HOME | DD

SoloZerker — RWBY OC Blank Bio Sheet / Profile
Published: 2014-01-30 01:52:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 59783; Favourites: 567; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description body div#devskin0 hr { }

Introduction of Character

 

Name: (First/Last)

Nickname:  (If none, leave blank)

Age:

Gender:

Race: (Human, Faunus, Other)

Symbol: (This is the characters Emblem, for example, Weiss is a snowflake glyph, Ruby's is a rose, etc. Tell us what the symbol is for your character, and define it's meaning and connection to your character)

Affiliation(s): (Signal Academy, Beacon Academy, White Fang, Other)

 

The Character’s Appearance

Height:

Weight:

Eye Colour:

Hair: (Colour and Length)

Complexion:

About The Character

Status: (Active, Retired, Dead)

Occupation: (Hunter/Huntress, Student, Teacher)

 

Handedness:

Clothing:

Outfit Colours:

Physical Characteristics: (What do they look like?)

Accessories: (Key Items the character possesses)


Personality:

[Be as detailed as you can with your character’s personality. DO NOT JUST PUT DOWN WORDS! Go into depth with your character.]

 

Fear(s):

Likes:

Dislikes:

Habit(s):

Fatal Flaw(s):


Strengths:

Weaknesses:

 

 

Weapon

Weapon Name:

 

Weapon Description:

 

Relationship With Others

Reputation:

(How people view your Character in General)

Friends:

Team:

Enemy(ies):

The Character’s Abilities

Agility:    /10

Swordsmanship:    /10

Long Range Accuracy:   /10

Defense:   /10

Offense:   /10

Aura:  /10

People Skills:   /10

 

Special Skill(s)/ Semblance:  (For example, a Faunus has Night Vision (skill), Pyrrha controls Polarity(semblance), etc)

 

 

Brief History: (Must be at least 200 words / 2 paragraphs)

 

Trivia:



Related content
Comments: 303

TerribilisScriptor [2017-02-19 22:11:22 +0000 UTC]

hey i remember this! i did an OC with this a few months back ^^ (he still has no fucking artwork tho >_< )

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to TerribilisScriptor [2017-02-20 07:17:02 +0000 UTC]

I remember it as well. I still have an idle "mention" notification from you about either it... or another that you made. I think you'd asked me to review it, but I've been unable to find the time.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

TerribilisScriptor In reply to SoloZerker [2017-02-20 13:59:45 +0000 UTC]

take your time. i just stumbeled over this again after a few monthy while browsing new RWBY fanart

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

pokeczarelf In reply to ??? [2017-02-12 07:31:23 +0000 UTC]

pokeczarelf.deviantart.com/art…

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

UltimateGamer140 In reply to ??? [2017-02-04 22:59:31 +0000 UTC]

ultimategamer140.deviantart.co…

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to UltimateGamer140 [2017-02-05 03:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Cool. 
Be sure to keep working on it and improving it as you go. 

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

UltimateGamer140 In reply to SoloZerker [2017-02-05 10:49:31 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

kinghypno2016 In reply to ??? [2017-01-08 15:20:27 +0000 UTC]

The Void
19
Male
Human
A void with a bow and arrows and two guns
Likes killing grimm and makeing new friends
Dislikes Grimm and evil organisations
Job hunts man
Costume a mask with a cabe and powerful tech chest plate with Quiver and holsters of my bow and arrow and guns
Was a Crush on Ruby Rose

👍: 0 ⏩: 2

SoloZerker In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-08 21:27:18 +0000 UTC]

That's... nice. 

Are you sharing this here in the comments for a reason?

There are also quite a few spelling and grammatical errors in your description that you shared, you may want to fix those if you do plan on doing more with this snippet of information...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kinghypno2016 In reply to SoloZerker [2017-01-09 08:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah sorry is just i been thinking about it ok

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-09 22:06:29 +0000 UTC]

Alright then.

