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Sharquelle — Aronansa Chapter012

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Chapter 12 ~ Dovahkiin

Chapter 13 ~ The Pilgrim’s Path
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Aronansa and Brynjolf will have to prove their worth as Nightingales; travelling to the Twilight Sepulcher and bring back the Skeleton Key to Lady Nocturnal. When faced with great danger, Aronansa unexpectedly draws the attention of another great force within Skyrim.

Especially drawn for this arc in the story is this commission 'poster' by ChloexBowie  Showing Aronansa, Mercer Frey, Brynjolf, Vipir and Karliah.


Especially drawn for this chapter is this picture of Aronansa Shouting, by ChloexBowie

Many thanks to ferret82  for helping me in my quest to kill typo's and grammatical scr*w-ups!   

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Aronansa, Isgrod, the story and the scenes as they are written © Sharquelle 
Skyrim, Mercer Frey, Brynjolf, Vex, Vipir, Delvin Mallory, Vekel, Tonilia, Lady Nocturnal, Karliah, Rune, Cynric, Talos of Atmora © Bethesda

 

   
 

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Comments: 20

Skyrimfan2014 [2014-11-24 19:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Why is it that when I saw the title I started to hum
"Dovahkiin, Dovahkiin, Nall Ok Zin Los Vahriin, Wah Dein Vokul Mahfaeraak Asht Vall!
Ahrk Fin Norok Paal Graan, Fod Nust Hon Zindra Zaan."

I also start to hum it out of nowhere, too.

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Sharquelle In reply to Skyrimfan2014 [2014-11-26 10:38:34 +0000 UTC]

OMG... now I feel the need to put the soundtrack on the speakers again.   Epic music!

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Skyrimfan2014 In reply to Sharquelle [2014-11-26 17:50:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha, aye.

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LothrilZul [2014-10-20 08:04:31 +0000 UTC]

"She had hoped he would not be bringing it up again,"
Of course he had to, he's Bryngjolf after all.  

Loved this one. 
Eww, frost troll, I really fear them. Horrible beast.

And that riding lesson, I loved it. ^^

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Sharquelle In reply to LothrilZul [2014-10-22 12:32:50 +0000 UTC]

Whahahaa! I'm going to keep that in mind for that big gossip!

Yeah, especially when you spot them a little late and they come running/wobbling at you with that 'heavy smoker's cough-sound' of them...     

I might have had a little too much fun by letting Nansa use such examples around  the self-proclaimed womanizer of the Thieves Guild.   

Thank you!!!

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LothrilZul In reply to Sharquelle [2014-10-22 15:01:03 +0000 UTC]

It might hurt a man, but honestly, I'd said the same seeing his poor performance.

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ferret82 [2014-05-26 23:17:04 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you describe the fight scene with the frost troll you wordsmith you

When the boss drew his blade and started pointing that thing ‘below the belt;’

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Sharquelle In reply to ferret82 [2014-05-27 10:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Nawww...    

Yeah, I figure that those two were not very keen on losing certain assets that they could not steal back.     

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ferret82 In reply to Sharquelle [2014-05-27 13:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Bhahaha them emoticons are perfect for that scene!

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Sharquelle In reply to ferret82 [2014-05-27 19:23:22 +0000 UTC]

You think there is such a thing as 'emoticon scene creation-art?'

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ferret82 In reply to Sharquelle [2014-05-27 19:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah why not...!?

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LadyMetaRose [2014-04-25 20:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Definitely like you continuing with Nansa growing as a person and using her voice to getting what she wants out of life. That's awesome!

I LOVED how you had Nansa teaching Bryn how to ride a horse (and comparing to to riding, well, other things. ) I really like to details in this and previous chapters about the Bosmers' connection with animals. It's really awesome. 

You are/Bryn is definitely right that Thieves make excellent legend material. They always have the best stories to tell! And I must say, I'm always impressed with how you make a thieves' life look so glamorous! It actually makes me wish Jenna was a little more in tune with that part of her nature.  But, she's more of a Robin Hood type.

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Sharquelle In reply to LadyMetaRose [2014-04-25 21:19:03 +0000 UTC]



 The definition of being a good teacher is translating your lessons to something your student understands; with Bryn, that isn't so hard to do...   

Thank you! I bet Bryn sees himself as quite the rockstar so he would totally agree! I must say that I like how you portrait Jenna as a lot more than just a hack-and-slash hero. She has a real personality that makes her strong but not unrealistic and 'human' without making her fragile. Love it! 

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LadyMetaRose In reply to Sharquelle [2014-04-26 01:14:44 +0000 UTC]

Haha, very true!   And I think we learn later that that Bryn definitely understands the ladies. Or, at least tries.   

Awwww! you are incredible sweet to say all of those nice things!   

I'm really glad that's what you're getting out of my comics, since that's really how I'm trying to present her.  You don't know how much it means to me.   

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Sharquelle In reply to LadyMetaRose [2014-04-27 09:26:43 +0000 UTC]

 

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ChloexBowie [2013-11-20 12:24:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm only after reading this now as I've been out! I loved this chapter, Brynjolf really made it special! I always wanted the Thieves to mention something about the Dovahkiin but I guess NPC's aren't too interested in these things! 


That troll gad me so worried!    It's great to see Aronansa using her shouts though! Really glad you enjoyed writing this too, I know you mentioned you were having a tough time! Really fantastic writing      

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Sharquelle In reply to ChloexBowie [2013-11-20 16:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!  

You’re saying exactly what I was thinking! Why does none of the them show any interest in you being Dragonborn? Being a mythical legend, with awesome potential leaves any calculating, ambitious Breton Guildmaster pondering his options how to make good use of that. Be it for the glory of the Guild or because of a more ‘personal’ interest.  It would make any committed Nordic mentor proud and excited; guiding a person who’s legend you grew up with. That’s like having the honor of being Mozart’s music-teacher…            


It was quite a while ago that I wrote this chapter but it still makes me laugh. And when I started correcting the spelling, before uploading it, I was smirking half the time. Normally, it takes me somewhere around 4 days to write a chapter. But the one I am currently working on (no. 39) involves something very big, with scales and serious anger management-issues.  Writing about that is exhausting, it’s great, it’s intense, it's rewarding but it is soooo draining. Just writing a single scene took me four days. But I promise you it’s going to be worth reading it! 

I have to watch my big mouth every time I type something down here…  since it takes a while before we are getting there and I don’t want to spoil anything, hahaha!   

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ChloexBowie In reply to Sharquelle [2013-11-20 17:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha but we're soooo curious!!!  


 You're awesome! Can't wait for your next update! 

 

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Haekate [2013-11-18 22:13:05 +0000 UTC]

OMG it's fabulous,fantastic,wonderful and hilarious! 

I like the way you depicted Brynjolf(really as I imagine him ) and his tale about Helgen...no words,I've simply laughed as a mad!

I liked even the first part,right in the pride of Mercer.

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Sharquelle In reply to Haekate [2013-11-18 22:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much I had so much fun writing this chapter, introducing Bryn as the fantastic 'enfant-terrible'   that I think he really is. It's nice to know that I am not the only one who imagines him to be like that!  To Mercer I have one piece of advice, when dealing with a rebellious little Bosmer like Aronansa; do as you would be done by.   

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