even so, you've got a lot of room for improvement... I can help you with that.

Raven: You mean... you want to train me?

Scythe: Yeah. At the same time, you could end up helping me. You may not realize this, but I've been training for years, but I've still a few things to learn. Part of it means fighting stronger opponents, and I think you can help me there.

Raven: I see where this is going. You scratch my back...

Scythe: ..and I'll scratch yours. What do you say, are you in? *holds out left glove towards Raven*

Raven: ..... I'm so in. * 'shakes' Scythe's glove with his own left*

*While the sparring match draws to close, the two realize that more than the prospects of improving themselves, they found themselves forging a bond of friendship. One that would be greater than the victory in this match...*

(while this ends the match, there is an epilogue page for this one, which I'll update w/ color and add in due time)

Scythe Mana belongs to me, I belong to myself
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Comments: 14

MonsterMan25 [2012-09-21 01:59:14 +0000 UTC]

a draw?

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ravenf6 In reply to MonsterMan25 [2012-09-21 02:04:22 +0000 UTC]

To me, it feels like a loss. But for Scythe, he was testing to see how I would do, in his eyes, I pass with flying colors. In that degree, I'd consider it that I lost this spar, but gained a lot out of it.

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MonsterMan25 In reply to ravenf6 [2012-09-21 02:21:59 +0000 UTC]

Sounds good

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ravenf6 In reply to MonsterMan25 [2012-09-21 02:24:21 +0000 UTC]

You can't win all... but sometimes, you learn more from defeat than from victory.

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MonsterMan25 In reply to ravenf6 [2012-09-21 02:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, if only I can learn HOW TO DODGE FREAKIN SODA POPINSKI'S PUNCHES!!!

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xearsol [2012-09-21 01:51:00 +0000 UTC]

you know, this mini comic is exciting for me to watch

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ravenf6 In reply to xearsol [2012-09-21 01:55:38 +0000 UTC]

I never thought I'd see myself doing this when I started doodling these things, months ago. I enjoyed working on these through all that time.

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MasterSaruwatari [2012-09-21 01:40:27 +0000 UTC]

now that was a fight.

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ravenf6 In reply to MasterSaruwatari [2012-09-21 01:44:20 +0000 UTC]

That it was.

ONe day, I'm going to organize the pages so that you can click right to the next one, from start to fnish. There was a lot, even before this fight started.

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MasterSaruwatari In reply to ravenf6 [2012-09-21 01:55:39 +0000 UTC]

uh...you should have done as you uploaded this. I do that with all my stories. I need to start putting links to the next chapters in the chapter i uploaded.

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ravenf6 In reply to MasterSaruwatari [2012-09-21 02:06:16 +0000 UTC]

True, but as a full-time worker and part-time student, that tends to limit a few things.

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MasterSaruwatari In reply to ravenf6 [2012-09-21 02:10:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm in college man and I have four classes that are easy, but there is always so much to do. Besides it only takes like five seconds after you set up the folder.

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ravenf6 In reply to MasterSaruwatari [2012-09-21 02:13:28 +0000 UTC]

Well, I didn't expect I'd do this many when I began. But yeah, I'll see about organizing these in due time. Probably tomorrow, after work and class.

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MasterSaruwatari In reply to ravenf6 [2012-09-21 02:13:52 +0000 UTC]

okay best of luck to you.

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