Enjoy.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kinghypno2016 In reply to SoloZerker [2017-01-10 17:54:21 +0000 UTC]

I will thank you

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

kinghypno2016 In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-08 15:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Nickname the void with a mouth

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kinghypno2016 In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-08 15:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Wepaons name the void guns and team oneshot

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kinghypno2016 In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-08 15:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Weapons are a bow mixed with a pistol and a sniper rifle

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kinghypno2016 In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-08 15:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Void is a charismatic but kind i will show respect to his team mates and no mercy to his enemies

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kinghypno2016 In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-08 15:27:12 +0000 UTC]

My friends Ruby Rose Blake and Norma

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kinghypno2016 In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-08 15:28:03 +0000 UTC]

Team VRBN

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kinghypno2016 In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-08 15:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Enemies any one who gets in his way

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kinghypno2016 In reply to kinghypno2016 [2017-01-08 15:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Of saving revenant

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

pyrode In reply to ??? [2016-12-19 00:38:17 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Commenter

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to pyrode [2016-12-19 02:15:23 +0000 UTC]

For the sake of quick reference...

1. Characters in RWBY must be:
A colour
Something that sounds like a colour
Something that means a colour
Something that makes you think of a colour

2. If that character is on a team, then the FIRST LETTER of their name must fit in with a 4 letter acronym that spells a team name that must also be:
A colour
Something that sounds like a colour
Something that means a colour
Something that makes you think of a colour



RWBY is a creation made by Monty Oum. Rooster Teeth and the people now currently working on it had, at first no involvement in it's initial conception, creation, or even the first trailers of the project. The Red, White, Black and Yellow trailers were all made by Monty in his spare time as a proof of concept in order to encourage development on the idea and prove that it could become  -- and surely did -- a huge success for the Rooster Teeth company.

His rules on team names and character names are sill respected down to this day by the current lead writers and directors of the show in lieu of his unfortunate absence. Any characters that fail to adhere to the naming convention rules in my opinion (granted, not the RWBY Team's opinion, but surely similar) are not canon and are a direct violation of the rules set up within the shows universe. There is even an in universe explanation as to why teams and characters are named this way. The background and details can be found here at the official RWBY Wiki.
rwby.wikia.com/wiki/Color_Nami…

So in short, yes, the naming rule still applies and any deviation from that in universe has a direct reason and explanation within the shows ongoing story. The only characters that really have a name breaking the rule are people like Ozpin, and that is explained by Monty Oum himself that it's because of story reasons.

Your RP friend may think that he's fine and not breaking any rules, but those rules are still around and are still obeyed by the current directors and creative leads of RWBY. The rules certainly still apply. Saying they don't apply is like saying that since the person who invented road signs is long since dead, we don't have to obey those anymore. There's just no logic in that.

And then, the long explanation...



TEAM CRDL - Pronounced Team Cardinal. The name of a bird. When thought of, gives thought to the colour of the bird.
Cardin Winchester - in reference to the bird, the Cardinal. A bird that is usually red with browns and black shades mixed into its wings and head. Cardin has a reddish brown haircolour, wears muted colours of grey, gold and black on his armor. Confirmed, followes the colour rule. Added bonus, his name could be a different way of spelling Carden, an Irish name meaning, "From the black fortress".
Russel Thrush - in reference to the bird, the Thrush. A bird that of varying plumage, but can be seen with blues, browns, whites and even yellow-orange coloured feathers. Russel has muted colours similar to the bird. Confirmed, follows the colour rule. Added bonus, The english name "Russel" means RED.
Dove Bronzewing - Dove. Bird. White and muted brown colours. The same bird family as the Pigeon, which goes in tandem with his last name, Bronzewing. And, OH! Would you look at that, he wears bronze coloured armor.
Sky Lark - A Lark, again following the bird motif of team CRDL. The Lark can be seen with brown, white, black and even yellow plumage. His first name, sky can have one think of muted blues, greys and darker purples depending on the type of sky thought of. Sky Lark has blueish grey hair. His armor is muted greys and whites, just like clouds, his under armor is dark, like that of a storm cloud. Colour rule followed. Confirmed to be proper.

