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Published: 2013-08-26 02:44:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2026; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 9
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colored update of fav.me/d6jkzlu___
*Round two begins, with both fighters meeting in the center*
Raven: *thinking: Here goes..* goes on the attack, landing a right hook at X's head
X: Ugu.. *recovers* psh *throws a right jab, but Raven ducks inward..* .?
Raven: *thinking* heh.. *throws a good right uppercut into X's chin*
BOOM!
X: Ugh!! *head is jolted back from the blow* *thinking* no you don't... *throws a retalitory right hook at Raven's face
BAM!
Raven: Ack... *thinking* Don't be too proud, X. I'm just getting started...
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I'll admit, not much in terms of dialogue, but since this was a basic 'mixing it up' bit, I kept most of the dialogue internal, outside the grunts and groans. Having to multi-task a number of things, it took a little time to finish this, but not too bad in about a day, I'd say. Looks like the fight is still in motion? What'll happen next? That'll depend on how long it takes me to transfer thought into paper.
X belongs to Capcom,
and I belong to myself
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Comments: 22
Jenaku [2013-08-26 17:21:48 +0000 UTC]
(Keep him off balance since I'm fairly certain his punches are stronger than yours, but you've also done this for longer than he has.)
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Jenaku [2013-08-26 11:14:11 +0000 UTC]
(Looks awesome in color!Β And again, the action's really heating up again!Β Looking forward to the next part!)
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Jumpy:Β Go, Raven!Β He might be good at fighting outside of the ring, but in it, you've got the edge!Β Keep it up!
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Kyrogk:Β Exactly!Β Stay on the offensive and keep him off balance, don't give him any openings!
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AzaSket [2013-08-26 03:50:37 +0000 UTC]
Bertrand: When you get hit by a metal fist, it hurts like hell. But, not for Raven-nii!
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ravenf6 In reply to AzaSket [2013-08-26 15:51:23 +0000 UTC]
Me:It feels like getting hit by a heavyweight, but I've sparred a with a few, soΒ that helps, a bit.
Scythe: It'd help more if you didn't get hit in the first place!
Derrick: Here we go, again...
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ravenf6 In reply to CosmikArts [2013-08-26 15:52:32 +0000 UTC]
I won't. These aren't the heaviest punches I've taken. I'll pay him back, twice over.
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SBGF312 In reply to ravenf6 [2013-08-26 18:19:28 +0000 UTC]
Mau, Rob & Ash: RAVEN!Β RAVEN!Β RAVEN!Β Β
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ravenf6 In reply to samusmmx [2013-08-26 16:08:02 +0000 UTC]
Heh heh... X will have to do better than that. XD
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SuperAbachiBro [2013-08-26 02:57:10 +0000 UTC]
Nice! I know things will be heating up later on in this fight. Give it to him!
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-08-26 15:53:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh I will: this is one Hard Knuckle he won't be copying. XD
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-08-26 16:25:24 +0000 UTC]
Good thing his universe crossed over with Sonic's at the time, otherwise this would be a lot harder than it is for you. XD
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SubtleRoar [2013-08-26 02:50:17 +0000 UTC]
They'd be too focus on their opponent to create witty comments. XD
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ravenf6 In reply to SubtleRoar [2013-08-26 02:52:11 +0000 UTC]
Yep. And distraction is something you don't want to do for something like this. XD
..though I should do one bit ofΒ Scythe and Zero barking at the both of them, respectively.
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SubtleRoar In reply to ravenf6 [2013-08-26 02:52:35 +0000 UTC]
with advice, or just for taunting? XD
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