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Solone — Chamber Made - Part 7
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Published: 2015-10-15 16:28:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 26021; Favourites: 173; Downloads: 301
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The chamber lurched into life with a buzz and a hum before beginning to throb with light and heat. A sickly sweet smelling vapour snaked it's way from the vents filling the confined space with it's heady scent.Mia's noisy protest would have gone unheard were it not for the intercom device she'd ordered a week ago.
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I think this is my least favorite shot out of the whole sequence but I don't know what could be done to improve it? Unless maybe a shot of her panicked face instead of this angle? A few sudden drops of sweat? Maybe a couple very tiny changes?
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As usual, it's like you're in my head. I wasn't happy with this one much either, I tried various angles but either the scene didn't look great or the character wasn't sitting right in frame. I'd used this pose on a previous (unpublished image) of a girl banging against a door as she begins to change into something monsterous and it worked a lot better. I think it's partly that the chamber door isn't actually flat, so harder to get her leaning against it convincingly. Eventually I decided to include it as I felt it helped the flow of the sequence, and I'd already focused on the face a fair amount. There needed to be at least one shot that implies the door has slammed shut.
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It seems we're getting to the good stuff. :3
One thing though : could you make the writtings bigger ? It's hard to read.
Either that or you should make your pictures with a bigger resolution, like 2048pxl wide instead of 1024pxl.
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Seems I uploaded it at the wrong size. You should now be able to view it in it's original size. All the images however, can be viewed in fullscreen if you click the download button anyhow. Hopefully that makes the writing a little clearer and I'll not make the same mistake
I've kept it quite small as I wasn't sure about adding text at all, so decided to go with something that didn't interfere too much with the image.
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