Team CFVY - Pronounced Team Coffee. What colour does that make you think of...? Perhaps some browns, blacks, cremes and such. What pairs well with coffee? Why, pastries and cakes, of course!
Coco Adel - Makes you think of cocoa, or chocolate. Coco wears chocolate colorus. She follows the rules.
Fox Alistair - An allusion to "Fox Hunter's Pie". He follows the colour naming rule along with his first name, Fox, which gives the idea of the colours of a fox, such as orange/red colourations. He's basically all reds and oranges, and his face even looks foxlike to help give that allusion, too. Confirmed to follow the naming rules.
Velvet Scarlatina - Velvet can reference Red Velvet cake, of which she is similarily coloured. Scarlatina also gives way to the idea of deep reds, such as scarlet.
Yatsuhashi Daichi - In reference to a Japanese Pastry made with Sweet Beans. "Yatsuhashi" are a Japanese treat, often colored a warm brown tone and possibly a nod towards the mocha colors of the team. Yatsuhashi's full name roughly translates to "Eight Bridges of the Earth". Yatsuhashi's last name, Daichi, means "large, great" combined with "earth, land" or "wisdom, intellect" in Japanese.
* Citation * rwby.wikia.com/wiki/Yatsuhashi…
The entire team is named after sweets. Yatsuhashi's last name can even be translated to "earth", which gives way to the colours used in his armor. Confirmed, follows the naming rules.

Need I go on? It's all in the wiki.... =A=

Team JNPR: rwby.wikia.com/wiki/JNPR
Team RNJR: As per the Color Naming Rule, the color that RNJR brings up is a shade of green called ranger green. rwby.wikia.com/wiki/RNJR
Team FNKI: Think of colorus that connect to "Disco" music.  rwby.wikia.com/wiki/FNKI
Team STRQ: Following the Color Naming Rule, the team name is intended to bring to mind the phrase "stark white". rwby.wikia.com/wiki/STRQ


Here's just the main page to the wiki. rwby.wikia.com/wiki/RWBY_Wiki

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

pyrode In reply to SoloZerker [2016-12-19 03:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for help.
I did discuss it with him before I read all this, and it seems that he just didn't think the rules were necessary and that the limitations weren't fun for him.

Things are cleared up now, gladly. 

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to pyrode [2016-12-19 06:50:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad I could help.

Hopefully the partner of yours realizes that it's not just a rule, but part of the fun with being creative. 

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

TerribilisScriptor In reply to ??? [2016-12-12 21:33:19 +0000 UTC]

terribilisscriptor.deviantart.… i used your spreadsheet for my still pictureless character. fell free to take a look and maybe even rate him ^^ (sorry for my bad english grammar tho i am not nativly english)

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to TerribilisScriptor [2016-12-14 01:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the credit. 

In about a week, I may have some time to look over the character and give you some honest feedback if you wish. 
If I do give feedback though, please keep in mind that it is only my opinion, and should not be taken as fact. Just an opinion. I will probably fix grammar and spelling issues if I review as well, solely for the purpose of making the sheet look clean and presentable to viewers. I can't help it, I'm just the type that really appreciates proper spelling and grammar.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

TerribilisScriptor In reply to SoloZerker [2016-12-14 16:29:31 +0000 UTC]

then PREPARE FOR HORRIBLE GRAMMAR because english is just my second language and not my mothertoungue.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to TerribilisScriptor [2016-12-14 21:43:25 +0000 UTC]

That's fine by me. 
So long as you're alright with me correcting spelling and grammar and won't take offense to it, it'll all be cool. 
You clearly have a good grasp on the language from what I can see, so it probably won't be as difficult as other bio sheet's I've looked through. ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

XeroTheDeathless In reply to ??? [2016-12-10 04:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Is that you in chatzy chatroom? It's me Xero

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to XeroTheDeathless [2016-12-11 04:04:19 +0000 UTC]

I haven't gone to any chatrooms at all for over 2 years. Especially here on dA.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

KoffingMugg In reply to ??? [2016-12-07 04:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man. I was planning to do a bio for a few of my OCs, but I didn't know how. This makes it a whole lot easier. 'Preciate it, and remember, U.R. Ahzum.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to KoffingMugg [2016-12-07 06:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. 

Glad I could help.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Minaya-Navi In reply to ??? [2016-11-25 14:33:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for this. I just finished my first character for my team and I have the next three to do. I plan to write and fanfiction with them.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to Minaya-Navi [2016-11-26 00:04:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. 

