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Published: 2019-11-02 13:59:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 2532; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description The eyes have it on this page...    
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Originally Page 2 and 3 here were a single page, that I decided to split into two for the sake of better pacing - or some such. And, in fact, this conversation was supposed to go differently with Toshiro actually becoming insulted by Leo's questions, as he was interpreting them as complaints which, being a prisoner, Leonardo has no right to make.
But after realizing the hostilities rising between them would lead Toshiro into making an unnecessary threat, I decided to change the overall tone of their conversation to express something else. Believe me, if you're a Leo fan, the next two pages will get your dander up - and then we'll finally get to see Leo express his FRUSTRATION with his whole situation.

Anyway, I think Toshiro is having decidedly more fun with this conversation than Leo is - as we'll soon see.
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katstories [2019-11-11 01:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh good question, maybe she wants to too train troops to at least give an appearance on keeping him prisoner?

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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to katstories [2019-12-05 08:41:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm not quite sure what you meant by training troops...
Are you saying Karai has dressed Leo this way to make it appear as though he's completely under her control?

Sorry, I'm just confused by what you were saying!

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katstories In reply to RoseDuelistBBSHM [2020-01-29 22:14:58 +0000 UTC]

I thought that Leo might feel that the Foot need some proper training. But not only that he's all in foot black, so it just sort of felt like Karai was owning him.

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Flamestar123456 [2019-11-05 11:41:54 +0000 UTC]

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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to Flamestar123456 [2019-12-05 08:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeppie yeppie! Leo is so observant! Even when his eyes are closed in meditation, you KNOW he can hear everything around him.

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SupernalGodzilla02 [2019-11-03 08:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Now, now, Leo. If you must know, Karai thinks you have a terrible fashion sense of kneepads and wrist wraps and decided to have that Hakama, and the bountiful feast is to keep your energy up for the nights ahead.


In all seriousness Leo you must know that Karai believe's only in you. Yes, it is wrong that she's keeping you prisoner and feeds on you. But only because you are Karai's first and only option.


Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see what's next.


P.S. Is that an easter egg of the Foot Recruit from Rise of the Turtles?

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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to SupernalGodzilla02 [2019-12-05 09:00:05 +0000 UTC]

reading your comments!! They're always so fun and fitting!   

Haha "terrible fashion sense" - haha! I love it!
(Noting their lack of attire, whenever I'm writing my TMNT fan fics, I always refer to their stuff as 'gear' and not 'clothes' because - let's be real- they basically running around naked.)

And YES! I was excited and curious to see who would notice her! That IS the Foot Recruit from RISE!   

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PinkAngelOfLight [2019-11-02 21:16:15 +0000 UTC]

it is a bit weird for Leo to wear that and this bounty? A bounty on who and why?

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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to PinkAngelOfLight [2019-11-03 01:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear, I see where the issue lies.
I did put quotation marks around the word bounty, but it looks like I'll need to change the wording to "bountiful feast" to clear up the confusion.

Sorry about the misunderstanding! But thanks for pointing out that this wasn't clear.

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PinkAngelOfLight In reply to RoseDuelistBBSHM [2019-11-03 04:16:53 +0000 UTC]

oh ok then and your welcome!

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