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shadowsofthought — His Own Kin
Published: 2009-12-14 08:41:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 297; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description Swirling in darkness
His mind was erased
He couldn't remember where
Or how he got here

He stood with blood stains
On his hand in the rain
The bodies laying there

What brought him here?
What was his path again?
Questions of fate
Brought on too late

He thought she was out there
Escaped into the air
But the truth was he was torn inside here

He had given the hunt everything
Spread it out upon his wings

Now he could feel the darkness again
Swirling, tearing, bringing his sins

It was out there gliding
Finding the lost ones
Consuming there souls
Like greed after gold

Black Leathery body
Flames of purple
Eyes of blood

He knew his new enemy
And he was on his hunt again

Alone
After his own kin

And what would happen would be sin

He was on the hunt again
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Comments: 2

TeskaAraen [2009-12-14 08:42:59 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, the imagery is excellent and the story is quite clear too. Awesome work!

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shadowsofthought In reply to TeskaAraen [2009-12-14 08:45:19 +0000 UTC]

wow, that was a fast comment lol, thanks i think this is the clearest of the Eight poems in the whole set, if you haven't read them yet read them and let me know what you think, and thanks for the comment

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