I'm continually trying to improve this bio sheet as well, so if you think of anything that could help it, I'd be happy to listen to opinions and ideas.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Wa7chface In reply to ??? [2016-11-01 18:46:24 +0000 UTC]

Why is Swordsmanship a stat in and of itself? Wouldn't it be more productive to have a martial arts/training section instead of having to place every skill on a vauge scale from 1 to 10?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to Wa7chface [2016-11-01 21:47:59 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps. 

What would you suggest as a possible solution to the vagueness? Could you give me a detailed example? 
The reason I used numbers is just to get a quick idea of a characters base skills. Granted, it's vague, but it gets a quick and simple idea across of where their skills in those fields lie. I won't deny that it has it's issues. 

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Wa7chface In reply to SoloZerker [2016-11-01 23:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Sure. I think tha, right after the weapons section that you could have the creator explain why their character chose their weapon. (or in my OCs case weapons.), talk about how they were trained, or even talk about their non-combative skill set. If you wanted to delve into strategy and tactics a section could be provided.

There could be a section below this where a creator describes their OCs fighting style. If they want to an aspiring author could describe a fight between their character and one from cannon, and the reasons why they one or lost. This could provide valuable feedback on weather or not their character is OP.

If you'd like I can draft a character sheet and send it to you via Email.

Edit: just had to fix my grammar.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to Wa7chface [2016-11-02 04:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like an interesting setup. I'd love to see a mock version of it to fully understand what you're getting at, just to be sure I'm not confusing things.

The describing a fight scene is an interesting idea, but we should also remember that bio sheets are already quite long. Outsourcing something like that to another document would probably be best, just to lessen the amount of already enormous text. An interesting idea, but perhaps a bit much for a simple bio sheet for a character.

( And you got all your grammar/spelling except for one . XD Sorry, just had to point out the irony. )

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Wa7chface In reply to SoloZerker [2016-11-02 06:41:27 +0000 UTC]

So close to perfection, only to realize that it is unattainable.

Where would you like me to send it?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to Wa7chface [2016-11-02 07:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Please send it to me via a note here on DeviantArt. It's simpler that way.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Wa7chface In reply to SoloZerker [2016-11-02 23:52:06 +0000 UTC]

Np. I'll need a day or two though.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to Wa7chface [2016-11-03 08:43:37 +0000 UTC]

No rush. 

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Ushia1994fangirl In reply to ??? [2016-10-23 04:52:17 +0000 UTC]

I've tried to make a RWBY OC for a long time, but never could find the right name ^^"

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to Ushia1994fangirl [2016-10-23 05:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Names are always the toughest part for a RWBY character, but that's because of the rules, mainly. 
Be sure to give it a lot of thought and make sure that it follows the rules and you'll be golden.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Ushia1994fangirl In reply to SoloZerker [2016-10-23 05:36:28 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks, I might have something; here's what I have Onyxia Racún (Onyx Raccoon)

What story it follows I don't know but its better than nothing ^^" 


👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to Ushia1994fangirl [2016-10-23 05:46:40 +0000 UTC]

It appears to follow the rules, so it seems like you're good to go. ^^
Have fun with the creation process. That's the most important part.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Ushia1994fangirl In reply to SoloZerker [2016-10-23 05:47:39 +0000 UTC]

I will

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Nightofstarryskies10 In reply to ??? [2016-10-07 23:05:05 +0000 UTC]

Used! Thanks!  RWBY OC Ingwer Brun Bio

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SoloZerker In reply to Nightofstarryskies10 [2016-10-08 01:15:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the Credit. I appreciate it.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Raikon-Z In reply to ??? [2016-09-04 21:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Hey SoloZerker, Thanks for the Character sheet, helped me so much. I posted my character profile on my Page, raikon-z.deviantart.com/art/RW…
I was wondering if you could give my character a review, so then I could make a more balanced character. I don't like when characters are overpowered, but often, OC's generally come out that way. If you could that would be much appreciated
Also im new to deviantart, so if there are any problems related to my account in general im sorry. Any one else willing to post reviews is also welcome!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1


<= Prev | | Next =>