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Published: 2008-09-15 01:11:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1066; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 21
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Thanks a lot for your comments, I appreciate them greatly. This is going into scraps now, as I think I have enough feedback to make a decision. ^^




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Hiya guys, I need your help for a sec. *begs*

Here's two versions of a panel in the first page of my comic. But, I can't decide which version to use! The one with trees in the background is the original one, but I was curious to see how the panel would look without the trees, and I quite like the dark silouhettes against the sky...

One word: HELP? Which version do you like?

Btw, there's much more to be done to this; coloring, adding further detail etc. The original is in a much larger resolution as well, but you'll have to wait 'til the entire page is done if you wanna see more details.
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Comments: 72

DingoMutt [2008-09-15 02:15:06 +0000 UTC]

I like the first one... they look so very alone...

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Truckmonkey [2008-09-15 02:03:23 +0000 UTC]

I like the first one. It's very dramatic and puts a lot more emphasis on the horses. I also get a stronger feeling of sunrise/sunset going on.

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Wolvekit In reply to ??? [2008-09-15 02:01:39 +0000 UTC]

Hm... I like that I can see the foal better in the first one. But I can't see the definition on the foal as well as in the second.

So maybe... lighter, less opaque trees?

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horsesrlife [2008-09-15 01:59:37 +0000 UTC]

I like the top one better, with no trees. The trees are nice, but it makes it a little easier to see without them, and horses look like they fit in better in a large field rather than a forest. nice job, can't wait to see the comic.

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Greatalmightyqueen [2008-09-15 01:53:45 +0000 UTC]

The first one, for sure. I love the contrast and the atmosphere, and the foal is much more noticeable. I find it overall to be much more dramatic and pleasing to the eye.

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Larka-the-Inu-Master [2008-09-15 01:51:51 +0000 UTC]

First.

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Ice-Cube-101 [2008-09-15 01:49:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the one without the trees, it gives more mmmm..... emphasys (is that how you spell it? ) to the mare and foal.

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Horsehuggingdragon In reply to ??? [2008-09-15 01:41:19 +0000 UTC]

hmm, that's tough! But I think I really like the top one, with the dark silhouettes against the lighter sky

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Demon1xo [2008-09-15 01:38:01 +0000 UTC]

I like the contrasts of the horses and the sky in the first one better.

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Rafica [2008-09-15 01:35:55 +0000 UTC]

if you want a more cozy, homey feeling, you should go with the second. if the mare and foal are supposed to be alone then maybe the first?

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karzi01 [2008-09-15 01:33:05 +0000 UTC]

i love the first one! i think you should go with that one

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DarkMustangSoul [2008-09-15 01:26:18 +0000 UTC]

I like the first one better. It's easier to see the foal and it just makes the horses stand out more.

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Pertinacious [2008-09-15 01:25:33 +0000 UTC]

In all honesty, though it is a tad harder to see, I really like the second panel more.

It just seems a wee more, busy, I don't know, balanced.

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RF-Stables [2008-09-15 01:21:03 +0000 UTC]

In the first one, it's easier to see the foal, plus, I like how it gives off that feeling of a wide open space...like freedom and such.

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Posiitive [2008-09-15 01:20:01 +0000 UTC]

I much like the first one, more because you can actually see the foal. In the second one I can't even see the foal.
I love this though I'm sure which ever one you choose will turn out great in the end

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RoxMad [2008-09-15 01:19:33 +0000 UTC]

I like the first one definately. I didn't even notice the foal in the second one, and the second seems more "flat," without those striking silhouettes and that gorgeous sunlight in the back.

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chutkat [2008-09-15 01:18:42 +0000 UTC]

I like the first one better

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Larka-Wolf [2008-09-15 01:18:26 +0000 UTC]

hmmm hard choice they are both soo amazing!
The first one: Would look good if both the horse silhouettes were darker, black almost.

The second one: My personal fav! The foal needs to be lighter,but Still looks great as it is!

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FsuEquestrian [2008-09-15 01:15:42 +0000 UTC]

They are both amazing... but I really like the silouhettes against the sky in the first one! So if I had to choose, I would say the first one.

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itscarey [2008-09-15 01:12:58 +0000 UTC]

I think it's a wee bit easier to see what's going on in the first. :] I wouldn't have really seen the foal in the second one, especially since my monitor's a little dark. >.<

Looks awesome, though! I'll definitely read.

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SheWolff In reply to itscarey [2008-09-15 01:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for your feedback. Color will be added eventually, so the foal may "pop" then, if I should decide to keep the trees. But yeah. *thinks* I'll see what a few others have to say as well.

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