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Published: 2015-05-28 23:38:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 4582; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 17
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Well, three hours and thirty slides for a GIF that lasts six seconds...Comments/Critiques are gladly appreciated.
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CrazyDragy [2015-05-30 12:12:40 +0000 UTC]
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First im not sure what impact means...
Second i realy like this gif animation,but its a bit to fast in some places , i think you cud make few more frames in some places to slow down this "movement".
I believe the hair part cud have used a little bit more movement, but otherwise i think its realy good.
In some frames you can see few sketch lines ,but i dont think thats to big of a problem.
I know that making good animation aint easy ,but i believe this was done with love and i think its worth being proud of.
With warmest hugs
-CrazyDragy
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littlemissswagmuffin [2015-05-30 00:22:34 +0000 UTC]
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Okay, I really like this. I think you captured each stage of the transformation pretty well, but please do more focus on the wings; there wasn't enough detail in the bone structure. I think you should make the rib cage more pronounced and make the face narrower and a little more sunken. I would rough-up the hair a bit too, as well as the tail and over the hooves. I think the facial expression itself turned out really well; the fear and then more like anger. It's absolutely brilliant. Good teeth details too. Now please do a colored one! Keep up the great work
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DraconBlixx [2015-05-29 06:13:34 +0000 UTC]
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The movement you have is pretty smooth. The biggest thing I'd like to see is more frames just to make those change close up shots last a bit longer. Its just a bit fast, especially in the wings its kinda hard to even perceive what happens the first time you see it. Just a few more inbetweens to slow it down though and it will be lookin pretty nice. Also watch out about that neck motion in the last shot where her face changes. I see that shes huffing but the animation itself pops from image to image which takes you out a bit. If you add a few more images halfway between the images you already have there, it will move a lot smoother.
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rootbeer2222 [2015-05-29 00:56:31 +0000 UTC]
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incredible I am not sure if this your first time animation but if it is I am stunned but it I love this kinda style there are no mistakes other than it being kinda shaky but that does not really matter but for a image by image animation I would say this is pretty dang good I must say tis all! k e e p u p t h e g o o d w o r k a n d s o m e d a y i t w i l l be w o r t h!
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SkyBreeze-MasterMC In reply to colourmix [2015-05-29 10:38:16 +0000 UTC]
I hand drew the frames on 8x11 paper, scanned them in, then turned the frames into a video, then converted the video to a gif file.
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xXwoofehXx [2015-05-29 02:02:07 +0000 UTC]
i love this, it captures the emotion in the transformation completely!
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TheArtOfDust213 [2015-05-29 01:50:18 +0000 UTC]
Coooooooooooooooool! Can i havve an animatin?
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SkyBreeze-MasterMC In reply to TheBackgroundPony [2015-05-29 01:19:42 +0000 UTC]
Possibly in the future, though not until I get back to doing digital art (that way I'm not going through fifty sheets of paper)
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TheBackgroundPony In reply to SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-29 01:26:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh, Okie! I Was Thinking That We Could Do An Animation Trade...
Yours Would Be Better Than Mine Though...
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SkyBreeze-MasterMC In reply to TheBackgroundPony [2015-05-29 01:28:35 +0000 UTC]
Alright, I might shoot you a note when I get back on digital art/animation
(I'd love to do an animation trade sometime ^^)
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YoshiRingo [2015-05-29 00:42:57 +0000 UTC]
Dawww, thats pretty adorable, I hope this will be a bit longer till she howls X3
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SkyBreeze-MasterMC In reply to YoshiRingo [2015-05-29 00:45:00 +0000 UTC]
I might create a digital version in the future, but since I was limited on paper, this is the best I've got for now...
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YoshiRingo In reply to SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-29 10:15:17 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to se that happen, we need more animators in the community, and your adorable werepony transformations would be awesome to see around X3
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The-Cheeze-Ity [2015-05-29 00:27:43 +0000 UTC]
I love it. You put the time and effort into it. Very smooth.
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SkyBreeze-MasterMC In reply to The-Cheeze-Ity [2015-05-29 13:17:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, this was my first hand-drawn animation ever ^^
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The-Cheeze-Ity In reply to SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-29 15:58:46 +0000 UTC]
its still good
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SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-29 00:03:20 +0000 UTC]
I forgot to mention, I had to study some of 's animations to figure out how to do this...
Just sayin...
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SlideSwitched In reply to SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-29 00:27:57 +0000 UTC]
wait which animation XD
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SlideSwitched In reply to SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-29 00:39:02 +0000 UTC]
wow, thanks bruh
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SlideSwitched In reply to SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-29 00:45:23 +0000 UTC]
I really gotta get back into handdrawn stuff cause things like this look way better
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SkyBreeze-MasterMC In reply to SlideSwitched [2015-05-29 00:50:02 +0000 UTC]
I'll be honest here, I had to sit at a light box for a full hour and a half for the first fifteen frames...
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SlideSwitched In reply to SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-29 01:15:25 +0000 UTC]
I have to use a window X3 I can only do it during the day
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SkyBreeze-MasterMC In reply to SlideSwitched [2015-05-29 01:18:29 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I got lucky since our art room (at school) had an old light box...
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SlideSwitched In reply to SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-29 01:31:07 +0000 UTC]
They're really nice, I wish I took art class this year cause my school might have one...dunno
anyways, cool animation, glad to know someone looks up to my animation XD
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tabbytigers In reply to SkyBreeze-MasterMC [2015-05-28 23:51:13 +0000 UTC]
i'm extremely impressed, three hours is pretty quick for a whole animation..!
and a smooth one, at that!
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SkyBreeze-MasterMC In reply to tabbytigers [2015-05-28 23:53:54 +0000 UTC]
It was three hours without constant distraction (for instance leaving school in the rain)
Total actual time was probably about four or five hours...
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