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Published: 2019-06-05 22:16:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 16243; Favourites: 147; Downloads: 40
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Description Not the nicest of days for a picnic, but hey, que sera sera!

A little scene taken from one of 's wonderful stories - you can read the first part of it here . I tried some new things with the lineart and colouring in this; some less successful than others...

Milly and the story which inspired this piece belong to
Mina belongs to
Caylin, Tinatalan and Felarya belong to
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Comments: 26

david-dent-jedai [2019-06-27 06:31:17 +0000 UTC]

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PrinnyDood-Abides [2019-06-14 13:36:52 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome, and not just because I loooove how cute Mina is in your style! 

Believe it or not, I just finished reading the story this is based on.  That's how slow I am. 

But yeah, I love this to death.  All the characters are so expressive and full of personality - even if I weren't familiar with them all already, I feel like I'd get a good glimpse of their personalities just from this single image.  Milly and Tina being their sweet, voracious selves.  Tarynn being the lovably awkward and uneasy elf we know so well.  Mina's adorable shyness.  Caylin's sexy, pouty guardedness.  All perfect.

Great as always! 

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SimonLorimer In reply to PrinnyDood-Abides [2019-06-23 21:31:47 +0000 UTC]

She is a cutey patootey to be true  Glad you liked it! Mina's such a nuanced subtle character I don't know why I made her just happily holding some fruit, but it just seemed to work somehow. And don't worry, when it comes to late feedback you've a long way to go before you beat me, young padawan..! 

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Karbo [2019-06-11 22:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh nice ! I like how expressive you made each of them here, each with their distinctive personalities well conveyed through both expressions and body language

Great job !

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SimonLorimer In reply to Karbo [2019-06-23 21:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you mate! I had great fun with Caylin's expression, really fun character to work with

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ChryoStrand [2019-06-10 13:26:11 +0000 UTC]

ohh lol that's quite thee gathering! maybe i should head over to 's ngs and see what is conspiring here lol. with all tarynns misgivings about eating live prey i can understand her having a little fruit instead, but anko eating fruit? haha, now that is a interesting change lol.

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SimonLorimer In reply to ChryoStrand [2019-06-23 21:27:04 +0000 UTC]

It's well worth a read! Well through a slightly misplaced sense of racial loyalty and an even further misplaced sense of identity Tarynn won't eat elves or any children, but otherwise she'll take what she can get!

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FS-the-voresmith In reply to ChryoStrand [2019-06-10 13:30:17 +0000 UTC]

That's actually Mina, not Anko. She's much more of a sweetheart - but also quite a cunning predator when she needs to be! And both Mina and Tarynn did swallow a few people during that picnic, in fact. 

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ChryoStrand In reply to FS-the-voresmith [2019-06-14 16:00:17 +0000 UTC]

oh ! my mistake XD i didn't read the description thoroughly enough. Wow i really haven't seen any art featuring her for quite a long time, i'm used to seeing anko as the one blue mermaid in central felarya, interesting. i suppose ill have to read the story, so Tarynn did decide to partake in the voring this time eh?

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FS-the-voresmith In reply to ChryoStrand [2019-06-14 22:40:56 +0000 UTC]

Well, Tarynn eats whatever she can whenever she can; the poor thing is too skinny and unlucky to do otherwise. And this time the food was all provided, so she just had to tuck in.

And you're right, it had been a long time since we'd seen a picture of Mina!

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TheWiking2000 [2019-06-09 06:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I was about to say "poor Tarynn, for not getting a tiny" but I then realized "poor everyone", bee-cause what she's about to unleash on them! Lovely image! I especially like Caylin's nd Tarynn's juxtaposed expressions here. 

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SimonLorimer In reply to TheWiking2000 [2019-06-23 21:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Don't fret, she does get one or two in the story! But yes, I think when it comes to the mood of the picnic what goes up must come down

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Greyman101 [2019-06-07 11:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Catlin looks to be keeping a watchful eye on Anko. Wise strategy.

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SimonLorimer In reply to Greyman101 [2019-06-23 21:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Haha I did realise after it seems like she's got beef with Mina but she's mainly supposed to just be not entirely trusting of their unwelcome guest

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FS-the-voresmith In reply to Greyman101 [2019-06-07 18:23:21 +0000 UTC]

That's not Anko, though; that's Mina. Unlike Anko, she's a real sweetheart.

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FS-the-voresmith [2019-06-06 07:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Ah, this is lovely! Poor Tarynn, trying so hard to fit in that she doesn't. The stress of putting on a facade, maintaining her composure and waiting to see what will go wrong... Mina, Milly and Tina look nicely relaxed, very much in the friendly party spirit of the picnic (despite the ominous grey sky!), which just emphasises that contrast. Living in the moment. And Caylin looking guarded, of course. 

Tina stuffing herself greedily is amusing, and the way Caylin is holding that poor tiny naga-girl looks very uncomfortable! 

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SimonLorimer In reply to FS-the-voresmith [2019-06-23 21:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so! It was all inspired by your story, after all, so thank you for writing it!

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DarkHourglass [2019-06-06 06:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Great job!Tarynn's expression is my favorite XD

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SimonLorimer In reply to DarkHourglass [2019-06-23 21:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Prof-Nekko [2019-06-06 01:02:10 +0000 UTC]

poor Tarynn it's a party have some fun already

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SimonLorimer In reply to Prof-Nekko [2019-06-23 21:20:55 +0000 UTC]

She's trying, just a little too hard!

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Kululu17 [2019-06-06 00:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice job on portraying all these characters "Lorimer Style." It's fun to see them next to Tarynn, fitting in with your style, yet instantly recognizable. And the expressions are excellent. From the enthusiastic Milly to the reserved and self-doubting Tarynn.


I also really like the way you posed the figures - managing natural poses while, for example hiding Tina's breasts. A nice way to create a SFW image without resorting to fig leaves XD


Though as a non-artist, I'm having trouble identifying specifically what you did differently. You usually work mostly with flat colors, and I'm seeing more gradients here, and the piece has an overall softer feel compared with some of your other work. Regardless, nice to see you continue to experiment.

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SimonLorimer In reply to Kululu17 [2019-06-23 21:20:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you mate! It was good fun trying to figure out the setting, gratuitous nudity isn't exactly my forte Nothing too much different, mainly as you correctly identified the colouring but I always tried a much thinner lineart and such. 

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BulletBader [2019-06-05 23:19:35 +0000 UTC]

I remember this scene! Poor Tarynn just trying to fit in, but her paranoia keeps getting worse.

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SimonLorimer In reply to BulletBader [2019-06-23 21:18:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha yes, being just one of a crowd is hard for her!

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BulletBader In reply to SimonLorimer [2019-06-23 22:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Here's hoping she'll get the peace she deserves!

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