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:Updated:, fixed a bit of remnant linework in the last panel.Well, here it is! Took long enough!
I learned several lessons during the course of this page, the most important being do NOT merge your text layers together under any circumstances, unless you want to suffer dearly by being unable to edit typos by destroying the background layer as well. And yes, I am speaking from personal experience. "sigh"
The next page will not have a ridiculous wait time, I'm hoping. I know what I need to do, and some of my summer expenditures and projects are winding down to a close. So I get to relax! Sort of.
Big thank you to my pre-readers. There were so many things wrong with my text, it didn't pay to talk about it.
Pre-Readers: --and--
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Comments: 34
ilubatar [2021-11-30 01:29:30 +0000 UTC]
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fotland42 [2014-12-27 21:50:01 +0000 UTC]
Twilight, this is not remotely a good idea. Dashie doesn't need friends who think she's getting better. She needs friends who can help because they know how bad things really are. She's got you in on everything now, and that's better than nothing, but unless you think you can watch alertly over her 24/7 for however long this problem takes to address, and single-hoofedly defuse all of her breakdowns, you're going to need more help. Lying about this problem already landed Pinkie in the hospital; are you sure it will be so mild next time?
And Dashie, don't get too over-optimistic yet. Twi's got a massive crush on you, and both 'Shy and Pinkie are almost pathologically nice; they're the easy ones to deal with. AJ and Rarity will be happy to hear that you didn't want to hurt Pinkie, but that doesn't mean they'll instantly forgive you.
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valspan [2014-11-27 05:11:05 +0000 UTC]
all righty then. i need to stop. read ya in the morning!
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NeoSpearBlade [2014-11-19 01:09:30 +0000 UTC]
Go to town and have some lunch Rainbow Dash. It's not like the royal guard ponies are looking for you.
Wait a minute.....Didn't Celestia say that the royal guard doesn't know about RD's involvement?
So what was the point of that random pony telling Fluttershy that the royal guard is looking for Rainbow Dash? Or did she heard him wrong?
Nevermind. It doesn't matter anyway.
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MeggyMorgue [2013-11-04 01:50:53 +0000 UTC]
This comic just keeps getting better and better. In the illustrations and the story.
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Drakin929 [2013-07-09 04:43:27 +0000 UTC]
Loving this series so far. Really cool. ^_^
On a side note, what's the blue thing on Twilight's horn in the last panel? Is that a mistake or is something else going on?
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seventozen In reply to Drakin929 [2013-07-09 15:07:48 +0000 UTC]
That would be a mistake. It's a bit of leftover linework. I'll fix it.
Thank you for enjoying this story, for lack of a better word.
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smawzyuw2 [2013-07-08 14:48:27 +0000 UTC]
I love how you took the alternate ending and turned it into something with more story to it.
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touileasaso [2013-07-07 03:11:32 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I agree that there needs to be a bit of humor to lighten the mood a bit, so I liked what you did with the last panel. Poor Spike...
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Ractrin [2013-07-05 21:34:35 +0000 UTC]
if she attacks twilight i swear to celestia i will come through this monitor and ....prolly get killed myself...soooo...nvm...i'll just sit here and keep reading ^.^
loving this comic!
oh yeah...drew this back in dec...just now thought to tell yah >.< [link]
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ScottWolf [2013-07-05 20:04:25 +0000 UTC]
That's right, Dash. Bottle it up. It's not like it's gonna come back to bite you in the ass, right?
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ElwisFromPoland [2013-07-05 16:07:01 +0000 UTC]
Hallucinations? This virus gets worst with every moment. I wonder, if it will gets bad enough that Dashie, because of this, will mistook some pony with this demon Pinkie and attack it?
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LaughingOnLine [2013-07-05 06:17:42 +0000 UTC]
I nearly had to change my pants after the hallucination! Well done!
Also, why did I hear George Carlin when I read "Sigmund Freud, eat your heart out?"
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seventozen In reply to LaughingOnLine [2013-07-05 21:48:39 +0000 UTC]
I don't know. He does have one of those voices, doesn't he?
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LaughingOnLine In reply to seventozen [2013-07-06 05:37:54 +0000 UTC]
Now I remember! It's because I combined two of his quotes. One about Freud's cigars, and the other was him telling a famous killer to eat his heart out.
Also, you know Carlin. +50 Awesome Points
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seventozen In reply to LaughingOnLine [2013-07-06 20:00:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. My favorite sketch of his is "The seven words you can never say on television"
That's the best one.
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LaughingOnLine In reply to seventozen [2013-07-07 06:46:01 +0000 UTC]
Have you seen the extended version? He added three more.
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seventozen In reply to LaughingOnLine [2013-07-07 17:56:36 +0000 UTC]
No I haven't. Where might one find this new stuff?
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LaughingOnLine In reply to seventozen [2013-07-08 06:36:00 +0000 UTC]
Right here: [link]
I'm not sure what the special was.
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Humanloather [2013-07-05 05:28:47 +0000 UTC]
Dude. That ghostly Pinkamena was bad-ass. Well done.
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seventozen In reply to Humanloather [2013-07-05 19:40:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. That took quite a while to get right.
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uncommentator [2013-07-05 03:50:34 +0000 UTC]
If I were Rainbow I'd ask Twilight to keep sharp objects away from me.
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Dishdude87 [2013-07-05 03:47:51 +0000 UTC]
"Talking is the first step towards fixing a problem."
That's actually one of MLP:FIM's most recurring morals. So many situations could've been avoided/abridged if they'd just talked them out (ex: Swarm Of The Century, Lesson Zero, Green Isn't Your Color, One Bad Apple, even Equestria Girls). That's not to say I don't enjoy the episodes where this happens. Far from it. It's just hard sometimes when the most obvious solution is so often ignored. Poor communication kills.
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EagleSpartan888 [2013-07-05 03:10:04 +0000 UTC]
The one with the Pinkie pic was a bit creepy, but I really liked the comic overall! Awesome job! Can't wait for the next one! I'm actually anxious to see when Dash fights her inner demon and conquers it and Pinkie is okay and well and all of them are happy together and Dash doesn't have those nightmares anymore.
Again nice job!
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seventozen In reply to EagleSpartan888 [2013-07-05 19:41:15 +0000 UTC]
You want to see the fight with Pinkamena? No one more than me, man. I've been wanting to do another dream sequence since the lightning page.
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EagleSpartan888 In reply to seventozen [2013-07-26 11:14:29 +0000 UTC]
Ah I see. I can't wait for the next few pages! I wish you the best of luck with them! Can't wait for them!
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Lazruth [2013-07-04 21:22:34 +0000 UTC]
Spike: But I AM panicking!
Yeah, I'd be panicking too. That's a huge-butt bug.
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seventozen In reply to Lazruth [2013-07-05 00:40:24 +0000 UTC]
I really don't know why I decided to do that, actually. I just decided to insert humor into a humorless situation.
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Lazruth In reply to seventozen [2013-07-05 01:14:02 +0000 UTC]
Hey, it worked, didn't it? So therefore, it counts as a success!
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