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I'm drawing Page23 now.If there is something of wrong in characters' lines. Please teach me right English.
Thank you!
He've --- He's
found --- find
careless mistake! XD
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amazing!!! I'm curious to see the color version
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you're very welcome
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Everyone seems to have covered everything 
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I think is should be: "Old friend of mine" instead of "old friend of me"
Looking forward to the finished version
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YouΒ΄re very welcome dear
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Ummmm yay just forgettin^^
does orochi mean snake in japanese?^^
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Right. It's old Japanese.
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wooooww cool^^ XD i guessed yayyy!! XD wanna learn japanese^^ XD
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awwww yay forgot^^
orochi means snake in japanese, right?^^
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The Yamata-no-Orochi is mentioned in Shaman King as Ryu's Over Soul. That's what I thought of; just to be different from the Okami fans. XD
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Susanoo and Yamata-noOrochi sometime appear in Japanese manga/anime.
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Yeah, I know. =3 I learn loads from manga.
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Susanoo VS Orochi... this is familiar. XDDD
*coughOkamicough*
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As you know, character's names of Okami originate in Japanese myth and old literature. 
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yes. XD that's why I like it!
and I like yours too!
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OMG!!I canΒ΄t waitXDThe names "Susanoo" and "Orochi" reminds me of "Okami"GREAT!So awsome!^^
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Thank you! ^_^
Susanoo is one of the great hero in Japanese myth. He defeated the snake-monster with eight heads Yamata-no-Orochi.
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ThatΒ΄s sound alot like Okami
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Susanoo - Okami
Orochi -Okami
inspiration from Okami?
Okami is a great game!
I`v run it 10 times and I am not tired of it jet
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No.
My characters also originate it too.
Susanoo is one of a great hero in Japanese myth. He defeated a snake-monster with eight heads, Yamata-no-Orochi.
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I know, but they are in Okami too
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I apologize in advance if these have already been pointed out, but...
"But he's been missing for a long while."
"I wanna find him."
"So I will leave for the outside world next Fall."
I hope that helps
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Thank you!
Your advice helped me.
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"travellers who know your daddy's news visited your grandpa's den"
I might suggest something along the lines of
"travelers who know of your father's situation have visited your grandpa's den, telling of news"
but just wanted to suggest something to the author of one of my favorite web comics
anyway cant wait for more
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"News from my dad?"
"Yep! Travelers who know about your daddy visits Grandpa's den. Grandpa said 'One of them is an old friend of mine.' "
"Your father was..."
"He was a great fighter. People called him 'The Hero of Fire'. His real name, though, is Susanoo. He defeated a terrible monster, called Yamata-no-Orochi."
"But he's been missing for a long time. I wanna find him, so I will leave for the outside world next Fall. What's more, I hope to train myself and become as noble as he."
"When you leave..."
"Sure! Let's tackle the world together!"
*cough*
"Look! Some travelers."
Can't wait for the finished version.
And those names, Susanoo and Yamata-no-Orochi, remind me of Okami. <3 Gagh I love that game.
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Thank you very much!
I will correct them!
I'm drawing this page now.
LOL Susanoo and Yamatan-no-Orochi appear in Japanese myth.
Susanoo was one of a great hero and he defeated Yamata-no-Orochi.
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No prob. ;3
So I've heard.
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I think "see the large world together" would work better in that last part.
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Wow! Sound nice! Thank you!
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hmm, these are very interesting sketches, so you first draw out your comic page, and then you would add the effects and color in photoshop?
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Yes. I've always use Photoshop. ^_^
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awesome!
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Thank you! I'm glad you say so.
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cool! so that's what it looks like before how do u do the speack bubbles and the box lines?
and what do u use to get it to look like it does when it's done! u know like so........real!!
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Thank you.
At first I draw line art on the paper. Tne next, I scan it and paint it by Photoshop.
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