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This is another My Little Pony oc, Malice. I decided to make some more and hope that you like him.Name: Malice
Age: Adult
Gender: Male, Stallion
Race: Alicorn
Coat colour: Black and dark grey
Hoof colour: Black
Mane/tail colour: Scarlet red with blood red shading
Eye colour: Blood red
Accessories: Dark red and gold armour, golden bands with red jewels over his forelegs and a gold crown.
Cutie mark: A black eye with flames around it.
Cutie mark story: His father provided him with a cold and heartless upbringing. He soon discovered that he enjoyed using the same kind of dark magic. He learned that he was able to use his talent with it to inspire dark emotions in the ponies around him and that it made his dark powers stronger. Realizing that his destiny was to follow down the dark hoof steps of his father he was granted a cutie mark through his mother's heritage.
Special Talent: To inspire the dark emotions of fear, anger, hatred, and suffering into the hearts of others and use it to manipulate them and make them do his bidding.
Residence: Crystal Empire (original), Unknown (current)
Family: King Sombra (father), Midnight (twin sister)
Love Interest: Demon Wing
Pet: N/A
Voice: Mark Hamill
Profile by *CapitainSmiffy minus a few of my own additions.
Design made in the Pony Creator by *generalzoi .
Malice/Midnight (C) *Kayla-Hiwatari
Demon Wing (C) ~eveedemon
Cutie Mark Design (C) ~tifafenrir09
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and characters (C) Hasbro and Lauren Faust
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Comments: 40
rigifan32 [2013-09-15 12:19:44 +0000 UTC]
I am using him in my first MLP fanfic True Harmony and I am creating a wallpaper of the battle against him and I am crediting you for it
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SimonOuma In reply to rigifan32 [2013-09-15 18:50:01 +0000 UTC]
I don't mind people using my ocs. But first I like people to ask permission about using them. Then when they have been used I like to see the finished product. I'm glad you like him though. He also has a sister as well.
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rigifan32 In reply to SimonOuma [2013-09-15 18:56:02 +0000 UTC]
He is the main villain in my fanfic, wait and see what happens
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SimonOuma In reply to rigifan32 [2013-09-15 19:01:14 +0000 UTC]
Okay then let me know what you have in mind. In the future please ask first. I usually don't mind people using my ocs. I have quite a few other ponies if you need them too.
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rigifan32 In reply to SimonOuma [2013-09-15 19:05:27 +0000 UTC]
OK thanks, he teams up with Queen Chrysalis to capture the Elements of Harmony, with the exception of Twilight, and they use Carnival cat in their plan to use her sadness and worst fear to force her to do their bidding. Their main goal is to rule Equestria with Eternal Evil.
I will ask in the future
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SimonOuma In reply to rigifan32 [2013-09-15 19:09:14 +0000 UTC]
Sounds interesting, he does want to rule and control people through their dark emotions. Sorry I don't have more details, it's just a quick bio I did on him. I can try to put up more information on him and his sister if it helps.
That would be great, thanks.
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MyLittlePrimo [2013-07-06 15:25:53 +0000 UTC]
Son of King Sombra, and voiced by Mark Hamill, eh?! Neat!
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SimonOuma In reply to MyLittlePrimo [2013-07-06 15:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks though I was getting a bit of grief for having him related to Sombra. The actors are just who I'd pick to voice my ponies. Thanks for the comment and fav.
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CapitainSmiffy [2013-03-08 13:14:49 +0000 UTC]
he looks cool, a lot like his father
he sounds cool too
great design
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tifafenrir09 [2013-03-03 00:19:24 +0000 UTC]
Oooo, he looks very evil. Like father, like son!
I'd hate to be near him in a dark alley! Otherwise, he looks very cool.
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SimonOuma In reply to tifafenrir09 [2013-03-03 00:21:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you like him. I had fun with his dark design and making him like his father.
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tifafenrir09 In reply to SimonOuma [2013-03-03 00:23:01 +0000 UTC]
I hope Ash likes him too.
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RLBFitzy [2013-03-03 00:13:29 +0000 UTC]
He seems really nasty looking and a good addition to add to his father's evil forces.
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PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 00:05:51 +0000 UTC]
K, the fact he's related to King Sombra is too sue-ish. A better backstory is needed, and I would say change the design a bit. Otherwise, good job on the profile.
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SimonOuma In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 00:20:00 +0000 UTC]
There's more information on his sister's profile. That's only the part associated with the cutie mark. This is a quick profile so not all the detail is there anyway. As for it being sueish that they're related to King Sombra, King Sombra himself is a sue being based on Sauron from Lord of the Rings.
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PoliticalViolet In reply to SimonOuma [2013-03-03 00:30:25 +0000 UTC]
Sigh. He's not based on a LoTR character. That doesn't make him a sue, you have no argument for that.
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SimonOuma In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 00:44:14 +0000 UTC]
Go look at his page on the MLP wiki according to his creator he's based off of Sauron. Hence why I wanted to do something with him, I'm a big Lord of the Rings fan.
