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Published: 2009-12-14 08:41:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 297; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Swirling in darknessHis mind was erased
He couldn't remember where
Or how he got here
He stood with blood stains
On his hand in the rain
The bodies laying there
What brought him here?
What was his path again?
Questions of fate
Brought on too late
He thought she was out there
Escaped into the air
But the truth was he was torn inside here
He had given the hunt everything
Spread it out upon his wings
Now he could feel the darkness again
Swirling, tearing, bringing his sins
It was out there gliding
Finding the lost ones
Consuming there souls
Like greed after gold
Black Leathery body
Flames of purple
Eyes of blood
He knew his new enemy
And he was on his hunt again
Alone
After his own kin
And what would happen would be sin
He was on the hunt again
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Comments: 2
TeskaAraen [2009-12-14 08:42:59 +0000 UTC]
This is really good, the imagery is excellent and the story is quite clear too. Awesome work!
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shadowsofthought In reply to TeskaAraen [2009-12-14 08:45:19 +0000 UTC]
wow, that was a fast comment lol, thanks i think this is the clearest of the Eight poems in the whole set, if you haven't read them yet read them and let me know what you think, and thanks for the comment
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