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seventozen β Rocket to Insanity: Common Differences 2
Published: 2013-03-29 00:09:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 14795; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 127
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I have to say, the only thing that comes to mind when I look at this page is...ADVENTURE!!!
I had a lot of fun with this page, since I thought it would be good to add a little humor before the really intense explanation scene in the hospital comes up. So laugh it up guys! While you can... *chuckles*
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MLP by Hasbro and Lauren Faust
Story by Scherzo
Based off of the Alternate Ending by DarkJester
Adaptation and drawings by Yours Truly
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Comments: 29
It doesn't feel right to me having Spike tell her & not Dash. I dunno, it just doesn't feel asβ¦impactful, but oh well, ONWARD
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This art style demands that all ponies look like a caricature of snails.
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You've misplaced an apostrophe when 'Shy's throwing her first wall of text at Spike. I'm sure you can spot it; she may be feeling talkative today, but there's not many apostrophes to choose from.
It's so kind of 'Shy to cover for Dashie despite everything.
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Oh hey look. Some random pony to move the plot along. So convenient!
This might be just me not being familiar with the show (blasphemy, I know) but why does Spike need a lamp to read? It's the middle of the day. There's no need for a lamp, unless he's in a room with no windows, which to me makes even less sense.
Finally, there are 2 typos in the last panel.
It's Rehabilitation. You forgot the third "i" before the "o" but I can understand this error since you're trying to fit it inside that bracket.
Less understandable is the other typo. It's Entrance, not Enterance. How did you not notice this one?!
Sorry, I'm a bit of a grammar nazi.
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The blue pony with grey mane (green eyes) looks like my friend XD
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I'm hoping for today.
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Next: Going on an ADVENTURE!
God damn- *yawn* it...
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59 is in the process of being made, "so-on" isn't anything more than an unrealized potential.
But thank you for the enthusiasm!
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Tell me when its done, just put the link on my profile P.S you are so fu*king funny
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Pinkie Pie forgiving her is the heart of the alternate ending IMHO.
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I really like your originality on the story. Kinda curious about how you will implement Dash's nightmares not just on the Mane Six, but also on the whole town.
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I woke up with a feeling that this updated.
Am I psychic or what?
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I have bad feelings they will find out who hurt Pinkie, when RD and Twilight will be still in hospital.
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Whoo boy. Let's hope that Twilight goes in first to either let Pinkie know ahead of time not to throw a fuss or anything or put up a spell to keep people from overhearing her. And let's hope that Fluttershy doesn't let anything slip in front of perked ears.
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...um, how exactly did Fluttershy get 'Everypony is looking for Dash' from that conversation?
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Overreaction by a lot. She's prone to that, it seems.
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The suspense is totally killi- *head explodes*
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It's a pumpkin... disguised as lettuce... woah.
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Woah I've never seen Fluttshy fly this fast.
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Well, I am assuming shit is about to hit the fan, like REAL badly
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