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PoliticalViolet In reply to SimonOuma [2013-03-03 00:54:52 +0000 UTC]
Still doesn't mean he's a sue. And since when is everything on the internet right?
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SimonOuma In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 01:32:55 +0000 UTC]
No but there's an interview and Twitter feeds as reference. Inspiration from something doesn't make a sue no, but trying to take over the land and cover it all in darkness is pretty overdone and a copy from Lotr and Sauron. Below is the info about him being like Sauron.
β Sombra is similar to Sauron from Lord of the Rings. Both have a similar appearance, neither has a lot of screentime or dialogue, both lost their physical form in the past (though Sombra is able to regain his form), and both are pure evil.
β Sombra's theme sounds similar to that of Sauron and Mordor in Lord of the Rings.
β The Crystal Empire under Sombra's control also looks similar to Mordor.
β The way he dies looks similar to Sauron's first defeat, and the way the dark crystal that he is standing on shatters looks similar to Barad-dΓ»r's destruction during Sauron's actual death scene.
β His horn looks similar to Sauron's spikes in Legendary Frog's parody One Ring to Rule Them All. Both it and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic were made with flash animation.
β Meghan McCarthy confirmed in an interview that Sombra was inspired by Sauron, and was only meant to be a dark presence that brings fear to the crystal ponies.
Found here [link]
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PoliticalViolet In reply to SimonOuma [2013-03-03 02:57:36 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't say it's overdone, most MLP villains are like that. And his similarity to Sauron is your opinion, and I respect that.
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SimonOuma In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 03:12:00 +0000 UTC]
Yes well as far as Sues go, given the definition of it most characters made including cannon ones are considered them.
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PoliticalViolet In reply to SimonOuma [2013-03-03 03:53:58 +0000 UTC]
How so? The only one I can think of is Celestia.
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SimonOuma In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 04:12:56 +0000 UTC]
I was speaking more in general terms. If you want an MLP example then how about Twilight. She's your typical nerdy girl and as the heroine she always saves the day with her friends. Plus she's fallen victim to Deus ex machina being turned into an Alicorn to make her a Princess.
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PoliticalViolet In reply to SimonOuma [2013-03-03 13:45:33 +0000 UTC]
Ugh, I was hoping you wouldn't bring up Twi. I am so sick of bronies calling her a sue. Have you never seen Lesson Zero? She has loads of flaws. Now that she's become an alicorn people seem to be forgetting that.
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SimonOuma In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 19:19:18 +0000 UTC]
I was merely using her as an example. I quite like Twilight and have no problem with Sues whatsoever. But that does fall under the definition and using it any charater can be called a sue. The fun thing with ocs jis to make a character interesting and unique. If they have something to do with the cannon to better intertwine them into the fandom from the creator's imagination then why should that put such a broad label on the character? It's really just a way of discriminating against a person's creativity in my opinion.
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PoliticalViolet In reply to SimonOuma [2013-03-03 19:44:17 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but an overpowered alicorn that's, say, daughter of Celestia or is ruler of an element of nature that's powerful doesn't make it original or unique. Tons of people make ones like that. You can do whatever you like with your OCs, I don't care, but they were merely suggestions, nothing more. I am sorry if I offended you.
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SimonOuma In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 19:53:41 +0000 UTC]
I agree that would be cliche. As I said before this is just some basic information. I do plan to do more with my ocs. The suggestions may be helpful when I come back to him.
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PoliticalViolet In reply to SimonOuma [2013-03-03 19:55:34 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful, I would love to see that. If you ever need help or critique, I love doing both.
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SimonOuma In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 20:15:33 +0000 UTC]
And feel free to have a look at my other ocs.
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PoliticalViolet In reply to SimonOuma [2013-03-03 20:21:14 +0000 UTC]
Sure, I would love to.
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SimonOuma In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 20:10:40 +0000 UTC]
Okay, good to know.
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RLBFitzy In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 00:15:29 +0000 UTC]
I think it'd only be sueish depending on how its done and I don't nessarily think sueish in of itself is bad. I do agree more detail would be great in the profile but knowing that she has more characters connected to this one I'm sure more and better details will be forthcoming.
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PoliticalViolet In reply to RLBFitzy [2013-03-03 00:32:07 +0000 UTC]
It is bad to be sue-ish, however the character has potential. I never said the profile needs more detail, I think it is good already.
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RLBFitzy In reply to PoliticalViolet [2013-03-03 01:15:12 +0000 UTC]
I tend to disagree on the Sue-ish or in this case Stu-ish department....Then again we're in the day and age where almost anything, if not everything, is labeled as such simply because they are closer to specific character(s) or have been designed to be more firmly entwined into the fandom. I personally think judgement for such things should be held for those that take things way too far instead of almost anyone who makes a character who "falls" into the catagory.
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PoliticalViolet In reply to RLBFitzy [2013-03-03 03:01:18 +0000 UTC]
I agree, it's a matter of opinion. I have never been a fan of canon relationships, but again, it's an opinion. My point is to give people suggestions for possibly improving their OC, however it is their choice.
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